Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 49

Wow! Vrush that's so Maanish 😆😆😆no word came to my mind, he wanted his marks on her lips this time, don't know whether he will leave the poor girl without a mark on the rest of her body when he gets the chance to do more😳😳😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

So he put a seal on her lips marking her as his...so authoratively MSK!!!! Ah and Geet blurted out her desire!!! Oye hoye kuri sharma kar bhaag gayi!

Nice piece!

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sharma kaar??? no no yaar...ghabra kaar bhag gaye......like me!! Di.....after reading this scene.....mein ghabra gaye hoon!!! 😆 So i am going to have to hold off on replying anything for now!!!
I am just tooooo speechless to think straight!😲
Yes, the chatter box will have to go hit the GYM!!! Runn runn runn......5 miles 😃
then after clearing these so called thoughts u have hit me up with.......i can put them in words 😉

and what di....u just ended it?? Like that??? oh man....i hope i can drive to the gym safely!! 😭

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

@shivani - I wanted to write this the yesterday but kept putting if off cos of my pensive thoughts.. U brought a smile on my face when I was kinda lost with ur long update.. Dont stop ur chapar chapar express..

And about going to the gym - do u want to lose weight ( the way u going I fear u ll soon become under weight ) or is Maaneet driving u there? I just cant think of U not being fit as fiddle both in mind and body 😉...

Hope u had a good time dancing.. Kitni shower lethi hai re ---> Maan ki yaad aathi hai kya ki har waqt excercise ya shower mein hoti hai ?? 😆

i sometimes shower 4 times 😆.......and yea Maan is constantly on my mind!! 😉
i have always been working out....but not like this....before i used to run 3 miles and call it a day....but now i have been running 5 miles ever since i have started to watch this show....my one pair of sweat pants literally fall off of me now 😆 and today i drank 5 bottles of water...and had an apple
and now i hope i can run without peeing in my pants 😭

And di....u know everyone sings that song at home?? At work too 😆😆😆
my brother plays that song when i walk into his room 😆

vrush u r such an awesome writer...everytime u exceed my expectations......wow.... is all i hv to say....

*mouth hanging open*....kya badla liya hai....woooooo!!

Arre yaar Vrush ...yeh kya kar diya tumne .......this wishful thinking made me go bonkers ....and the love bite ....OMG 😳 desperately wanna see this happening on the show and will die looking at Maan doing this ....already feeling faint by reading .....too good yaar ....sacchi mein 👏

wow Vru, amazing update

wow absolutly amazing. Loved the last part where Geet says, "No, Why did you stop?". Your writing is supreb. 👏

wow u r just 2 good i have read all of em but never commented but this one forced me so i just wanted to tell you wow u r such a good writer

sigh....di mein agaye!!!! 😉

Gym was hilarious today di.....i kept eye balling all of the young guys in the gym and kept comparing them to Maan 😆.....yea in that huge gym no one can be compared to maan....no way.....no one... not one guy matched up to Maan!!

This is partly ur fault k... di! I had to go early to the gym because u had to post ur next scene....and leave me speechless i had to go to the gym....and run to find some words 😆......and because of reading ur last scene...Maan wouldn't get out of my mind...so while running i kept myself busy! ⭐️

U may have a way with ur words.....and ur writing...but i guess i have a way with my singing, dancing, and gym!! 😉 Today i did all of that.....sang while driving to and back from the gym...and while driving dance at the same....some loonie looked at me like i was crazy at the traffic light! 😳

But now i am back refreshed and ready to baak baak nonstop! 😃
hey hey....di....ur shivani didn't eat anything since morning either 😆.....but that is nothing new....i don't any way.....just apple...water...then for dinner i had honey nut cherios yummy!😳
Why doesn't maan come and arrange dinner for me too?? 😆

Anywayz enough of that....

I loved loved loved how u start off with Maan's inner thoughts.....we never get to really much of them in the show....but in ur scenes at least we can understand him more 😉! I loved how he noticed that geet was getting comfortable with him when they fought....and how they were meant to be with one another! Wow so descriptive i tell ya!

Even though ur scene was different this time...u understand the characters sooo well....how geet felt that maan was there even in the show....and she caught him before leaving....and here in ur scene she felt his eyes looking at her!!! 😳 Di u r amazing!!!
Whenever i read ur scenes....i always get shocked.....shocked with high voltage of electricity!!! I am thinkin how i am still alive!?😲 Today i got electrified even more....especially when Maan kissed geet and she told him why did he stop??????? 😲 That line left me breathless....Di u are so lucky that i did not faint 😆.....today when i was running i was scared i would faint.....i kept seeing that scene....I actually imagined the two kissing and Geet sayin why did u stop!!! She wanted more??? She said it outloud?? Then wat do u do....leave us hanging! 😭😆.......koi baat nahin i will now stay awake restless for the next part⭐️.....after all i am always so energetic...and hyper....😆

Even the part where Maan begins to feed Geet she says she will eat herself....that scene reminded me of the part yesterday in the show......Geet and Maan fall on the couch he lends his hand...and she refuses by simply just getting up on her own.....but this time....her stubborness did not work 😛!!
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Vrush di....u leave me speechless.....electrified.......and every time i am more and more impressed with the way u write....with the way u describe each thing.....to the detail....every thing is just imaginative......like i can touch it....pick it up....like in a 3D movie or like one of those pop up books little kids enjoy reading!!! ⭐️👏

Another similarity that i forgot to mention (hitting myself) 😆 when u describe how Geet felt when maan touched her.....today when Maan touched Geet's face to wipe off the food she got on her cheek....u can tell that her breathing increased....and she felt electricity.....even Maan was looking at her....as if he saw that she felt something when he touched her! 👍🏼 Good job di......that was magical!!!! ⭐️ As usual u leave me stunned....what else can u do?? u always out do urself......and then i have to go the gym and think of new words to describe ur amazing scene and ur writing!! 😆

Oh so u tried to beat me with writing more??? 😆 hmmm....i am thinkin whether i should continue sayin how awesome u r in what u do....or should i leave some for tomorrow and all of the other days coming!! 😉

Overall.....i love the passionate scenes.......whatever the cv;s don't show.....i get to see it happen in ur scenes....so that completes the quota!! 😉
Although would not mind seeing a liplock......but i guess just reading ur scenes fulfills every wish right?? I mean after all u r the master mind....the queen of writing!!! If ever ever i go into acting in my life...u r so goin to be the creative head of my show....😆 just a thought u know!!! U r amazing.....u would rock the show in which u would write for!!! I mean u sure do rock Geet....since the CV's love ur brilliant ideas and scenes....they can't help but come to the Queen of writing on I-F right?? I love it when ur scenes come on tv......i feel that my di got what she deserves!!! I hope to see more of ur scenes on screen.....so i can brag to my mom and be like i know whose idea that was!!! 😆
yea my mom knows about u!! 😉 u r quite popular u see!!!
We all love u! Please keep writing and entertaining us beautifully like u do every day!!! Loved today's scene....it was amazing....and magical.....and rocking....and excellent....and just cute....lovely!!! ⭐️

-Shivani