Love, Rage And Fury:Part 10 A & B pg 63 apr1!

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LOVE RAGE AND FURY

Hi all wonderful people out there. I am Muskaan. I m new to this forum n infact this site. My many frnds use this n write their ffs here.

So I thought to give it a try.

HOPE u all like it.

Character Sketch.

Khurana's

MAAN SINGH KHURANA

The most arrogant, stubborn, and wealthy person of Delhi. He is rich, spoilt and very hard person. He doesn't have any feelings for strangers. He is helpful at times but he has a condition in everything. He knows how to get his way out. He is the person who knows how to deal with every kind of person. He gets what he wants, even if it costs his level best to try or bribe or blackmail. He is the most powerful person present as of now. There is not a single person who can stop Maan Singh Khurana, the famous MSK from doing what he wants to. Every girl drools over him and want themselves to be his wife. He has a little grey shade in his personality. But as someone said " Bad guys make love exciting where as simple guys make it bore." But he is not a bad guy, he was a very nice person, a happy go lucky one, but an incident which took place, changed everything forever''

VANRAJ SINGH KHURANA

The famous industrialist and a top businessman of the year 2010. He is famous for his tricky behavior. He has an unbelievable ability to convince people to do something they don't want to. But at home he is a typical father, who worries for his one and only son. In work his son is the best, he is proud of him. Even after being businessman of the year he is known as MSK's dad. But he worries about him that due to his harsh behavior no girl would agree to marry him. But he trusted his convincing powers. He can convince Maan for business deals and contracts but, but he can hardly convince him for any girl after that incident''

SAVITRI DEVI KHURANA

Maan's grandma. She is very nice, down to earth and very humble. She is very protective for her family. She is a modern grandma. She joins offices sometimes. She even scolds Maan for things. If he becomes late for dinner due to a meeting, she has a right and full courage to scold Maan. She is the only weak point of Maan till now. She has an asthma problem which she takes full advantage of, as if Maan disagrees to her for something, she puts her hand on her heart and breaths heavily, that scares Maan and he agrees for everything. Maan calls her Dadima. In a tragic incident of life Maan lost his mom and Savitri Devi lost her bahu, who she loved more than a daughter. This made her asthma problem rise.

Handa's

GEET HANDA

Geet is a happy, lively, fun loving girl who hails from a small town in Punjab. She belongs to a close-knit, traditionalist family which upholds honor, respect and dignity. Geet comes across as a sweet, naughty, spirited girl who is innocent when it comes to the matters of the heart. Not only is she beautiful, caring, thoughtful and sensitive but she loves to annoy people. She is determined as well as strong. She has a heart of gold but has a knack of getting into trouble often. She is being raised with full affection and love. That's why she is very playful and naughty. She plays pranks on everyone, her friends and family. She went to Delhi for further studies and a job. Everyone was against it as they loved her too much and wanted to save her from the cruel world. They knew being a girl she might face more problems in compared to a boy.

MOHINDERLAL AND RANO HANDA

They are the parents of geet. They love her too much. She is the apple of their eye. They strictly didn't wanted to let geet go away from them and do a job. They have always seen her infront of them, when she took birth, she went to school, she passed her school and now she is going to do a job but not in Punjab, in Delhi instead. Geet emotionally blackmailed them and made them agree to let her go.

BRIJJ HANDA

Geet's caring and loving brother. He loves her a lot. He is very much protective about her, seeing the bad guys of Punjab. When she was in school he didn't even let a single guy roam around her. When a guy comes near her he has to face brijj first. Once geet complained about a guy creating problems to her, next day that boy apologized geet with his one leg and one hand broken. He is not married. Only geet knows how to calm him down.

PART ONE

The clock banged and told everyone in the office that its 10 o clock. Everyone saw it horrified as it showed a beast instead of the time. Everyone checked each others cloths, and straightened themselves. This was his effect, as A guy who didn't tie his shoe less nicely, was fired last week.

The foot steps were to be heard, they were fast and anyone can tell that they were coming closer, more closer, finally the man came in sight, black shiny shoes, grey narrow jeans, light grey half-sleeved shirt till his elbow, and a vest coat and not to mention a Rolex watch in his hand, hung little loose.

The one and only MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

He came and stood infront of a girl who was not so smart but yet she looked okay. He said "come to my cabin with the file!" saying this Maan went in hs cabin which was highly spacious and had no colors just black and metallic.

He sat on his chair and heard a knock. "come in!" he said.

The same girl entered bare handed. He saw her hands and when his eye could not spot the file, he immediately said "get out!!"

The girl got nervous and started to speak. "actually s.sir, there was a we.wedding in my house. That's why-- "

Maan cut the sentence and said "was it your wedding!?"

The girl stared a sec and answered "no not m.mine. but my bro--"

"who are u??" maan said coldly.

"huh? Um'a'" she got confused.

"rita!!!" maan roared. Everyone outside got excited to know what was going inside.

Maan again shouted "FOR GOD'S SAKE, ur rita!! Remember?? Itna to janti ho na ke ye bhi bhul gayi?? Tum meri secretary ho!! Aur tumhe ye maloom hona chahiye ke maan singh khurana koi bahane nahi sunta. I don't want any excuses. U ARE FIRED!! U can go and celebrate the wedding whole ur life now.!!" Maan said and the girl started to go away.

After listening the conversation taking place inside a nice and cute looking guy who was the accountant said "2 down in a week! Maan sir fired 2 persons this week."

"this is nothing, last week he fired 4 persons" said a girl with a burger in the hand.

"common pinky. Scores go up and down." Said the guy.

"ohh adi sir actually do u remember maan asked u to complete last year's accounts" adi remembered and left to complete as if he dint give the file, he might also get fired!

After a while an elderly person entered. Everyone wished him good morning but he felt something awkward. He was maan's dad and he was totally different from him at work. He has a good relation with everyone who work with him. But adi and pinky were the one who he liked the most. He encouraged adi's comments on things by laughing at them. And he also bought pinky stuff to eat as a bribe to know maan's news.

He called adi in his room.

"may I come in sir?" asked adi.

"yeah yeah come in son." Said vanraj, maan's dad. "anything wrong??" he asked.

"one more down sir." said adi.

"who"

"the secretary."

"ohh god. Bechari. She was nice." He said pitying the poor girl.

"sir not only nice she was neice also. Your frnd's neice." Adi reminded.

"ohh. Really?? Ah! Forget it! The real problem is to find the another secretary."

"sir we are expert in it! We do it every week now. It seems no one sticks more than a week!" adi commented and vanraj laughed.

Then vanraj called maan to come in his cabin.

Maan entered like a storm.

"hi dad!" said maan.

"adi told me u fired rita too."

"yes I gave her a file to complete by today and she was busy in other things."

"ohh. I will announce the vacancies. And take the interview tomorrow? Okay?"

"okay but tomorrow I will Take the interviews!"

"poor people!" commented adi under hi breath and vanraj smiled seeing him.

"adi u said something??" maan questioned adi.

"n.no nothing s.sir" said adi stammering.

With that maan stormed off and adi also went back to work.

'

A girl opened her eyes in the golden temple. She had a white suit on. And had her head covered with her duppatta. She prayed for her family, her mom dad, and brother.

"babaji! I m starting a new life from now. I m going to Delhi. For a job and my further studies. Help me and guide, to know what is right and what is wrong." She prayed.

As she prayed an elderly man shouted from behind "geet putter!! Be quick or else u will loose the bus!!!"

The girl ran on her bare feet. She quickly reached the main gate and took the blessings of her parents and hugged her brother "bye veerji!"

"oyee if any bloody raccoon problems you just tell me. Ok??" said brijj.

"ok veerji." She smiled again and stepped in the bus. After waving hands she finally started her new journey.

Geet reached Delhi. She was more than happy to see her dream destination arrive. She quickly got down the bus at the bus stop and took her bag with her. She reached a shop and asked where Karol bagh was. When she was asking someone quickly blindfolded her eyes with hands. Geet turned smiling and hugged the person. The person was adi, her cousin. Adi hugged her and then took her luggage with him in his bike.

He told her that he lives here alone so it won't be nice for geet to stay with him as people may talk. So he took her a frnd's house where she will be a paying guest.

The frnd was no one but pinky. He took her there. Pinky was the only child of her parents and she had a big house so she insisted adi to let geet be her PG. she will also have a company.

Next day

Geet had a very nice sleep as she was dead tired by the whole-day-bus-trip. She rested her head on a sofa in her room and saw pinky coming from a window. She opened the door and pinky told her about her first interview in khurana constructions. Geet was not sure to attend or not as she was not ready but yet she wanted to give it a try.

She got ready and went KC.

There was a huge crowd for the job. Geet hardly trusted that she will be selected. Then adi arrived with the full on smile.

"I don't think I will be selected!" said geet seeing the crowd.

"geet, maan sir will take ur interview! He will ask those questions which you don't even think about." Pinky said.

"ohh god!" geet got little worried.

"geet don't worry! Everything will b fine. If u don't get this one, we will try somewhere else." Said adi.

By then geet saw the construction of the office and decoration and noted down some points in her mind. Then MSK arrived. Everything seemed moving slow. Adi-pinky disappeared. Then maan with his super hot walk entered the office and crossed geet. She saw him and a sudden air touched her face and made her hairs flow.

Everyone, who came for the job, seemed to be disappointed. One of the girls even cried. This made geet super nervous.

Then her turn arrived. The lady called her name and geet went in. she opened the door and asked "may I come in sir?" softly.

Maan looked over to her and just stared. Se again asked "may I come in?" then maan answered "yes" and she got in.

Maan's dad was also there. Geet seated and waited for someone to start.

"what's ur name??" maan asked coldly.

"geet handa."

"where do u live?"

"I basically belong to Punjab but I m here to work."

"how u came here??"

"by bus." She was answering every answer confidently so maan tricked her.

"what was bus's number??" he asked.

"sorry!?" geet said.

"I asked what the bus's number you came here with was." Maan said angrily.

"PJ 03 C 6521" geet answered and this impressed vanraj, while maan got little angry, he dint knew why.

"why do u expect a job here??" maan said.

"because u only told there is a vacancy!" geet told and again vanraj impressed and maan angry.

"ok miss tell me on which floor u r??"

"I think its white tile's" geet said seeing down. And this really cracked vanraj up and he laughed. Maan glared at him too and he sat straight.

"since u were out for a long time what did u notice about the color of our office??"

"you don't like colors that's why the walls are all white and furniture are black!" that really angered maan he gritted his teeth.

"you have a good vision I must say geet" said vanraj with a smile.

"what are ur hobbies??" asked maan.

Geet knew there is something behind it so she thought and answered "listening music."

"ohh music!! Huh?? Sing a song then!" maan said with a smirk. Thinking that now geet is trapped.

"I told 'listening' music, not singing."

This was the limit! Maan was now furious. She had an answer to everything. Bloody everything!!

He again tricked.

"What was the number of the bus u told?" he asked.

"PJ 04 A 7865". Geet said and maan had a winning smile.

"but u said PJ 03 C 6521"

"silly questions, silly answers!" geet said and smiled.

"thanks u may go." Maan said and showed her the gate.

COMING UP-

Geet and maan clash again but in the khurana palace!

THAT'S ALL FOR NOW'

Do let me know.

Comments appreciated!

Muskaan.






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INDEX

Character sketch : Page 1

Part 1 : Page 1

Part 2 : Page 5

Part 3 : Page 8

Part 4 : Page 12

Part 5 : Page 15

Part 6 : Page 19

Part 7 : Page 23

Part 8 : Page 34

Part 9 : Page 56

Part 10 : Page 63




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