Jiya's Poems Station-1..GOOD BYE ALL OF U

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: abhijeetdaya
aayi hai koi bahaar banke
aur chaa gayi hai dil mein sabke

madhur bol aur maasomiyat se

khush kiya hai dil sabka isne

kum nahi hai woh koi pari se

jaadu chaata hai uske aane se

chaar chaand lag jaate hain

uski ye meethi shaayari se

Kyun Jiya sahi kahaa na?

Abh-daya ji aap bhi chppe rustam niakal..etane achhe kavi ho to apana bhi eak separate thread kholiye aur hame bhi aapaki kavitaononka raspan karane dijiye....bahut achha likha hein👏

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hin_sa

@hin_sa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#902

Are bhai, mujhe utni acchi tarah se shaayari nahi aati. Bas mood accha ho toh likh leti hoon 2- 4 lines. Waise bhi mujhe koi experience nahi hai 😆

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: abhijeetdaya
Are bhai, mujhe utni acchi tarah se shaayari nahi aati. Bas mood accha ho toh likh leti hoon 2- 4 lines. Waise bhi mujhe koi experience nahi hai 😆

Likhte raho...experience ho jayega dear.,....😃

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sneh.

@sneh.

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: Shagnika

Likhte raho...experience ho jayega dear.,....😃

Yeah @abhijeetdaya Shagnika apne experience se bol rahi hain 😆

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hin_sa

@hin_sa

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#905

You are so dedicated and patient. No one takes so much of trouble to acknowledge every IF member like you do. Thanks for this beautiful poem.

Edited by abhijeetdaya - 15 years ago

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Jeet Banerjee

@jeet.

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#906

really this is d best 1,jiya di.....specially coz u took all d names!!

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m_kal2011

@m_kal2011

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#907

I am honoured, my dear. Really you made me happy.
Thank you very , very, .......... very much.

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#908

Thanks you jeet thanks mkal ..Finally I have dompleted this poem..it's difficult but gave me really good experience and happiness....thanks verybody for appiciating,crating peoms for me...and I wold like to Thnks BHinder for giving me the lovely idea...Agar aap ne ye nahi diya hota...to mein nahi likha pati.I I have almost coverd each and every IF memeber here..I hope u all enjoyed it..love all.

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m_kal2011

@m_kal2011

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#909

@ Jiya I tried this in my very weak Hindi.

Jiya.... o hamari peyari Jiya
Tumne toh kamal kar diya.
Kahun mein keya.... bahut sukriya,
Dil aaj mera khush ho giya..

(sorry for the mistakes)