Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet-RajeevAamna FF#2-Part 30 Pg-1.

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golu_1677

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

superb ending. Loved it ........

Chah and Yash r one so happy..... Loved the lipstick part.. yash is so sweet.

Waiting for the new fic....

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Okay....Dii....I'm typing for the second tym....and mujhme zyada energy nahi hai....so will keep it short!!!

On the previous part.....I liked Yash n Chah's kitchen convo wid Swayam....and then their argument which lead to sumthing very interesting.....and then the bike race.....everything was nice. But I loved the confession part.....u did complete justice to it.....after all this was the part we all had been w8ing for since so long.....and then yash got Swayam into jail, Vasu was sent to London.....Maya's letter.....Lalit's chenging Point of viw.....Trishna's inclusion.....everything was done beautifully Dii.

And of course the kids.....they were lovely....thnx for the beautiful fic Dii....

Well I'm sorry for hurrying up....but guess I dont hav any choice other than that.....however I'll try to catch ur new fic soon.....bye n take care!!