Aditya-Priya OS- Milenge Milenge-NoteOnPg12

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Hola Hola My Kaminis n Behooodis ๐Ÿคฃ * ahahahah Amazin Welcome na ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿคฃ *

this is My 1st Aditya - Priya OS๐Ÿ˜ณ well im not a Writter buh till now wrote 2 OS's 1 on Maneet n 1 on AviTa n Got really good Come backs๐Ÿ˜ณ so Decided to Write one OS on Aditya Priya Monday scene๐Ÿ˜ณ

Well it can be borin ๐Ÿคฃ buh please Do Comment n Lemme knw๐Ÿ˜ณ

@My Kamini's n Behoodis ( u knw ur self ๐Ÿ˜† dont u ๐Ÿ˜† ) u all betta leave ur LONG comment ๐Ÿคฃ or else Get ready to taste my chapal ๐Ÿคฃ
 
heheh so Enough of my Bhak Bhak ๐Ÿ˜†
 
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Kay so The title name was inspired by this ๐Ÿ˜†
 
Continue of this Scene๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
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Aditya Holds Priya's Hand n takes her towards his Car. He drove her to the Dharmshala. As they reached, Priya Opens The Door n is About to get out the car but Aditya Pulls her in Again "Ek Baat Sun Le Chori ! Yeh ChavaniChap saya Ki Tara tumhare Peeche Rahega ! Toh Phir Se Aisi Bewakoofi Wale Arkat Mat Karna..." Said Aditya Lookin into Priyas eyes. Priya struggles to let go her hand "Mera Haath Choro Aur Mujhe Jane Do" Said Priya. "Na Chori ! Pehle Kasam ka ke tu phir se mujhse door jane ki koshish Nahin Karoge" Said Aditya "Kah Kasam Warna aise hi pakra rahonga tera haath ๐Ÿ˜‰ " continued Aditya. "Bakwaaas Band Karo Aur Mujhe Jane Do Warna Mein Chilaongi" said Priya. "Chilao! ๐Ÿ˜‰ " "Dekho .. Tum Kya Chahte ho mujhse ..." Said Priya. "Pyaar!..." Replied Aditya, *Yeh Ishq Hai Ishq Hai Aur Kuch Bhi Nahin BG*. Priya lost in his eyes n says "Tum Jante Kya Ho mere Bari Mein !... Aur Itna Sab Hogaya Kal Raat Aur Tum Phir bhi..." "Mare Ko kal Raat gussa Toh Aaya! Lekhin Tujh Par nahin ! uss joru ke ghulam par aya!... Dil Toh Charaha te ek lagon Usse ! Lekhin Woh Mara Nahin ! tara gunegar hai!" Said Aditya, "Kya Karti Mein ... Kis Kis Ka Moo Band Karti !" cried Priya.  "tumhara Problem Pata hai Kya Hai ? Tum Sirf Bura Hi Dekhte Ho Apne Ap mein!... Mare Nazar se Dekho Toh Pata ChaleGa.." Said Aditya Wid BackGround Music....

Lafzon mein nahin hota jo bhayan
 
Ankhon ne teri, yeh kya keh diya...
 
Kyun mujh par tera Hakh Lage
 
Deewano si Halat Lage
 
Hai Saare zamane se juda
 
Tu Khwab hai Ya Saach Kya Pata
 
Kya Yahi Baas Yahi Hoti Hai Deewangi
 
Yeh Ishq Hai Ishq Hai Aur Kuch Bhi Nahin
 
Yeh Ishq Hai Ishq Hai Aur Kuch Bhi Nahin
 
Yeh Ishq Hai Ishq Hai Aur Kuch Bhi Nahin
 
Yeh Ishq Hai Ishq Hai Aur Kuch Bhi Nahin
"Jaane Do Mujhe.." said Priya, "Theeke! Bas Ek Baar Keh De Ke Tu Phir Se Mare Se Juda Hone Ki Nahin Socho Ge.." Said Aditya. Priya is thinkin how to ignore him, buh Finally Says "Theeke ! Nahin Sochoongi..." Aditya is on 7th Cloud After Hearin this n Let Go her hand n says "Ayeee ! Chal Jaane Diya ๐Ÿ˜‰" n he let her go! Priya leaves the car and is about to Go Buh Aditya stops her By sayin "Acha Suno..." Priya Turns Around, n He smiles n Says "Kuch Nahin ๐Ÿ˜‰" Priya turns Around n walks Away.

Aditya Stands there for long. On other Hand, Priya's Dad is All worried n Cries "I dont Know Meri Beti Kis Halat mein kahan hogi!" "Papa ! did ko kuch nahin Hoga ! Aditya Bhaiya ne Abhi Phone Kiya aur Kaha Ke Woh Did ko Lekhar Aarai Hain.." Said Chinu, "Toh Abhi Tak Aye Kyun Nahin ..." Cries her father n in the mean time they hear "PAPA" n Priya's dad turns Around n Shouts "Priyaaaa!" Runs To her. "Beta Yeh Sab Kya Hai !? What is this?" shows her the letter, "Papa mujhe Maaf Kar dijiye! Mein Tori Batak Gaye Thi... Ab Phir se Yeh Galti nahin karoongi.." she Cries n Mean Time Aditya Enters n Says "Haan Toh Soch Kar Toh Dekho Aise Karne Ki" Priya's Dad walks to him n Folds his Hands to him And Says "Beta Thnk You !! Aaj Tum Nahin Hote Toh..." Aditya Holds his Hand and Says "Uncle Ji yeh Ap Kya Kar rahe ho! Mujhe sharminda maat kijiye!.. Yeh Sab Mera Farz tha..." n Looks @ Priya, "Aur Ab Toh yeh Mera Haak Hai .." he says lookin @ Priya. "Kya Matlab? What do u Mean?" Asks Priya;s dad. "Kuch Nahin Uncle... Ab Hum Chaltein Hain... Aur... Ab Baut Jaldi Mulaqaat Hogi.." he looks at Priya n Priya looks away. "Chaltein hain..." he is About to Leave buh all over sudden Priya Stops her saying "suniye..." Aditya Stops n Turns Around... "Thanks" she said n these Words Made him So Happy! .... "Woh Kya Kehte hain... Mention not ๐Ÿ˜‰" Aditya is so Happy That Finally the word he was waiting for and Leaves.

*At Night*

Mein Tare Saath Biha Rachaonga ... Maang Baronga Tera....The Time She Reached home, She has been thinkin About Aditya n His Words. "Kyun ! Kyun mein uss insaan ko nahin bhul Sakti !! Mujhe Koi Haak Nahin Hai Phir Se Kissi Se Pyaar karne Ka ! Aur Jaanta Kya hai woh Mere Bari Mein !? KUCH NAHIN!! Mujhe Uss se Door Jana Hoga! Yahi Acha Hoga Hum Dono Ke Liye! ... Haan Yahi Theek hai ! mujhe Jaana Hoga! Kal Subha Hote Hi Hum Yahan Se Chale jayenge!" said Priya n tried sleeping but when she tried to Close her eyes, onli thing she saw was ADITYA! ... Maybe cuz the 1 she is trying to run away as awready captured her thaughts! "Yeh Mujhe Kya hogaya! Kyun Mein Sirf uske Bari Mein Soch Rahi Hoon!?" she turns around n struggles to sleep!.

*Next Morning*

Priya Packing Her, her father n Chinoos Stuff, and while Seein this Priya's dad asks "Arre Beta What r you Doin ? Why u Packing our Saman?" he asked, "Woh Papa hum yahan darshan Karne Aye te na ! aur Darshan hogaya... Ab Hamein Yahan se jana chaiye..."Said Priya. "Lekhin Didi..." Said Chinoo buh Priya's Dad stopped him, "Theeke Beta if u insist...Hum Abhu Ready hoke Coming" said priya's dad n Walks Away.

Priya in her thaughts "ab humein Kaise Bhi karke Jald se jald yahan se nikalna hoga! Aditya ke yahan Anne se Pehle!... Hamein Unse Door Jana Hoga" n while she was thinkin this, there was a tear drop in her eyes... she wipes her tears n is thinkin "Yeh Ansoo? Yeh Ansoo Kisliye....?" This Was the Tear of pain, tear of Separation ! these tears Proved Aditya's Magic has worked on priya but she is just not ready to Accept it!

Priya and her family leave for the bus station, where on Other Hand Adi leaves his house with his family ! buh doesn't tell thm where he is Takin Them... buh on the way their Car has ditched him ๐Ÿ˜† n they waiting for a mechanic. Aditya all excited n juust cantcontrol ! as he wants to go to his Priya ASAP! N get her buh seems like destiny isn't wid him at the moment !

*on the bus*

Priya all lost in her thaughts *flashback ALL AdiYa scenes* "kya mein Sahi Kar rahi hoon? Aman Ka Saaza Mein isse Kyun De rahi Hoon?... Lekhin Mein Uski Laikh Nahin Hoon.. aur yeh woh Khud Samaj Haye ga ..." where all over sudden she looks out side of the window n sees Aditya standing outside, buh she hides as she doesnt want him to see her buh Too late as Aditya Saw her n is shocked and starts Running After the bus, Gaurav n Devyani r shocked seeing him running after the Bus.

Aditya Misses the bus n stood there Shattered! *Flash Backs All AdiYa scenes* Mein Tare Kho Apne apse dorr jane nahin Doonga Were running in his ears n baught tears in his eyes! "Nahin ! Nahin ! usne Vaada Kiya ! mujhse Door Nahin Jayegi ! Nahin !" as he said these words, he was in full tears!

"PRIYAAAAAAA" he breaks down and cries his Heart Out ! "Nahin Mein Apne Pehle Pyaar ko aise Nahin Jane Doonga... Chori Ko Mare Paas Ana Hi Hoga!" he said "kismat Mere Saath Aisa Khel Nahin khel Sakta! Tare ko ! Hamein Phir Se Milana Hoga! Samjha!! Milana Hoga!!" he cried. "Tujhe Mare Pass Aana hoga! Mara Dil Janta Hai Ke Tu Bhi Mare Se Pyaar Karte ho! ... Kismat hi Mare ko Tare se Milaye ga! Aur Milwana Hi Hoga" he cried.

 

Will the Destiny get Aditya & Priya close? Will they ever Meet Again?

-The End
Edited by -Cwezy_Manoola- - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wah Ji Wah Chori tari himmat ki to

 
Dad deni paregi bohat bariya hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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manu, chawanichap!!!!!!

this is fantastic..!!!!

huggieessss๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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rally nice and how u explain very well. 
 please don't make adi cry b. i think that something will happen and the bus will stop yaar
  and i think that i have talk enough. 
 but u did great job. 
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW!
 
*Pree throws away her chappal and lamp and hugs manal hard*
 
Oye behoodi... dil khush kar ditta.... it was worth the wait!!!
 
But the only thing i didn't like was a teary eyed Adi... doesn't suit his image man!!!
 
The car scene was mast... "Bas Ek Baar Keh De Ke Tu Phir Se Mare Se Juda Hone Ki Nahin Socho Ge.." lol... just went fida over imagining it in his urban pseudo haryanvi!!!
 
"Dekho .. Tum Kya Chahte ho mujhse ..." Said Priya. "Pyaar!..." Replied Aditya. This one was THE best.... ๐Ÿ˜
 
and Adi's dialogue "Aur Ab Toh yeh Mera Haak Hai .." this cracked me up big times!!!  ๐Ÿ˜†
 
Good work chori... good work!
 
Ab jaldi se is OS ka next part likh...
 
fast fast continue it!!!
 
Luv,
Pree!
 
P.S. it's 'Harkatein' not 'Arkatein'! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Edited by PreeyaKSharma - 13 years ago
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"Dekho .. Tum Kya Chahte ho mujhse ..." Said Priya. "Pyaar!..." Replied Aditya....     AYEeee HAYEeee๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
 
"Thanks" she said n these Words Made him So Happy! .... "Woh Kya Kehte hain... Mention not ๐Ÿ˜‰" Aditya is so Happy That Finally the word he was waiting for and Leaves
Woooo finally she said thanks FINALYY ๐Ÿ˜†felt good to read it in ur OS but wait ONEE SHOT๐Ÿ˜ก NOOO you will HAVE to continuee!! you damn good at this..you should really continue and also write more one shots ..this was awsomee๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Originally posted by: aesa

Wah Ji Wah Chori tari himmat ki to

 
Dad deni paregi bohat bariya hai

Thnkoo Ji Thnkoo ๐Ÿค— Glad u Liked it ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Originally posted by: amnaM

manu, chawanichap!!!!!!


this is fantastic..!!!!

huggieessss๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

hhheheheheh had to use 'Chavanichap' ๐Ÿ˜†
thnks Alot ๐Ÿค— Glad u Liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Originally posted by: taman07

rally nice and how u explain very well. 

 please don't make adi cry b. i think that something will happen and the bus will stop yaar
  and i think that i have talk enough. 
 but u did great job. 

thnks alot ๐Ÿค— So Glad u Liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ
n heheheheh me Tora Behooda Person actually BIG Behooda ๐Ÿคฃ As i Love it when the Leads cry ๐Ÿคฃ
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this is awesome..you have really nice writting skills..:) too good...:)!!