Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#471

Wow....too good...you exceeded what we talked about last night....loved it. The BITE...uff....kya nishaan chorra hain Maan ne...something she will feel all the time and something he will see all the time...........too clever Maan.

He so wanted to BRAND her as his....and what better way that this!!! Excellent...and what and APT song....you are simply too good!!!

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#472

thank you darling..Babes...i know..we talked and i tried to do justice...

but i also have more ideas now..after our talk and will write a scene on that...

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tanu

@Armu4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#473

U din PM me.. 😭

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OMGE..............Lip bite.....☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️oh how i like the sound of it..n how i luv to read of it... n i m so dying to see it...😳😳😳😳😳

Gosh vru u just make my heart skip some beats everytime ..wit ur marvellous updates..!! Gr8 lines in the end.... 👏👏👏 👏superb stuff....luvd it..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#474

OMG...

*Thud*

that was amazing.....

I am at a loss for words right now

*Thud*

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#475

sorry girls..i was..on phone..and just posted this and no pms sent at all
will do that now..

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#476

Oh that was lovely....Nicely written! 👏

I love the thought of him wanting to leave a mark on her...😳..will be looking out for this thread..😉...I think i read the first page...shall be looking through the rest!..:)

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uzmam1

@uzmam1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#477

VT,

I am sure I have already mentioned this to you but your written word is simply out of this world!!

Your command of the english language is nothing short of brilliant and an absolute pleasure to read!!

Love the way the story is progressing and eagerly looking forward to your next update!!

Keep up the excellent work!!

Uzma xx

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#478

So he put a seal on her lips marking her as his...so authoratively MSK!!!! Ah and Geet blurted out her desire!!! Oye hoye kuri sharma kar bhaag gayi!

Nice piece!

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: rushtrip
thank you darling..Babes...i know..we talked and i tried to do justice...

but i also have more ideas now..after our talk and will write a scene on that...

Ok...will wait to see our ideas take fruition..........😉