hey Pinku,
how r u ?? waise i m sure, wo jhoolti hui chuhiya dekh ke tu pakka bahut hasne waali hai.. dhoond dhoond ke nikala hai use bil se :-D
ab aakhir tujhe new year jo wish karna tha IF par.. baaki phone par to mein already kar hi chuki 😆
chal ab new year to i m sure tera rocking hi jaane waala hai, to ab zara kaam ki baat par aate hai. I mean the reason, why i am here.. Ab kya hai na, meri jo friend hai na, pinku, bahut hi sweet hai, but ek writer pinku bhi hai, jo ek number ki nalayak hai... kehti hai, jab tak reply post nahi karungi, tab tak, no ud.. to maine socha ab naye saal par use bhi khush kar hi doo... and ab isse pehle ki tu complain kare ki maine last sunday reply promise kiya tha, tujhe bata doo, last sunday yahan poore time baarish ho rahi thi and light nahi thi...
ok, ab reply par aate hai.. pehle to tujhe bada waala sorry 😊
ye sorry isliye, coz i made u wait so long.. pata hai, maine bhi aaj hi dekha ki last reply maine 12 october 2010 ko post kiya tha.. phew, really long time. pata hi nahi laga, ki tu itne dino se wait kar rahi hai..
chal, ab mein har part ka reply yahan isiliye post kar rahi hoon, ki tujhe peeche doondhna na pade...
Update 11
ok, it was as usual awesome, fantastic, great... ab aage ke compliments to tujhe pata hi honge, to wo sab add kar lena 😆 best thing was ki finally is update mein kuch secrets reveal ho gaye.. pehla to tension door hui ki whether RN and ishq were safe or not, but Arth ne unhe bacha liya.. and Thank God, and Thank u for that... and yes, Arth se yaad aaya, Arth ki mystry bhi to ab jaa ke hi solve hui.. so he was raj's best frnd, and unki friendship story bhi kaafi interesting thi.. Loved the way raj saved the girl's reputation, and later, how Arth came to help Raj.. i think mein pehle bhi bata chuki hoon ki u r a master at writing Flash back scenes, and this one was no exception..
chalo, ab present mein aate hai.. Introductions part were great.. i mean jaise Arth, Drishti, and Ishq ki friendship hui, it was hilarious to read... specially, ishq referring him as eco.. and Drishtika shuru mein uspe trust na karna, normal hi tha, but good to see her getting relaxed later on..
and Arth ki nazro ki taareef karna to bhool hi gayi.. probably he has understood RN's feelings(ab aalekh baba, ok, arth here, ke paas hi to ganga jamuna saraswati basti hai 😆)
waise Arth ki planning bhi achchi thi.. hotel mein Rn ki entry ke liye.. and the designs posted by u were also tremendous..
ok, now let me move to the next part quickly.. ab to aakhir drishti ki marriage ka secret open hone wala hai.. to chalo, ab us part par aate hai, in my next comment 😊
Update 12
this was also a great ud.. although tune marriage ka secret to reveal nahi kiya, but atleast RN ki dosti to kara di.. i mean, waise to wo shuru se hi saath hi hai ( and hamesha rahenge bhi) but, flashbacks mein Drishti hamesha hi Raj se naraaz rehti thi, but then how did she started trusting him was a mystry.. and wo mystry bhi tune is ud mein reveal kar di, which was gr8 to read.
ok, fb se hi start karte hai.. 1st fb was touching. Drishti lost sulokshna ji too.. and ab ishi ki responsibility completely uski hai, and ab ishi aur wo hi ek doosre ke liye family hai.
ok, moving to 2nd FB, Probably she has lost so much in life, isiliye wo ishq ko lekar over protective ho gayi hai, but then, she can not be blamed for that, bas uske is over protective attitude ka saara anjaam Raj ko jhelna pada.. ek to Ishq ki galti par us bechare ka shoulder dislocate ho gaya, upar se drishti ne use hi daant bhi pila di.. but chalo, everything happens for gud.. isi bahaane hamare RN ek doosre ke close aa gaye, and this incident marked the beginning of one of the most beautiful love story.
waise Arth is beautiful love story ko bahut achche se understand karta hai, tabhi to hi said that drishti ko dard dene ka matlab hai, raj ko dard dena
"tum chaaho to mat bata kero.. ise bare mein.. kyonki tumhe dukhi kerna matalb viraj ko dukhi kerna"
This was my favorite line..
waise ek aur bhi fav hai..
Raj's promise to stay with them..
"main tumhe aur ishk ko chod ke kahin nahi ja raha.. "He said it quite authoritatively while looking in her light brown eyes."
overall, baaki part bhi kaafi achcha tha... the way every move was being planned was interesting to read.. specially the reason why Arth has chosen to move to Ranikhet. The way RN's feeling were coming out, and the way they were still fighting with their emotions was greatly written. but ab type karte karte i m tired, to ud 13 pe reply ab thodi der baad karti hoon...😆 waise bhi mera reply tere ud jitna lamba hota jaa raha hai 😆
BTW, this is also a kind of badla reply ko is point pe rokna.. tune bhi to ud itne galat point pe roka.. AAkhir future mein aisa kya hone wala tha??( wo to achcha hai that i have already read that part 😆)
Edited by neha10.for.u - 13 years ago
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