Aditya-Priya OS- Milenge Milenge-NoteOnPg12 - Page 4

Originally posted by: priyankumupal

Yaar....this was freaking awesome....when it ended....all i could say was....i want more....please continue soon....i want to see what Adi will do now....it felt like i was watching the show.....too good....please continue.

Originally posted by: aesa

"Yeh Mujhe Kya hogaya! Kyun Mein Sirf uske Bari Mein Soch Rahi Hoon

hogya hai muje pyar nahi hona tha

par hogya hai mujepyar

abhi mene pura update para bohat hi pyra hai

Originally posted by: Amrinag

LOVED it!

u should write an ff on the same.

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

Hey Amzi *me will Call ya this * 🤗 Thnks Alot 🤗 hehhehee please 🤣 I suck at writtin FF's 🤣

buh will try writtin more OS's 😉 🤗

Originally posted by: Amrinag

Looking forward to the OS's.

Amzi😃

Originally posted by: .Angel

I haven't ready it but judging from others comments I'm gonna say wow wow Amazing hun👏👏👏👏


I'm gonna come back when I'm less busy to fully read it and comment too sweetie😃

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

well im not a Writter buh till now wrote 2 OS's 1 on Maneet n 1 on AviTa n Got really good Come backs😳 so Decided to Write one OS on Aditya Priya Monday scene😳

yea, u r not a writer, u r a behoodi who can write 🤣

Well it can be borin 🤣 buh please Do Comment n Lemme knw😳

oh yeah , whatever u write is always sooooo boring, ask the gang 🤣

@My Kamini's n Behoodis ( u knw ur self 😆 dont u 😆 ) u all betta leave ur LONG comment 🤣 or else Get ready to taste my chapal 🤣

now since I'm giving a good comment, in return I get dreams of Ian and u get Taylor, no sorry, Nishant, oh no no, of Adi 😆 😆 😆

heheh so Enough of my Bhak Bhak 😆

yeah, enough is enough 😡 😆

Aditya Holds Priya's Hand n takes her towards his Car.

chal behoodi, chal 😆

He drove her to the Dharmshala. As they reached, Priya Opens The Door n is About to get out the car but Aditya Pulls her in Again

abe muft mein leke nahi aaya hu, paise de 🤣

"Ek Baat Sun Le Chori ! Yeh ChavaniChap saya Ki Tara tumhare Peeche Rahega ! Toh Phir Se Aisi Bewakoofi Wale Arkat Mat Karna..." Said Aditya Lookin into Priyas eyes. Priya struggles to let go her hand "Mera Haath Choro Aur Mujhe Jane Do" Said Priya.

Jane do, mujhe TV dekhna hai 🤣

"Na Chori ! Pehle Kasam ka ke tu phir se mujhse door jane ki koshish Nahin Karoge" Said Aditya "Kah Kasam Warna aise hi pakra rahonga tera haath 😉 " continued Aditya.

no problem, main TV dekhti hu, tum mujhe dekho 🤣

"Bakwaaas Band Karo Aur Mujhe Jane Do Warna Mein Chilaongi" said Priya. "Chilao! 😉 " "Dekho .. Tum Kya Chahte ho mujhse ..." Said Priya. "Pyaar!..." Replied Aditya, *Yeh Ishq Hai Ishq Hai Aur Kuch Bhi Nahin BG*.

Priya - "tum itna surila kaise gaate ho? aur ye bgscore kidhar se aaya? 😕" 😆

Priya lost in his eyes n says

"Gumshudaaaaaaaaaa" 😛 😆

"Tum Jante Kya Ho mere Bari Mein !...

Jao Google search kar k aao! 🤣

Aur Itna Sab Hogaya Kal Raat Aur Tum Phir bhi..." "Mare Ko kal Raat gussa Toh Aaya! ...

.. lekin ye dharamshal ka khana aisa hi hota hai" 😆

Lekhin Tujh Par nahin ! uss joru ke ghulam par aya!...

waise shadi k baad main bhi joru ka ghulam hi banooga, SRK is my ideal 😃

Dil Toh Charaha te ek lagon Usse ! Lekhin Woh Mara Nahin ! tara gunegar hai!...

to main kyu beech mein aake pitu 😆...

" Said Aditya, "Kya Karti Mein ... Kis Kis Ka Moo Band Karti !...

.. celotape bhi khatam ho gaya tha...

" cried Priya. "tumhara Problem Pata hai Kya Hai ? Tum Sirf Bura Hi Dekhte Ho Apne Ap mein!... Mare Nazar se Dekho Toh Pata ChaleGa..

... lo mera chashma 😆

" Said Aditya Wid BackGround Music....

Lafzon mein nahin hota jo bhayan

Ankhon ne teri, yeh kya keh diya...

Kyun mujh par tera Hakh Lage

Deewano si Halat Lage

Hai Saare zamane se juda

Tu Khwab hai Ya Saach Kya Pata

Kya Yahi Baas Yahi Hoti Hai Deewangi

Yeh Ishq Hai Ishq Hai Aur Kuch Bhi Nahin

Yeh Ishq Hai Ishq Hai Aur Kuch Bhi Nahin

Yeh Ishq Hai Ishq Hai Aur Kuch Bhi Nahin

Yeh Ishq Hai Ishq Hai Aur Kuch Bhi Nahin

"Jaane Do Mujhe.." said Priya, "Theeke! Bas Ek Baar Keh De Ke Tu Phir Se Mare Se Juda Hone Ki Nahin Socho Ge.." Said Aditya. Priya is thinkin how to ignore him, buh Finally Says "Theeke ! Nahin Sochoongi..." Aditya is on 7^th Cloud After Hearin this...

... and there he finds Divya!!
why? coz Priti told Div that she should audition for Damon's love interest as all girls ditch the poor guy and since then Div is there giving this smiley 😳 😆

n Let Go her hand n says "Ayeee ! Chal Jaane Diya 😉" n he let her go! Priya leaves the car and is about to Go Buh Aditya stops her By sayin...

.. pehle de do mera paanch rapaiya barah aana 🤣 (Manal, u should c this song) 😆

Acha Suno..." Priya Turns Around, n He smiles n Says "Kuch Nahin 😉 (Gajni effect 😆)


" Priya turns Around n walks Away.

Left Right Left 😃

Aditya Stands there for long. On other Hand, Priya's Dad is All worried n Cries "I dont Know Meri Beti Kis Halat mein kahan hogi!" "Papa ! did ko kuch nahin Hoga ! Aditya Bhaiya ne Abhi Phone Kiya aur Kaha Ke Woh Did ko Lekhar Aarai Hain.." Said Chinu, "Toh Abhi Tak Aye Kyun Nahin ..."

Chinu thinking, 'zarur McDonalds pe ruk gaye honge' 😆

Cries her father n in the mean time they hear "PAPA" n Priya's dad turns Around n Shouts "Priyaaaa!"

ok, here I remembered Shyamu, his CHAI, n Grrrrrrrrr 🤣 what a contrast that family is 😆

Runs To her. "Beta Yeh Sab Kya Hai !? What is this?" shows her the letter, "Papa mujhe Maaf Kar dijiye! Mein Tori Batak Gaye Thi... Ab Phir se Yeh Galti nahin karoongi.." she Cries n Mean Time Aditya Enters n Says "Haan Toh Soch Kar Toh Dekho Aise Karne Ki" Priya's Dad walks to him n Folds his Hands to him And Says "Beta Thnk You !! Aaj Tum Nahin Hote Toh..." Aditya Holds his Hand and Says "Uncle Ji yeh Ap Kya Kar rahe ho! Mujhe sharminda maat kijiye!.. Yeh Sab Mera Farz tha..."

Papaji doesn't get the hint and Adi thinks, yar ye hindi filmein nahi dekhte kya? 😆

n Looks @ Priya, "Aur Ab Toh yeh Mera Haak Hai .." he says lookin @ Priya. "Kya Matlab? What do u Mean?" Asks Priya;s dad. "Kuch Nahin Uncle... Ab Hum Chaltein Hain... Aur... Ab Baut Jaldi Mulaqaat Hogi.." he looks at Priya n Priya looks away. "Chaltein hain..." he is About to Leave buh all over sudden Priya Stops her saying "...

paise to lete jaiye 😳 😆

suniye..." Aditya Stops n Turns Around... "Thanks" she said n these Words Made him So Happy! .... "Woh Kya Kehte hain... Mention not 😉" Krishna effect? 😉

Aditya is so Happy That Finally the word he was waiting for and Leaves.

*At Night*

Mein Tare Saath Biha Rachaonga ... Maang Baronga Tera....The Time She Reached home, She has been thinkin About Aditya n His Words. "Kyun ! Kyun mein uss insaan ko nahin bhul Sakti !! Mujhe Koi Haak Nahin Hai Phir Se Kissi Se Pyaar karne Ka ! Aur Jaanta Kya hai woh Mere Bari Mein !? KUCH NAHIN!! Mujhe Uss se Door Jana Hoga! Yahi Acha Hoga Hum Dono Ke Liye! ... Haan Yahi Theek hai ! mujhe Jaana Hoga! Kal Subha Hote Hi Hum Yahan Se Chale jayenge!" said Priya n tried sleeping but when she tried to Close her eyes, ...

.. the mosquitoes started troubling her 😡

onli thing she saw was ADITYA! ... Maybe cuz the 1 she is trying to run away as awready captured her thaughts! "Yeh Mujhe Kya hogaya! Kyun Mein Sirf uske Bari Mein Soch Rahi Hoon!?" she turns around n struggles to sleep!.

thanks to the mosquito net, she snores peacfully 😳

*Next Morning*

Priya Packing Her, her father n Chinoos Stuff, and while Seein this Priya's dad asks "Arre Beta What r you Doin ? Why u Packing our Saman?" he asked, "Woh Papa hum yahan darshan Karne Aye te na ! aur Darshan hogaya... Ab Hamein Yahan se jana chaiye..."Said Priya. "Lekhin Didi...

.. mujhe bhi McDonalds jana hai 😭

" Said Chinoo buh Priya's Dad stopped him, "Theeke Beta if u insist...Hum Abhu Ready hoke Coming" said priya's dad n Walks Away.

Priya in her thaughts "ab humein Kaise Bhi karke Jald se jald yahan se nikalna hoga! Aditya ke yahan Anne se Pehle!... Hamein Unse Door Jana Hoga" n while she was thinkin this, there was a tear drop in her eyes... she wipes her tears n is thinkin "Yeh Ansoo? Yeh Ansoo Kisliye....?

that too without glycerine 😲

" This Was the Tear of pain, tear of Separation ! these tears Proved Aditya's Magic has worked on priya but she is just not ready to Accept it!

tera jadoo chal gaya 🥳

Priya and her family leave for the bus station, where on Other Hand Adi leaves his house with his family ! buh doesn't tell thm where he is Takin Them... buh on the way their Car has ditched him 😆 n they waiting for a mechanic. Aditya all excited n juust cantcontrol ! as he wants to go to his Priya ASAP! N get her buh seems like destiny isn't wid him at the moment !

*on the bus*

Priya all lost in her thaughts *flashback ALL AdiYa scenes* "kya mein Sahi Kar rahi hoon? Aman Ka Saaza Mein isse Kyun De rahi Hoon?... Lekhin Mein Uski Laikh Nahin Hoon.. aur yeh woh Khud Samaj Haye ga ..." where all over sudden she looks out side of the window n sees Aditya standing outside, buh she hides as she doesnt want him to see her buh Too late as Aditya Saw her n is shocked and starts Running After the bus, Gaurav n Devyani r shocked seeing him running after the Bus.

his mom thinks, mera beta Olympics mein jayega 😍

Aditya Misses the bus n stood there Shattered! *Flash Backs All AdiYa scenes* Mein Tare Kho Apne apse dorr jane nahin Doonga Were running in his ears n baught tears in his eyes! "Nahin ! Nahin ! usne Vaada Kiya ! mujhse Door Nahin Jayegi ! Nahin !" as he said these words, he was in full tears!

"PRIYAAAAAAA" he breaks down and cries his Heart Out ! "Nahin Mein Apne Pehle Pyaar ko aise Nahin Jane Doonga... Chori Ko Mare Paas Ana Hi Hoga!"

aur agar wo nahi aayi to 😡

to kya, main uske paas chala jaunga 😃

he said "kismat Mere Saath Aisa Khel Nahin khel Sakta! Tare ko ! Hamein Phir Se Milana Hoga! Samjha!! Milana Hoga!!" he cried. "Tujhe Mare Pass Aana hoga! Mara Dil Janta Hai Ke Tu Bhi Mare Se Pyaar Karte ho! ... Kismat hi Mare ko Tare se Milaye ga! Aur Milwana Hi Hoga" he cried.

Will the Destiny get Aditya & Priya close? Will they ever Meet Again?

oh yea, they will and Priya will get married to Adi and will wear the jewellery stuff like Vidya is wearing these days 😆 😃

-The End