JPSYA FF|Hamesha & Forever|New upd pg 8,9

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Inspired by wasz, i decided to write something too. But before I start, let me introduce myself. I am Ananya Bhatia and am from Canada. I am a very big fan of siddharth shukla alias veer and an admirer of veesha and nihal. So, do read my writing and enjoy!

After the wedding:

Veer wakes up stretching his body; his eyes tired and face weak due to all the wedding preparations amd rasms. His face shrinks more with the absence of Ayesha in the room. He wished to see her first but no, she was not there. She was not in the washroom too.

Veer: (To himself) Yeh ayesha kahan chali gayyi itni subah subah! Argh!

He looks at the time and the clock shows 8:00 AM

He climbs down the stairs and looks for her everywhere but no sign of her. He expects her to be in nihal's room but to his astornishment, all he finds is nihal sleeping peacefully. It then strikes to his mind. He did not check the guest room, where she used to stay before their wedding.

He opens the door and finds her removing stuff from the wardrobe. Veer tiptoes from behing and hugs her, making her jerk.

Ayesha: Veer, tum ne toh mujhe dara diya.

Veer: sowwie

He tells in a very cute manner resting his face on ayesha's shoulders that ayesha's anger melts instantly.

Veer: Achcha bolo kya kar rahi ho?

Ayesha: Kuch nahi bas yeh kapde in wardrobes se nikaal rahi hoon. Tumhare room mein rakhne ke liye.

Veer: ab woh room sirf mera nahi, tumhara bhi hai, in short hamara hai. Mein help karoon?

Ayesha: yeah. Aao na. Upar waaley shelf mein joh bhi saaman hai na, woh nikaal ke bed pe rakh na.

Veer gets a heap of clothes, a couple of boxes and carry bags full of stuff. He placed them on the bed as per ayesha's inatructions. He finds ayesha busy folding her clothes. So, he grabs hold of one of the boxes and opens it. He gets surprised to see the things in that box. There were some cute pictures of ayesha with her friends, probably her college friends. She was looking cool.

Veer: Ayesha, idhar aao na!

Ayesha: Kya hua?

She comes closer and observes what veer is looking at and sits beside him.

Veer: Sorry yeh box open kar liya maine tumhare permission ke bagair. Lagta hai bohot saare personal cheezein hain.

Ayesha: Veer, ab tumhare saam ne kya personal aur secrets? Tum mere pati ho. Tumhe mere aur mere saare cheezon par adhikaar hai. Aur agar mein tumhare saath share nahi karoongi, toh aur kis ke saath share karoongi veer? Aaj se aise kabhi mat kehna. I love you.

Veer: i love you too.

Ayesha: mein batati hoon kaun kaun sa pic kab keecha hai.

The first pic was a single one. She was having a feather cut hair style with medium length; was wearing a pink T-shirt saying Princess along with white capri. She was looking completely different and cool and like a girly teen.

Ayesha: Yeh waala tab keecha jab mein apni college mein thi. Hum sab lonavela mein picnic ke liye gayye the.

Veer: Pata hai, tum na, yahan par bohot cute lag rahi ho. Kash mein uss waqt tumhare saath hota. Atleast mujhe tumhare gaal keenchne ka mauka toh milta.

Ayesha: oooo

Veer: oooo kya.

He filps the photo. The next one is a group photo. There were around 15 people but veer spotted ayesha immediately. He also noticed a hand on her shoulder and finds a guy half hugging ayesha. His face turns red with anger and jealousy and ayesha notices that and smirks to herself.

Ayesha: lagta hai kuch jal raha hai.

Veer: Yeh ladka kaun hai? Joh mere biwi ko itna chipak raha hai? Agar mein wahan hota na, uske facr par ek bada sa punch maarta.

Ayesha: chup ho jao veer. Woh mera best friend subhash hai. Hum dono bachpan se bohot close hai. Pata hai, uske mumma papa aur mere mom aur dad bhi friends the.

Veer: (murmuring but audible to ayesha) ek dhruv kaafi nahi kya, maidhan mein yeh so called best friend subhash khood pada!

Ayesha: veer, itna jal kyun rahe ho, mein toh sirf tumhari hoon na.

Veer: haan.. Par phir bhi.. Mujhe nahi achcha lagta.

Ayesha: aww so sweet. Tumhe yaad hai, tumsubhash se ek baar mill chuke ho. Yaad hai, jab tum aur mein shimla gaye the ek saath, usne humara gaadi roka aur mujhe bike pe mera ghar drop kiya. Yaad aaya.

Veer: haan. Haan. Yeh wohi ladka hai? Kitna badal gaya na.

Ayesha: haan. Woh toh hai.

Veer: ek baat bataoon ayesha, maine tumhe yeh baat pehle kabhie nahi kaha, jab tum subhash ke saath jaa rahi thi na, mujhe bilkul bhi achcha nahi laga. Aisa laga tha ki, yeh kyun aaya yahan par.

Ayesha: really

Veer: really

Ayesha: ab mein bataoon?

Veer: hmm.

Ayesha: mein subhash ke saat toh gayi thi lekin poore raaste mein tere baare mein hi sochti rahi. Mujhe pehli baar ehsaas hua tha ki tum kadoos nahi achche ho.

Veer: thanks for understanding mam.

Ayesha: you welcome sir.

Both of them have a hearty laugh at their own conversation.

To be continued.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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They see more pictures and veer gets to know about ayesha's past. He was really happy to see the chirpy, funky and crazy side of her. He felt she changed a lot in these years.

He even saw her childhood pics when she was a baby but stopped at one pic where she looked extremely adorable like an angel.

Ayesha: yeh mere papa ne keencha hai. It was when i was 18 days old.

Veer: Ayesha, pata hai yeh kaun hai?

He points towards the photo and looks at her dreamily.

Ayesha: ofcourse mein hoon. Kyun?

Veer: Yeh ek angel hai, jisse bhagwan ne mere liye aur nihal ke liye bheja tha. Yeh woh angel hai joh har waqt mujhe sambhalti hai, mujhe support karti hai, galat aur sahi mein farak dikhati hai, aur... Ata iss angel ka favourite dialogue kya hai?

Ayesha, who was lost in his eyes listening to him dreamily comes out of the trance..

Ayesha: kya?

Veer: veer! Koi aajayega!

Saying that, veer kissed on her cheek and runs to save his life.

Ayesha: veer! Tum mera mazak uda rahe ho.

Veer: (adding fuel) nahi toh mein sirf sach keh raha tha.

They run around the bed, couch and tables in the room and finally, veer trips and falls on the couch. Ayesha makes place beside him and stares at him with angry eyes.

Ayesha: veer, aaj mein tumhe chodoongi nahi.

Veer: mein bhi nahi chahta ki tum mujhe chodo.

Ayesha: veer.. Shararat band karo aur itne saare saman pade hue hai. Mujhe help karo.

Veer: chi. Tum kitni unromantic ho.

Ayesha: achcha! Toh kal raat kya kar rahe the tum?

Veer: Kal raat toh....

Ayesha: (pushing him away from her) ab chalo samaan ke baare mein socho. Agar mere samaan aaj nahi shift hue na, mein aaj raat yahin so jaoongi. Soch lo.

Veer: huh. Shaadi ho kar theek se ek din bhi nahi hua aur tum abhi se hi hukum chala rahi ho. Pata nahi aage kya hoga mera.

Ayesha: veer!

Veer: sorry sorry.

To be continued
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Veer and ayesha finally take all her belongings and place them in one corner of their room.

Ayesha: Uff. Finally ho gaya. Veer, mein jaa kar nihal ko utha ti hoon. Tab taq tum naha lo aur neeche aa jao. Breakfast keliye.

Veer: okay boss but uss se pehle mujhe kuch chahiye. Subah se nahi mila. Bilkul achcha nahi lag raha hai.

Ayesha: Veer...

She smiles and pecks his cheek and runs towards nihal's room.

NIHAL's ROOM

Ayesha: nihal, uth jao beta.. Nihal..

Nihal: good molning massi..

Ayesha: good morning nihal. Ab chalo. Go take your shower.

Nihal: okay.

Ayesha: aur haan! Achche se brush karna. Mein check karoongi tumhare daanth. Okay.

Nihal: oookay.

BREAKFAST TABLE:

Ayesha will be buttering the breads when veer comes and hugs her.

Veer: please dont react too much. And dont tell me ki tumhara saree kharab ho jayega. Agar kharab ho gayya na, badal dena.

Ayesha: Maine kaunsa mana kiya tumhe?

Ayesha winks at veer anf veer nuzzles her hair; both of them havin their time.

Ayesha: ab chalo. Baith jao. Nihal aata hi hoga.

Ayesha will serve veer parantha, curry, bread and butter.

Veer: Ayesha, itna sab kuch kab banaya tum ne? Kitne baje uthi?

Ayesha: 5 baje. Hamesha ki tarah.

Veer: thak nahi gayyi? Raat ko bohot der ho gayi na.

Ayesha: mujhe aadat hai veer. Hotel mein bhi double shifts karti thi. Aur ghar pe nihal ka kaam mein uthi rehti hoon. So, chalega.

Veer feels really sad to see her missing her sleep. He thinks, somehow, he is the one to be blamed. Because, he only gave her double shift job. He thinks how cruel he was. Nihal comes in the meanwhile.

Nihal: maassi...... chachu.....

Veer: nihal beta... Aajao. Chachu ke paas baito.

Ayesha: nihal, daanth dikhao. - good boy.

Nihal: massi parantha yummy hai.

Veer: yeah. Very tasty. Afterall, banaya kiss ne.. Meri biwi ne.

Nihal: nahi meri massi ne.

Veer: meri biwi.

Nihal: aap ke biwi se pehle meri massi thi woh. So, meri massi.

Veer: lekin ab woh meri biwi hai.

Nihal: lekin.. (before he continues, ayesha shouts)

Ayesha: yeh kya chacha bhatija subah subah lad rahe ho? Chup ho kar breakfast karo.

Veer: ayesha, ek aur parantha khao na?

Ayesha: nahi veer bas pet bhar gayya.

Veer: aise kaise pet bhar gayya? Tum ne sirf ek parantha khaya hai. Chalo koi baat nahi. Ek bread slice le lo.

Ayesha: nahi veer. Mein hamesha se aisa hi khati hoon.

Nihal: aur issi liye dhruv uncle kehte hai ki aap ko anemia hai.

Veer: kya? Tumhe anemia hai?

Ayesha: thoda sa veer. Par chalega.

Veer: nahi chalega. Ab se mein tere khane ka poora khayal rakhoonga. Arey, tum nihal ka aur mera itna khayal rakhti ho, tumhe khud ki khayal nahi? Aisa nahi chalega ayesha.

Ayesha stares at nihal for telling about her health.

Veer: ab nihal ko aise kya dekh rahi ho? Nihal, aap darna mat beta. Aap ki massi aap ko kuch nahi kahegi. Ab aap batayenge, aur kaunsi baat aap ke massi ne mujh se chupaya.

Ayesha: veer, mein tumse cheezein chupati hoon?

Veer: nahi, mere nazar aur kaan unn par padne nahi deti. Tumhe anemia hai aur tumne mujhe bataya taq nahi.

Ayesha: veer, mujhe 6 saalon se anemia hai. Aur humare beech mein woh topic kabhie nahi aayi. So, maine bataya nahi.

Veer: i promise you ayesha-mein tumhara poora khayal rakhoonga. Kuch nahi hone doonga tumhe aur nihal
Ko.

Nihal: i love you chachu.
Ayesha: and i love you too.
Veer: i love you both soooo much.

They have a family hug.

Veer: so, aaj ka plan kya hai?

Nihal: mein soni ke ghar jaa raha hoon. Hum dono khelenge. Please chachu.

Veer: okay. Chale jaana. Par driver ko apne paas rakhna. Aur massi ka extra mobile leke jao.

Nihal: okay chachu. Bye massi. Bye chachu.

Veer: aur aap ka program kya hai madam?

Ayesha: koi program wogram nahi hai. Mere saman wardrobe mein rakhna hai. Aur shaadi ke bohot saare gifts hai. Saare uss hall mein pade hai. Unko theek karna hai. Shaam ko saare teen baje maine hotel se do house keepers ko bulaya. Wo aakar ghar theek karenge.

Veer: itna saara kaam. Chalo meri toh hotel se chutti hai. Mein bhi tumhara help karta hoon.

Ayesha: ok.

VeeSha work together for 3 long hours and finally fall down on their bed for some rest.

Ayesha: (calling to nihal) hello nihal, tum theek se pohonch gayye na.

Nihal: haan massi.

Ayesha: khana kha liya?

Nihal: yuppie.

Ayesha: chalo khelo. Mein baad mein phone karti hoon.

She finds veer with his eyes closed. She moved closer to him amd brushed his hair with her fingers. He opens his eyes and they have an eyelock.

Ayesha(asking softly) veer aaj luch mein kya chahiye?

Veer: dal chawal khane ka mann kar raha hai.

Ayesha: theek hai. Mein luch bana kar aati hoon.

Veer: mein tumhara help karoon?

Ayesha: yeh aaj kya hogayya tumhe? Tum saare kaam karna chahte ho mere saath?

Veer: kuch nahi. Bas yunhi.

Ayesha: Haha. Chalo.

VeeSha cook lunch together with veer getting naughty now and then. They eat from the same plate feeding eachother. This time, not on the dinning table but on the swing in the garden. They have a great time together.

To be continued....

Adding more of veesha in the starting because, all these days, we didnt have their dose. So.. And as the story progresses, more happening will come.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I like it
You are a very good writer
The scenes are very enjoyable
VeeSha scenes are so nice

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its great Ananya, .......please continue , I just loved the Veesha scenes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its luvly you write so gud please continue i luv the veer aisha scenes
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Veer takes a small nap in the hall, while ayesha sets the kitchen clean. She finds veer sleeping and. Sits beside him and stares and him lovingly. Verr opens his eyes as he feels ayesha near him.

Ayesha: neend aa rahi hai?

Veer: hmm. Lekin sirf thoda sa. Chalo.. Balcony mein chalte hai thodi der ke liye.

They sit on the couch in the balcony facing the garden and the fountain. It is a pleasant day with cool breeze and cloudy weather. Ayesha rests her head on veer's shoulder and veer on ayesha's.

Ayesha: veer, mein kuch maangoon?

Veer: yeh bhi koi poochne waali baat hai?

Ayesha: veer, mein soch rahi thi ki, tum, mein aur nihal do teen dinon ke liye shimla jaaye. Veer, ghar mein rehte hue 7 saal ho gaye hai. Pichle baar jab gayyi thi, sirf dhai ganton ke liye rukhi thi.. Ghar jaane ka mann kar raha hai.

Veer: hum zaroor jaayenge ayesha. Infact, hum kal subah flight ke liye niklenge. Okay.

Ayesha hugs him tightly conveying thanks.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Small part updated. More coming up tomorrow,
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Posted: 14 years ago
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they going to shimla again👏⭐️😃 veer aisha hopeing spend sweet time this time now they are wedded
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ananya welcome to the forum of jpsya.your fanfiction is superb.its like watching jpsya.i can wait for veesha and nihal going to shimla again.

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