Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 45

that was a double whammy. damn. and pretty hot too.

good deal Vru. now i am all excited for tomorrow or is it already today:)

Neha

omg, Vrush this is superb 👏 👏 👏
you have portrayed Maan and Geet's troubles so beautifully, I have no words to express
it seems so real in your writing and so effective

Wow Varsu.................wonderful...............having goosebumps................ thanks god I am wearing full sleevs today............. otherwise my collegues will think otherwise................... 😍

Dynamite writing .. today is a day for power writing .. absolutely loved it .. great depth and soul combined with a plethora of emotion!!

Absolutely beautifully worded .. easily makes the reader skip a few heartbeats .. mind you .. at this rate its going to be more than just a few !!

Vru........first part.........beautiful......girl i so want u in th Cvs team..u bring such beauty to the epis n the moments wit ur beautiful n fertile imagination.............n totally luvd how Maan asked...'Will a life wit me b so unthinkable'........he really cant live without his Pari...aka his Geet..😳

OMG Vrush (may i call u that ) ....read both of them together ....Maan can barely contain himself and ... you portrayed Geet's inner turmoil so well....poor girl just doesnt know what to do ....the more he wants her the further she runs ...and its hurting them both .....u know i keep wondering Maan wants a confession but what would happen once he knows about her pregnancy , will he think she hid it from him on purpose ...a betrayal , will he get those thoughts again that she meant to trap him ,will he accept her ....man i'm going crazy wid these thoughts .....its a wonder how i get through the daily chores wid thoughts of Maaneet ...... 😃

Vroom, I will kill u!! 😭😭...

Reading this update, I am in a pensive mood,.. I may veer to a philosophical angle.. So bear with me.. When I read both the updates , like many wrote- I had goosebumps.. But there was this catch in my gut.. like somehow this is a prelude of sorts.. See I am becoming incoherent too 🤔...My cobwebbed brain refuses to make sense to what I am feeling or thinking..

It took 3 hrs to write a comment cos my thots were whirling in no particular direction and refuse to listen to my brain😳😳(As though my brain ever listens to me, it's a putty when it comes the heart) ...My emotional self is winning over my logical self

Let me get into a symbolism today - i am wearing pink - the color of gaiety but my mind is whirling towards black thoughts... So did I subconsciously know that I would need a little bit of pink today?? ... Enuff of ME 😡

The moments of Love :

His moment of indecisiveness about him being wrong and his confidence re-asserting itself..Simply Maan- never allows a minute of Him wanting her to confess is his armor against pain.. He does not want to even accept to himself because he knows the waves of rejection that would engulf him would swallow him and never allow him see light of the day. The previous relationships just made him a hard man.. But Geet's refusal will make him a shell of a man!! So he wants a confirmation from her before he willingly walks into the oceans of emotions that are overwhelming him' His anger is just a faade to hide his confusion and apprehensions about losing the most important project of his life' Ur writing has soooo beautifully captured the crux of Maan's feelings.. 👏👏👏

Ur one of the few authors who ensure the readers sink into a cauldron of emotions while reading the scenes that it bubbles through our senses and creates an eclectic essences of a botanical garden- I find not just one fragrance of emotion⭐️⭐️' Oh God Vroom, u make me want to just go on and on praising u but my limited vocabulary hinders what my mind wants to say..🤢🤢🥺

we need Maan for our minds , just like we need food for our hunger. We satisfy our gastronomical needs by food BUT We have to read ur updates to enlighten the mind about Maaneet.. You soo effortlessly carry us away to a place where ur words are converted to visual images and the characters are no longer on page or screen but real' That is the true beauty of ur writing.. With simple lines you just zap us and put a smile or a thought in us which otherwise may have never crossed our minds' 🤗🤗🤗

You surpass urself everytime u write 👏👏.. It shows a depth of thinking and an amazing insight to what makes a character click.. You have captured the quintessence Maaneet so beautifully 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Thank you for showering us with such brilliant work and making our day.. I just hope the epi does live up to the lofty standards ur writing is setting up in our minds! 😍😍😍

I am blatantly copying something my friend wrote cos it fit u perfectly- I wanna make sweet dripping love with your intellect through artful conversation and connect and be emotionally embraced in a deep meaningful exchange of thoughts, Ideas and understanding (Twin, this line somehow encompassed what many of us feel..except for the sweet dripping love ha ha ha.. A guy wrote it, so we need to excuse him but the rest of the lines were beautiful )

hey all..

just read the comments..will reply to all in a minute...

thanks for them anyway...was on the road...

Hey rushtrip i have read your scenes for the first time and couldnt help but read all of them in a go. Amazing is the word. you write beautifully. you have now found an avid reader in me.