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Posted: 15 years ago
Poor Geet...after having given herself comppletely to teh person she trusts and loves...she comes face to face with another ugly truth...What will she do...Will she feel used and betrayed once again? Will Maan and Dadi believe her..Will Maan be able to accept the child knowing it's Dev's as it will be a constant reminder to him..Yikes, ab mera sarr chakraa raha hai!šŸ˜•
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Good morning.....Wow..you have been a busy bee this weekend.....huh....loved all of the 4 updates!1 Phenomenal writing as usual...and since you top each scene withe next one.......You know you are raising our expectations a NOTCH higher every time!!! šŸ‘šŸ‘Maan and Geet...wow...such romance...and passion...and Geet took the plunge!!! Phew....glad to know that Vicky and Nargis are not the only Blindly Passionate Fools...!!!šŸ˜‰

WOW....Ab Geet ko tau tumne ek ajeeb precipice pe laa ke khadha kardiya.....kare tau kya kare....peeche dekhe to bhi khayyi....aur aage dekhe tau bhi khayyi.....now from 10,000 ft view...she has to decide which is the less steep fall.....Peeche...jahan pe DEV se judi DUKH bhaari yaadien hai....or aage jahan pe ek khoobsurat nazzara hain....lekin....yeh nazzara ek dhoka bhi tau ho sakta hain....MAAN the man she is wildly passionate about.....or is Maan...Dev's brother that....can Dhoka baazi be an inherited trait???

My heart goes out to her....no wonder she collapsed...the conscious mind cannot possibly grapple with so many complications.....as such it was forced to shutdown temporarily!!

Loved all of the updates, and the details that use to describe the surroundings, the emotions, the feelings.....there is so much texture in your updates, that I feel like I am an active participant in the story....either as Geet's conscious mind, or her subconscious desire....so KUDOS to you for Brilliant writing and execution of these scenes!!!šŸ‘



thank you so much Nargis missed you over the weekend...this weekend i was completely vella..shows ehšŸ˜‰
but yeah...i have come to the point where..flight or fight is the question..much like what Maan is going through in the serial. Should Geet trust anyone or go away lick her wounds and start afresh? Should she spill the whole truth to the family of the person who betrayed her or should she think that how can one get two brothers against..

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Posted: 15 years ago

Rockinggggggg ..yaar... i luvd the way u brought in the revelation..no hi voltage drama......absolutely ..logical...!! great twist...

n LOLz... maan is feeling guilty abt the morning session... 😳how cute.. !! but poor guy.......wonder how he will react when he finds out the truth abt Dev..n Geets relations wit Dev....
Fab update dear.....anxious abt the next update...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Rockinggggggg ..yaar... i luvd the way u brought in the revelation..no hi voltage drama......absolutely ..logical...!! great twist...

n LOLz... maan is feeling guilty abt the morning session... 😳how cute.. !! but poor guy.......wonder how he will react when he finds out the truth abt Dev..n Geets relations wit Dev....
Fab update dear.....anxious abt the next update...



thanks armu...

melodrama..to i leave to our indian TV...i like logic...

you see i am a combination of logic and romanticism...
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Posted: 15 years ago
finally the truth has come out, I wonder what daadi will think of geet as she hardly knows her, will geet tell them all about dev, will daadi believe her? Soo many questions in my head right now. Is dev gonna be making an entry into the FF soon Vru?
I hope geet does tell everyone the truth and dev gets what he deserves altho i think geet would normally ran away in the 1st instance and then maan will give advice/courage to stick up for herself but will be hearbroken to find out his bro is culprit
ps i love how maan knew how geet was feeling without her telling him and holded her hand
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sigma

finally the truth has come out, I wonder what daadi will think of geet as she hardly knows her, will geet tell them all about dev, will daadi believe her? Soo many questions in my head right now. Is dev gonna be making an entry into the FF soon Vru?

I hope geet does tell everyone the truth and dev gets what he deserves altho i think geet would normally ran away in the 1st instance and then maan will give advice/courage to stick up for herself but will be hearbroken to find out his bro is culprit
ps i love how maan knew how geet was feeling without her telling him and holded her hand



yeah...i have many questions too and am mulling over how to verbalise the thoughts...it is a bit of a dilemma...

Is Dev important enough to be brought..or should i just stick to Maaneet?
Geet will run..first..and then find strength..remembering how Maan has encouraged her..but...will she tell who is the real reason why she ran..or give a plausible excuse?

daadi had liked the spunky girl...but now she knows she is pregnant. She is in a shock but hasnt verbalised it yet..she will talk to Maan...separately but..will she accept a pregnant girl for her bahu? this is before the real truth comes out....?
oh my...help me if you can...

any ideas?


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Posted: 15 years ago
i know it must hard Vru esp when there's soo many different routes u could take the story
I don't know if geet would tell the real reason she ran away unless she was still gonna go thro with the wedding (which i hope she does) so she would have to tell him as she will def come across dev again then however if she decides not to marry him now then the only way i can see the truth coming out is if dev comes back
I think daadi will def have doubts about geet now and will speak to maan as will be worried for him, she might accept geet as her bahu but if geets says dev is the father and if he denies it then will she believe her over dev, i have doubts esp since dev is soo sneaky, he will probably make it look like geet is a liar since it's taken soo long for maan to forgive him for the last time
Plus if geet does tell every1 about dev, i think he has to make an entry into the storyline as i'm sure maan would wanna speak to him
that's just my opinion, i don't know if it helped or made things worse
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Posted: 15 years ago
yeah...you have helped..

confuse me even more...

no i am just kidding..i do have a quirky sense of humour...well i think so anyway...

but yes it helps...it will have to be worked out...


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Posted: 15 years ago


Run to you...


Geet spoke the minute they entered. I have to go, she said, I cant be here. I have to go. Maan went up to geet and asked frowning, What is going on Geet? What is wrong? You are not well! where do you want to go? Geet looks around wildly, in her mind looking for an escape from here, anywhere but here. She needed to get away. She could hardly breathe. Her mind was spinning. She could not believe, maan and dev were related. Maan had said dev. She recalled the moments when she had heard Dev's voice and wondered whether it was him. All the time, it was him, she had not been hallucinating. Dev was Maan's brother. Her head was going around in circles and she put up both her hands to her head to stop it from whirling around. Maan realizing she was going to faint again, held her against him and said. You are not going anywhere. You are staying here. Daadima, mein Geet ko apne kamre mein le jaa raha hoon. Mein usse settle karke wapis aata hoon. He picked Geet up in his arms and strode up the stairs and pushed the door to room open with his leg and walked to the bed and placed her gently on the bed. Geet tried to get up but he put a hand on her shoulder and said, No Geet! Mein tumhari saari baatein manta hoon, ye baat nahin maanonga. You need to rest. You are not well. we will talk in some time. Tum aaram karo. Mein Daadima se baat karke aata hoon. Maan then went down to talk to Daadima.

Geet had squeezed her eyes shut as she still felt imbalanced not because of anything but the revelation. How could she have not asked when the doubts had come? She had brushed them aside thinking Dev would be in Canada. What was happening with her? How on earth did this happen to her? One brother had ruined her and one wanted to build life with her. Duniya mein bas yeh dono mile the mujhe. Oh Maan kyun Dev ka bhai hai. Dev kyun maan ka bhai hai.

She wept silent tears as she huddled into foetal position. She sobbed as her thoughts jumped from one even to other, connecting the dots that had seemed too farfetched to her at the time. Then suddenly her eyes opened and she had the most devastating emotion in her eyes. Betrayal, she thought, had Maan betrayed her too? Were both the brothers alike? Did Maan take her land as part of the plan? No that can't be. Maan was not like that. He can't be she denied to herself. Can he? She did not know what to think anymore. But she knew one thing, she had to get out of here. She cannot marry maan, She cannot be with him. She must loathe him now must she not? Why did she not feel any loathing for maan. Why she felt, he was not a betrayer. Why did she want to put her head on his chest and cry. Why did she want the comfort of his arms, why she thought he will make everything right?

Geet, slowly got up on the bed, found the bathroom and washed her face. She looked at herself in the mirror and told herself, you are going to be strong Geet. You are going to face this by yourself. She had to get away from maan. She could not tell him the truth. How would she have him go against his own brother. But wait a minute, will he want to? Who would Maan choose between her and Dev? What about daadi? Would they believe if she told them about Dev and that the child was his? Maan had accepted another man's child. Will he think, his brother could have done this to her? Would he believe her or Dev? Geet splashed some more water on her face, resolved to move from Delhi tonight. She will find another city. Another life but she had to get away from maan. She thought, will I always be running away for someone else's mistake? Will I always have to pay for them? How long babaji, she looked up, how long will I have to carry this burden by myself. You show me hope and then you snatch away in a whiff. Kyun mere saath aisa hota hai. She looked again at her image and made her face stern and said, stop pitying yourself Geet. Go. Go and find yourself another life, this time its just you and the baby.

She silently slipped out of Khurana Mansion, walked up the long drive and hollered a passing taxi which did not stop and decided that like everything else in life, nothing was going to be easy for her and walked towards her house.

Edited by rushtrip - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was painful!!!

I feel so sorry for both Maan and Geet....she has been devasted n Maan will be when he finds the truth!!

Pakdo usse Maan!!

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