Aditya-Priya OS- Milenge Milenge-NoteOnPg12 - Page 2

Originally posted by: PreeyaKSharma

WOW! Hehehhehe Glad its WOOW thn a YUCK 🤣

*Pree throws away her chappal and lamp and hugs manal hard* Yipppe 🤣 *Manal Runs Around in Happiness tht she didnt Ended up in hosp 🤣 *

Oye behoodi... dil khush kar ditta.... it was worth the wait!!! Awwww Thnks Alot 🤗

But the only thing i didn't like was a teary eyed Adi... doesn't suit his image man!!! Heheheheh U Knw me na 🤣 I Love it when The Leads cry 🤣 n I Reallly Wanna See Adi Cry too 🤣

The car scene was mast... "Bas Ek Baar Keh De Ke Tu Phir Se Mare Se Juda Hone Ki Nahin Socho Ge.." lol... just went fida over imagining it in his urban pseudo haryanvi!!! Heheheheh Me Actually want sumfin like this 😆 it will be Funny n Amazin 🤣

"Dekho .. Tum Kya Chahte ho mujhse ..." Said Priya. "Pyaar!..." Replied Aditya. This one was THE best.... 😍 Awww 🤗 glad u liked it !! heheheheh This is Wah I Actually wanna hear😳

and Adi's dialogue "Aur Ab Toh yeh Mera Haak Hai .." this cracked me up big times!!! 😆Hehehheheheheheheh we knw wah a Behoooda he is 🤣 so Im sure he'll End up sayin Sumfin Behooda Like this 🤣

Good work chori... good work! thnks 🤗

Ab jaldi se is OS ka next part likh...Hehehheeh I'll See😆 im too lazy to Write 😆

fast fast continue it!!!

Luv,

Pree!

P.S. it's 'Harkatein' not 'Arkatein'! 😉Hahahahah Wat eva 🤣 u Understood na 🤣

Originally posted by: Moonlight-Rose

"Dekho .. Tum Kya Chahte ho mujhse ..." Said Priya. "Pyaar!..." Replied Aditya.... AYEeee HAYEeee😍😍 "Thanks" she said n these Words Made him So Happy! .... "Woh Kya Kehte hain... Mention not 😉" Aditya is so Happy That Finally the word he was waiting for and Leaves

Woooo finally she said thanks FINALYY 😆felt good to read it in ur OS but wait ONEE SHOT😡 NOOO you will HAVE to continuee!! you damn good at this..you should really continue and also write more one shots ..this was awsomee👏👍🏼

Originally posted by: julz

this is awesome..you have really nice writting skills..:) too good...:)!!

Originally posted by: choco_pie92

chori...tu ne toh sach mein kamal kar di...

kya baat hai

par yeh judai lambi judai na ho toh hi accha hai....

awesome one shot..u can continue dis u knw :P

write more

love

debadrita

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

OmG Debzi 🤗 Thnks Alot 🤗 Glad u Liked It 🤗 hehheheh ya i hope this judai will be short 😉 or We can say tht may be our ChavaniChap will Catch the Bus 😉 Who knws 😆

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

OmG Debzi 🤗 Thnks Alot 🤗 Glad u Liked It 🤗 hehheheh ya i hope this judai will be short 😉 or We can say tht may be our ChavaniChap will Catch the Bus 😉 Who knws 😆

Originally posted by: PreeyaKSharma

manal tere muh me ghee shakkar (or better choco-chip pie!) 😉

hope our CC cat ches the bus!

Originally posted by: PreeyaKSharma

manal tere muh me ghee shakkar (or better choco-chip pie!) 😉

hope our CC cat ches the bus!

Originally posted by: choco_pie92

thare story mein toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai...par serial mein pata nahin...rab jane kya hoga...chawannichap pe toh pura bharosa hai maara ki woh chori ko jane nahi dega aur diya bhi toh wapas dhoond lega :P