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Posted: 14 years ago
muski muski muski....🤗..

nice one muski... my heart is broken after watching in episodes and now your updates are soothing enough to lessen the pain..

btw, why Geet is having inhibition about confessing her marriage to her friends...yaar wanna see a possesive Geet.. I think Maan will also enjoy it 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzz pm me when u update..i love ur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskaan when are you planning the next part ya, eagerly waiting :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
wahoooooooooooo wat writng yaar ........................ wndrfl ...... awesom dialgs...................
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Posted: 14 years ago

geet - teehk hain (geet says promptly)
pooja - aacha let me plan something & then call you

part 116

it was the second meeting with Khuranas..
maan & pari walked in..to the conference room
Arjun - hellow Mr. khurana..
Maan - hellow (he noded & his eyes were looking for geet)
geet walks in with the proofs & other details..his excitment was building
his heart started to race..pumping more blood to add up to the sensation..
he felt as if he has not seen for ages..she smiled at his tracing looks..
she tried to be more professional..knowing it was just not possible
with his eyes following her every small gestures..
geet showed the proof to them..& explined it..
pari - this shade is still not wat we wanted..
geet looked at him...
maan - this is perfect (she smiled)
pari - but dreamy ..I mean Maan this not wat we decided
geet lifted her eyebrows at dreamy..maan cleared his throat
maan - this is perfect ..I love it..(he still kept looking at geet)
pari - Maan we are trying to potray a different emotions..here...unlike our
comptetitor..u told me.
pari took the proof & moved close to maan..her hand caresed maans cheeks
geet looked away & excused her to leave the room ..she walked straight into the door..
maan rushed to geet and said..sambal ke geet..

geet looked at maan...he knew she was not happy...maan eyes were worried & hurt
he never wanted to see pain in those eyes...least because of jealousy...

Arjun - are u fine.. (maan slips is hand away)
arjun gets her glass of water & checks her forehead..
geet moves back & says I am fine..

geet went out ..she was not comfatable ..she went to her cabin & sat on her chair
babaji inhe sab ke wajah se main inke office nahi jaana chathi..
aur aap inko kyun yanha behj rahe hoo....she tries to relax..

geet yeh sab hota rahta hain..woh hain he aise ...I should ignore all this...relax geet...
geet its ok...take a long breath ...every thing will be fine..(mernurs to herself)
she folds her leg leans back on her chair...
pooja calls..
pooja - yaar geet bad news..hain
geet - why wat happened
pooja - they are just not listening..bhut senti ho rahain hain
geet - aacha teehk hain..let me thing of some thing..
pooja - dehk I tried..so don't forget..my meeting with Arjun...
geet - umm
geet babaji yeh saab kya ho raha hain...
main inko maan ke bare main kaise batavoonghi..
first I will have to sort this job part ...
she rests her head on the chair & closes her eyes
maan stood behind her & messages her neck...with the touch she knew it was him..
she just gave in..& enjoyed every bit of it...
his hands..slowly pressed back of her neck & then moved outwards to the shoulders..
she moved forward & bend her head towards the table...maan moved his hand messaging down her neck..to her back..down her spine..she moved back resting her head back ward arching herself..maan bend down & kisses her..forehead..
she smiles..& jumps up in shock...
geet - aap yeh kya kar rahe ho? yeh mera office hain..
maan - are u ok? u look really tired..
geet - nahi I am fine..
maan - kya hua geet..(he moves her curls behind)
she hugged him..mujhe kuch aacha nahi laag raha
maan - ghar challen
geet - meeting hain na..
maan - cancel kar de thain hain...?
geet - nahi..that won't be professional..aap chaloo I will join u guys..
maan - are u sure
she noded & maan left..

they continued the discussion..
pari - we are having the launch party in the disc...
Arjun - why disc?
pari - the target audeince ...will be mostly in such places..& then
we do have subsequent plans..we want to make it a style statement
maan & geet were busy glancing each other
geet - DISC!!
maan - actually our investors insisted
pari - hands over the invite to geet & Arjun
maan - we could have the huge laminate of this proof..
as the back drop & few hand out..pari may be able to give the content
Arjun - umm!!

after they left..maan went to the car & messaged..I am waiting...
geet finished her work & joined him ..
geet - hum kanha jaa rahe hain...
maan - ghar
geet smiled..
maan stops the car turns to meet her eyes..aacha kya huvaa..why are u so disturbed
geet - I had some misunderstandig with my friends
maan - umm
geet - they are angry with me
maan - why?
geet - they came to know about my job through some one else..
maan - umm!!
geet - pooja tried speaking to them..but..they are getting too senti about the whole thing
maan - why don't u spend some time with them..talk to them..& explain
I am sure they will understand
geet - yah !!! I think i really need to talk to them now
maan - is there any thing else bothering u...sweetheart
geet hugs him tight...kya baat hain..maan said stroking her hair
woh..job ko lehkar itna naraz ho rahen hain...
I can't even imagine how they will react when I tell them about our wedding
maan - don't worry ..every thing will be fine...

maan - aacha let me drop u home..(starts the car)
geet could u please pass me the CD from the dash board
geet opens the dash board & finds a big choclate bar..
she really gets delighted & kisses him...on his cheeks
maan - tum accident karvaoo ghi...
geet opens the choclate & sees a note in that..
she narrowed her eyebrow..maan dekhiya na.. is main note hain
maan smiles...geet realizes ..he has actually placed it..
it was a red coloured heart shapped paper..& it read..

The best thing about ME is YOU

geet - thanxs...(she felt special...)
she shared the chocolate with him..
maan could read her eyes she was happy..thats wat he wanted...
he droped her home & moved onto his meetings..


precap
party time !!!!
thanxs guys..for all ur support & love....please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hii Di

awesome update........just loved it
lovely pics
Maan solved Geet probs................lovely
Maan small gesture towards Geet is so sweet n cute
w8ng for d party
pls cont soon

Luv
Naina

Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update

Liked the convo of frnds😆😆

Itna gussa jus on job jab they will get to knw abt marriage they'll kill her for sure
Maan really cant let Geet walk away jus for weeks also
Liked wat Geet said wen he asked her why cnt i miss u
She jus loves him a lot there is no end no end in her love
Maan's love is very less infrnt of hers i feel
Part 116 was also good
Liked that Maan solved her prob
His small gesture towards her was so sweet
Liked his care for her
Edited by -afsha- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantic update wait the next chapter soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update as always, Muskan 😊 👏
You really work hard a lot on the pictures 😊
The chocolate note part was really good 😊
The note was soo sweet, very deep in meaning 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
ADORABLE is all I can say! 😳😳😳
Maan is such a romantic...his little gestures would make anyone feel special 😃😃😃😃😃

Thanks for the many PMs and continue soon ⭐️

P.S. You're the only writer who I can count on to continue asap!
You're an absolute ⭐️

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