RN FIC: UNCHAINED HEART--13UD pg 70 4/5/11

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey everyone this is my first fanfic...
I wrote this fic two years back on paper... and because my laziness and my busy schedule of studies never posted it.

As I am free these days, I finally copy this fic on MS word ... so already seven update are ready...

I know, it can never be good as those fic written by arwa, priya, mahak, anu
and so many other writers
[sorry I don't remember other writers name, but I do remember their great work], but still I tried my best.
Index

INtroduction-1pg

1Ud-pg2 2Ud-pg5

3Ud-pg11 4Ud-pg16
5Ud -pg21 6Ud-pg25
7Ud-pg30 8Ud-pg35
9Ud-pg42 10Ud-pg49
11Ud-pg56 12Ud-pg63
13Ud-pg70
All your valuable comments, suggestion I criticism are needed

Introduction:-
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/1225/oieunchainedheart.gif




VIRAJ DRISHTI


Take my hand and follow me All my life I've been afraid of love
to that place you long to be. With a fear to lose, I found my love
Take my hand and trust my way, I long to set aside the pain
in that place we forever stay. For a life of love is to gain

Follow me toward the sand; He'd want to be a part of me
we'll run and play, hand in hand. His light inside would then grow dim
Take my heart and hold it true; Killing all his vigor and his vim
forever I'll stay close to you. A shadow not of him, but now of me.

Seize my words and listen well, Fear has kept me away from the goal,
then forever I will tell. The terror yet still takes its toll
Trust your heart and follow me, And yet I've ached to his soul
to that place we long to be. To join with him and make me whole

My heart is in you and life too, . Tear this insane fear apart,
UNCHAIN my HEART & feelings too, . UNCHAIN my fettered HEART
just as I will do for you. . Grant me a love, a brand new start




Hope you all like this type of intro...

now I know how difficult to write those long update ...
hats off to all those writers⭐️

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Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hiiii pinka...

jahan tak main janti hun yeh tumhara first fic nahi hai...!!! tum ne pahle bhi koi fic likha tha...jise adhura chod diya tha...ryt...???
baht hi khubshurat sa naam rakha hai tum ne is fic ka...n poster bhi ek dam MAST banaya hai...
Viraj n Drishti...nice names...
Intro ek dam awesome hai...

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Pinka!!!
First of all, Welcome to the gang of writers. Thanku so much for writing it and now, as u r free we want u to regularly update the ff and I know u will do this too....All the best for ur ff...

The name of ff is just beautiful and the poster is equally awesome.
Names of the characters are very sweet and different too.
The intro is awesome, m very excited to read the first part...
Post it soon...

I am waiting eagerly.
Luv Preet

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesoooome INTRO........
superb....
wonderful........
loved it to the core..........
eagerly waiting for the 1st part.........
thanx for the pm.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice intro please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Priyanka

Nice prologue...
Waiting for the update.😊
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb intro. pls cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi
the introduction is nice the name of the ff is also very nice
plz cont soon and do pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Interesting prologue!!!!!!

The names Viraj and Drishti are very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The poster is lovely!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiii Pinka,

The name of the fic is so beautiful n the siggy is awesome 👏👏👏👏

Fabulous intro ,Viraj N Drishti....names r so lovely
eagerly waiting to read the first part
please continue soon n thank you so much for the pm
luv
yogitha

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