Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 47

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Posted: 14 years ago
Man, that stubble running part was kinda... (***Faints ***)...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Vrushali 🤗

I hate it when work takes over my life.. I read the last 4 parts just now. Wow girl, you outdo yourself everytime. Only Time by Enya was the icing on the cake. I loved that song in Sweet November.

One word, Fabulous.

Thanks for the pm hon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Rev,


ah you have taken the cake for naughtiness..and i am going to eat it..

now i know it sounds.. ahem ahem..but i actually mean the intellect..
i think it is the biggest aphrodisiac in the world

an intelligent person can never cease to arouse you...where as chemistry of the physical kind can last for only so much...time..

one needs to connect on intellectual level, to communicate, to articulate the thoughts, understand..and interact....

two people who are intelligent..will never run out of conversation...but two people...who have great chemistry..what do they do after they run of the catalyst...

ah now..i know..i have gone philosophical yet again..but i guess i get turned on by your conversation... i do have some...in my life..who never ever.. cease to surprise me with their conversations..and the ideas and thots we share..and exchange becomes even a better stimulant to do well..in whatever i undertake..

you are one of them...

Vroom, I am learning from the master 😉😆😆... Very true - I completely agree that if we can connect on an intellectual levels the rest too will fall in place... Only passion is just like fire - it burns off with the fuel - here fuel being emotional and intellectual connection 😊..
BTW, I am glad I could ahem ahem - give u the biggest aphridisiac -- Now I am wanting a bigger mind boggling update which will turn on our thoughts..
Thank you for the compliment ☺️☺️☺️☺️.... But without u ... I would just be another ordinary person with ordinary perspectives.. U complete my thought process 😆😆😆..
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Posted: 14 years ago
@shivani - I wanted to write this the yesterday but kept putting if off cos of my pensive thoughts.. U brought a smile on my face when I was kinda lost with ur long update.. Dont stop ur chapar chapar express..
And about going to the gym - do u want to lose weight ( the way u going I fear u ll soon become under weight ) or is Maaneet driving u there? I just cant think of U not being fit as fiddle both in mind and body 😉...
Hope u had a good time dancing.. Kitni shower lethi hai re ---> Maan ki yaad aathi hai kya ki har waqt excercise ya shower mein hoti hai ?? 😆
Edited by MaaneetDD - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Devi,

cant have you fainting..can i...i need you to write and give me some hot..scenes...i dont read mine...other than to skim thro for mistakes..

would you write a hot scene...i cant forget your heat wave...


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Posted: 14 years ago
HI Vrush,
sorry i hvnt been applauding ur writing.... 👏👏👏... been very busy n hence been only reading ur updates and liking them....
u hv so beautifully described poor geet's fight against her love becoz of her responsibilities..... feel the pain for her....... but maan too will go to any extent to make her accept...so am hopign to see u writing somethign bout it... 😉
love ur updates ....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Taste For Your Love

He had been disturbed with what she had told him. She had not eaten since morning and he was reveling in her plight of jealousy. He felt contrite, downright inhuman to trouble the one that he felt so much for. He did not know when he had turned from a protective, steadfast person to this twisted, sadistic man, especially towards the girl who meant the world to him.

He had ordered Chandu to go and serve food to Geet in their house, to do it every day from now on. She had looked weak to him. Almost unable to get up, but pride had stopped her from taking his hand. It had irked him but hell she riled him too. She had the audacity to bring Sasha and throw her in his face to mock him for this charade he was pulling related to the contract engagement.

He had felt elation at being so young and carefree with her. And the playfulness was indeed something he enjoyed; he knew she was now more comfortable with him now. She fought him like they belonged together and that bickering and getting on top of each other was a norm. She did not realize what she revealed with her eyes, even when she gave furtive glances, even when she baulked at their nearness, he saw desire, deep inside a spark, that he has to turn it in to a flame, an inferno that will burn them up and eat them alive, but that would be living and he could not wait for that to happen.

He wanted to ensure she ate, so he stood near the top of the stairs watching her, saw Chandu giving her the food, she trying to refuse it. Chandu in his characteristic stubbornness had replied that he followed boss's orders and was to ensure that she ate. Chandu was standing in attention while Geet ate. He gave a lopsided smile to himself thinking, ye larki agar mein hota to bilkul nahi maanti, she would have refused to eat.

He stood there with folded hands looking down at Geet, when she turned. She must have felt his gaze, as he mused looked down at her and was feeling penitent on being caught, watching her. She had something on her lip and he pointed it to her, she tried but could not remove it. He signaled her that he was coming down to help her.

He did not know he could be so devious. At being caught, he had found a convenient excuse to side distract her from knowing that he had been staring. He wanted to see for himself that she ate, but hell he wanted to make sure that she ate and he wanted to feed her.

He pulled her hand and made her sit on her chair that she had vacated seeing him. He sat in the chair next to hers and cut a morsel of roti to feed her. She hesitated.

"Mein kha loongi Maan," Geet says shyly. "Kyun mein khilao to kuch ho jaayega?" he quizzed. "Pehle kehti ho mera khayal nahi rakhte jab rakh raha hoon to ulta jawab deti ho. Tumne tthaan lee hai kya mein kahoon uska hamesha ulta karna?"

Geet lowered her gaze, "Nahi, aisi koi baat nahi hai," and takes the morsel from his fingers into her mouth. She stared at him while he fed her. This was an entirely new sensation for her. Him feeding her and her enjoying his light touch as he did that. It seemed to satiate one need but awaken a want, a want so deep that she knew she should stop.

She tried to speak after a few morsels, to tell him that she had enough but he put a finger on his lips and put forward another morsel. She was paying attention to him looking at the way his finger touched his lips and his eyes and in haste bit on his finger.

"Ow!" Maan quipped, "Now you want to take revenge for pushing more is it?" He gets up and pulls her up with his other hand. He then motions for her to lick his fingers. She shakes her head.

He says "Do it or else?" She takes one finger then other, just as she was on the little finger the last one; she bit again, this time harder. He jerked his other hand and held her hair pulling her close.

He used the napkin nearby to wipe his hand and put his head near hers and muttered, "tumhein Mazak soojh raha hai Geet? Lekin tumhari to aadat hai na, mujhe hamesha koi nishaani dene ki, jab se mili ho… I have always gotten something from you," he reminded her, his lips a mere millimeter away from her mouth. She was reminded of how he always got injured because of her whether it was talwaar, or laathi that she had used when she had thought there was a chor in the house to cuts on his hand. They both seemed to be transported in their reminiscence of every encounter of theirs.

She said, "I am sorry, it won't happen again" trying to get free. But he tugged on her hair harder.

He shook his head in denial. She was not going to get away from him this time. He stared at her, deep in her eyes and told her without words what he was going to do to her. He then slowly closed the gap between their lips. Her eyes closed. He kept on looking at her. He kissed her with passion, a held back passion for he knew this was not what he had intended but he could not resist her.

He kissed her deeply, plundering her mouth. Just when he thought he was going to lose control, he nipped her lip and then bit it. Geet's eyes flew open. He registered pain mingled with desire along with surprise at what he had just done. She pushed him away.

He moved back releasing her and looked at her, not feeling repentant as he had just done what he wanted to. He had put a mark on her. His mark. She was his. There was a swelling on the lip where he had bit.

He murmured, " Ab theek hai, ab tumhein pata chalega, jab bhi tum baat karogi, jab bhi tum apne hoonth chuogi, mien, sirf mein yaad aaonga Geet. "

She just gawked at him. She had sheen of tears in her eyes and immediately Maan's expression changed from one of achievement to remorse.

He went to her and took her hands and said, "Geet rona mat, please rona mat." And gathered her in his arms and asked, "Dard ho raha hai Geet."

She replied, "No, why did you stop?" but feeling brazen at what she had blurted out, she ran away from there.

Taste of your love – ryan leslie

Oh..
Hoo (you know I got a taste for you)

Verse 1:
Citylights will captivate ya my love
And your pretty eyes say it's in your nature my love
To play hard to get but I bet I'll make ya my love
It's ok if you want me to chase ya my love

Bridge:
'Caus it don't matter what it takes
Girl I know I've got to get you
Visions of your face from the moment that I met you
Your just the type I like your my candy-coated treasure
So baby can I sweat ya let me be your pleasure

Chorus:
Girl you know that I've got a taste for your love (your love)
Hurry up girl don't make me wait for your love (ooohh)
Ooh I'm hopin' I'm not to late for your love
'Cause I want it tonite tonite..

Verse 2:
Uh..
Baby I promise to please you my love
I can break it down slow if you need to my love
And can no one else do it like we do my love
You've been missin' out let me complete you my love

Bridge:
'Caus it don't matter what it takes
Girl I know I've got to get you
Visions of your face from the moment that I met you
Your just the type I like your my candy-coated treasure
So baby can I sweat ya let me be your pleasure

Chorus:
Girl you know that I've got a taste for your love (your love)
Hurry up girl don't make me wait for your love (ooohh)
Ooh I'm hopin' I'm not to late for your love
'Cause I want it tonite tonite..

Verse 3:
Don't keep me waitin' up 'cause I need to get it right away
And this is the time and place my love
And this acquainted love good lovin' till the light of day
My love, so let me be your pleasure

Chorus:
Girl you know that I've got a taste for your love (got a taste for your love)
Hurry up girl don't make me wait for your love (ooh yeah said I'm hopin')
Ooh I'm hopin' I'm not to late for your love (cause I...)
'Cause I want it tonite tonite. (baby you know that I've got a taste...)

Chorus:
Girl you know that I've got a taste for your love (for your love ooh yeah)
Hurry up girl don't make me wait for your love (oh you got.. girl i'm hopin')
Ooh I'm hopin' I'm not to late for your love (said i'm not too late, cause I..)
'Cause I want it tonite tonite..
(tonite.. a taste.. that's what I want girl..yes a taste..)

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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved!!!!!!!!! 😆😆
I am the 1st one to reserve and the last one among the regulars to comment!! Wah wah 😡😡
I have given my comments to u verbally, let me put it down in words..
I love how u described LIVING - he saw desire, deep inside a spark, that he has to turn it in to a flame, an inferno that will burn them up and eat them alive, but that would be living and he could not wait for that to happen.
Very true - love, desire and companionship does spark a flame in us which burns the candle of life even brigher than before... here in lies the difference between living and existing.
In this episode - you showed playfulness, desire, concern and overall there were play of emotions that veer towards a positive note- I mean even Geet's senses are overwhelmed by passion and love and there was no snake slithering down her spine this time 😆😆....
I like the mark of possession -thats exactly how a deeply passionate soul would behave- I would want the entire world to know SHE is mine and I would want to stamp my mark on her!!
Edited by MaaneetDD - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
*thud*
lip bit ☺️☺️☺️😳😳
awesomestest..👏👏👏👏👏👏
i really dont hav any words to describe.....👏👏👏 it wont do justice........vrus, u r a rockstar...👏👏👏👏
Edited by -sann- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow simply amazing your scenes are totally irresistible.

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