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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gopi's POV

How much should I wait
Why does he always have to be so late?
I've severed all ties, and broken all bonds
I've done no right but too many wrongs
He despises my sight and yet just for a day
Can't a girl dream that she'll have her way?
So I glance at the door in the hope he will come
I wait for tears on my cheeks
Surprisingly there are none
Only a frown that masks the hope inside
Oh kanha-why are you taking me for a ride?

Aham's POV

Typing away, nothing else left to do
well fate, you got the better of me, I bow down to you
The girl i loved, you couldn't bear to see her with me
So you've cursed me with this impertinent girl, well I see

Phone call from Mum, she sounds pretty angry
Not the first time if you count recently
telling me she's waiting
Destroying all my hating
Telling me i may have had all the ties broken
But she's still waiting for me, her fast yet not done
my throat has a huge lump, for the first time
Someone has actually cared about my lifeline
Does it have to be my greatest enemy?
Well I should phone her-nothing else left you see


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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG u r a poet megha? n that to so good!!
very well written congrets
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW ... that was awesome Indigo !....

Beautiful lines .... do keep pening more on Goham's feelings !

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Posted: 15 years ago
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megha,,,u are an allrounder...u know...
u do updates...u do Modi Diaries.......and here u are with the Poem....gr8 one indeed....and my favline is:

But she's still waiting for me, her fast yet not done
my throat has a huge lump, for the first time
Someone has actually cared about my lifeline
Does it have to be my greatest enemy?
Well I should phone her-nothing else left you see

the best one.....hope Aham is also thinking the same....

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