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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Superb poem dear.. Truly awesome..u really hv a gift wit the words..!! Great work dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Aww Shabs...sowwie...me missing for so long on your threads...catching up one-by-one

Love that gleaming line muchly :))

Love
Bri
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
awesome poem

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
beautiful fatima!
i love happy poems...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
Really commendable!!!!!
Love your poem a lot.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
beautiful yaar
loved it
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Taking the essence of night,
She slips into her dreamy flight,
Slowly dusk turns into dawn, And she gleams like a newborn.

These are my fav lines from this poem... Beautifully written
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Posted: 14 years ago
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SO i see myself in the like list, and still can't remember when I read this before...

anyways, no praise enough admiring a good piece of writing! so here I am again =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is so lovely 😃 for some reason it brings back memories from when i went to the czech rep. last summer. when i was reading it, little pictures of the beautiful sunset there kept coming to my mind. its so simple that makes it easy to understand. but yet well written 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ everyone and madhupriyaguru, Bhawna_arti, mahakmev, Love_RM_MAYUR, ammuakhi, gopi06, kulsumd, bluedreamz953, Nirvrithi, love.mayurarti, -Kanky-, tasfia123, muskanp, bDgT, sariska_mnarti, zarfishan1983, TheWandmaker, dolphinUSA, spln, -afsha-, BhartiKhushi909, -BunnyGirl-, dmgmjht4ever, .Divya., Armu4eva,

thanx a lot guy for reading the poem, liking as well as commenting on it!
Glad you could relate to it and also it bought back memories of summer to some of you,
that was like a compliment as I was able to revive a time of your life!

I know I'm not commenting individually but its been real long and I'm ain't getting time to reply to everyone hence, a common thanks to all of you!

It really means a lot when someone reads your work and also likes it and can relate to it too !

Take Care,
Fatima

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