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JRia thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Continue soon wid a longer 1
kooliio thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Who is that guy???
Pls cont.soon!!!
muskanp thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vika1981

Nice muskaan .. brilliant. i love that u introduced new character Arjun.. i wonder if he is gonna start liking geet.. and who is the guys following geet??? uff... and come one make her tell her friends that is married to MSK.. ha hah

more soon:)

have great weekend!!!

thanxs vika...
wishing u a pleasnt weekend tooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superbbbbb

o wamm the suspense of that guys. pleaseeeeeee update soon!

lovedddddd ittttttttttttt 👍🏼 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

kooliio - thanxs dear

JRia - here the longer one..

nilu710 - thanxs dear..just updating soon..

thanxs guys..
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever

di thanks kehne ki ky zaroorat hain? what r lil sisters for? waise when is the update coming? cuz I'm getting sleepy and don't know for how long I'll b here. can u plz update now? oh and btw r u using the pic in the next update?

updating soon darling..shall pm u..mera pic kya hua??
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Posted: 14 years ago

he got worried..geet ran down the steps & looked back the guy was picking her phone
she got even more scared..& ran to the next floor..

part 110

she looked for pooja..she was no where to be seen
geet looked around..there was no one..she took the lift to get to parking
she entered the lift & pressed the parking floor..
when the door was about to close..that guy came right infront & streched his
hand ...geet was very scared to react...just when the door was about to close
she ran out & rushed through the steps..she trembled twice but missed a step..
jumped leaped few steps & landed on his chest...he held her in his arms
wow..woh mujhe...she hid her face into him..watching that guys coming closer
that guy still came closer..she hugged him harder scared & but still knowing
nothing could happen when she is in his embrace..she was cold catching up ...
for her breath..the guy came still closer & streched his hands towards them
guy - sir maam ka phone
maan - umm
geet - aap ise jaanthe hain..(she glancedv at him)
maan looked away...the guy moved little away & stood facing his back to them
maan - geet wo tumhara body gaurd hain..aur tum use hi se darr ke bhaag rahi hoo
main kya karo tumhara..
geet did'nt speak a word..she was still terrified with wat ever happened
geet called pooja & enquired if she was fine..
pooja - tu kanha chali gayee thi..kab se tumhara phone try kar rahi hoon
where are u now
geet - i am fine..I stopped to make a call & lost u..
how are u going home..do u want me to drop u
pooja - nahi yaar I am at the taxi stand..all well with me..
I was just waiting to speak to u..shall call u tomorrow
geet - umm

she sat in the car....maan try holding her hand she pulled back..
they reached home..
maan - geet geet meri baat sunoo...
geet - aap aapne aap ko samjthe kya hain..
aap ne mera peechi jaasos chodain huain hain
maan - geet wow jaasos nahi hain..tumhara body gaurd hain
geet - u did'nt even feel that I should know about it
maan - I wanted to ..lekin tum meri baat nahi sunthi
mujhe tum se jagda nahi karna tha..
geet - woh so now u feel that I fight with u
maan - geet geet meri baat sunoo
he pulls her into him..damit mujhe timhari chinta reh thi hain
half of the time u don't pick ur calls..
geet - aisa nahi hain
maan - aisa hi hain..main tumhare bina jee nahi sakta..
mera bas chale to tumhe aapne se ek min ke liya bhi door na karoon
hugs her tight
geet - mujhe nahi pasand yeh body gaurd sab
maan - I will tell him to maintain more distance..
geet - nahi
maan - u won't know he is around..
geet - yah like today..even pooja noticed him
it will be so embarrising if I tell her he is my body gaurd
maan - I will tell him to be carefull
geet - mujhe body gaurd nahi chahiya
maan - tum mano yah na mano..he will be with u..
geet pulls out & walks away...

they have their dinner
geet does'nt even look at him..
maan tries to say anything ..she walks away..

maan - mera gussa khana pe kyun nikal rahi hoo
please khana kaa loo..I promise..I won't say anything
geet nibbles few bite & goes to the room..maan knew she was still
very unhappy about the whole episode..
maan went the room saw geet had changed into her night dress..maan came closer
and & she ignored him & continued platting her hair...
he tied a blind fold on her eyes..she resisted...
geet - yeh kya kar rahe ho...
it will be fun trust me..he wispered in her ears..
geet - main aap se gussa hoon
he kissed his cheeks jaantha hoon...she turned away..
he lifted her & took her down the steps...she could feel..him
climbing down the steps..
geet - kanha jaa rahe ho?
maan did'nt reply...she felt a jerk when maan kicked open the main door
she tried openning her blind fold...
maan - u don't trust me...
she stopped...she felt the chill wind blowing..the smell of flowers indicated
they were in the garden..it was silent...darkness was adding to the feel ..
he left her down & moved back...Awe winds, the moon Wrapped in a dismal blanket of clouds, a
dreadful cool breeze grazes her face, as she spread her hand to catch him..he moved away..she could feel his heart beat in the perfect silence..of the dark night..she could easily move towards him....he smiled & tried to slip away.again.she realized ..wat he was upto...
your essence embraces my silence I hear your footsteps in my heart..maan she laughed..
she involuntarily played along...umm!! he turned on the garden sprinkler..
she was taken a back..she tried moving away...but it was too late...
it was spraying water all around wetting her..drenching her...
since they were in the middle of the garden..they could'nt escape getting fully soaked

paani ki boondhe aise unke bandan ko chu rahi thi..jaise woh ek dosare ko
chu rahe hoon..unke honton se lagtha ..girtha pani..jaise unke honton mile rahe hoon..
ek aajb se kashma kash thi ..

geet - maaaan..thats not fair..
every thing is fair in love & war
he wispered in her ears ..his warm breath in that chill
water was just so perfectly teasing her senses..she turned to catch him he moved away...
geet - to main kya samjhu..pyar yah takraar
he pulled out the band & opened her hair lose...the air was filled with her smell
he said husky voice..tumse main sirf pyar hi kar sakta hoon..caresing the nape of her neck..
he could'nt resist the temptation to pause to take it in..it was so seductive..but just moved before she could reach him....she streched her hands & turned briskly in respose to his wisper..
geet - phir hamesha mujhe pareshan kyun karthe hoo..
he came close & pulled her duppata which was soaking in her scent...
are u sure main tumhe pareshan kartha hoon..in that romantic muscline voice he said
she drew in a deep breath, inhaling his eroticly seducing perfume..
the sound of the water sprinkler on the grass blocked the sound of
his foot steps but she could feel the individual breath every time me came close to her
almost caresing her ..sending jolts down her spine..seducing her..making it diificult to hold back
..hold away from him..she turned again facing him without her duppatta..drenched &
he stood mesmeried looking at her...he put the duppata around his neck...taking in her scent
his gaze was drawn at her..the way she filled her dress..
he tried looking away..but he could'nt...stop staring at the tight front curves
geet shied & crossed her hands covering her bare neck...she probably knew..him blind folded..
maan walked towards her...she turned away...as if she knew..
he was walking towards her with so much of desire in his eyes..
she could feel her back warming up with the heat from his eyes
he wrapped the duppatta from behind...she felt a spark ignite her veins
maans warm hand across her neck & waist...geet turned & hugged him...& said caught u...
maan - as always..he smiled..like his defeat did'nt matter anything infront of her smile..

precap
office office...

well well well..floor is set for the weekend...lets see..wat next...hope u all like it
please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG..IT WAS HER BODYGUARD !!!!!I was like totally rolling on the floor..she was running away from her bodyguard....lolz...thanks for this update...please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED IT MUSKAAN, IT WAS ROMANTIC....LOVE THE GARDEN ROMANCE IT WAS JUST AWESOME...THE WHOLE PLOT WAS JUST AMAZING PLZZZZ UPDATE SOON..

LOVE YOU,
vinitha
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeeee the update.
Tooo romanticcccc.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima

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