Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet-RajeevAamna FF#2-Part 30 Pg-1.

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Nice part !!

Very nicely you have tied up all the loose ends to perfection !!

Add me to the PM list of your next Story !!

Regardz,

Vandu

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sanjana25

@sanjana25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

it was really good
loved it
contd soon

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C3_IF

@C3_IF

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

haa, so finally me done wid the reading 2day itself, wen i came early frm clg 2day & saw ur PM i jumped saying ke its cum up earlier than u said, & i must as hw much i was eager 2 read ths last part, u'v risen much much above the expectations. Though sad tht d curiosity of reading the next parts of HPKJ has ended wid the end of ths fic but on a positive, note luking 4wrd eagerly 2 read humraahi :) & rahi baat last part ki & ovr all fic ki, so it was simply mindblowing & 2 awesum & u'v done a damn awesum job here, must say wid evry fic u'r just improving more & more, keep up d gr8 gud wrk....luking forward 2 humraahi & do add me in it's PM list :) All the best 😊👏👍🏼🤗

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monika

@monikaseth

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

👏👏👏👏awesome mind blowing dear👏👏👏👏👏👏
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MoonDesir

@MoonDesir

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

finally finished reading!!!
loved it 😛, nice!!!

had a good laugh on these two-
-tho humara pyaar hum dono ko sambhal lega…😆
-"your wife loves you"🤣

waise the last poetry suits the story well😉

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

hey dear am so happy after reading the update.....................fantastic and excellent story dear.....................all's well at the end..................i really loved every scene......................yash and chah they are really wonderful and cute.............the bike race was wonderful were chah gave her full support to yash and yash too took care that she doesnt get hurt at the same time they win the race................and they becoming close was very beautifully described and the mirror message scene was funny...........swayam got his punishments for his deeds and lalit glad that atleast at the end he got to know everything and the family and chah and yash accepting him was nice..............and everything turned out good and for the better rather the best in their lives..................abhi bhi mujhe yaad hai when u started the fic saying their mulaqat will be a mulaqat but not as their first mulaqat.............and now the fic has ended..............will miss this fic for sure.............hope to see u soon on Humraahi fic dear and include me to ur pm list.....................i think this is ur 3rd fic fic after dil se dil thak and zindagi ke sisilay..................just for clarification asking.......................

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

mindblowing part

cant beleive da journey of chah and yash has been completed but all good things come to an end,cant wait 2 read ur new fanfic.coming back to the part all i can say is that u have amazingly tied up all the lose ends and have beautifully potrayed the bond between chah and yash.I really liked the first scene were chah really stands up to swayam and shows how much trust she has on yash.the scenes between yash and chah were beautifully described i really liked the way u potrayed the concern that yash and chah have 4 each other and this also shows how much they love each other.The bond between both the familes was amazingly described.i really loved the scene were chah reveals her feellings 4 yash and also the way she said i love u to yash.swayam truly got what he deserved it seems that if he was not jealous of yash he may have had a better life.im glad that at the end everything was good between yash and lalit.lalit really proved that he loved sparsh a lot.Hogi pyaar ki jeet was an amazing fanfiction i really liked the way u potrayed the bond between all the charachters and especially yash and chah.Finally the love between yash and chah won.

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Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 15 years ago

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Deby

@Crazy_4_RA

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Hey, sorry for late reply....
that ws a perfect & suitable ending of the whole journey....😊
Sparsh is really cute.......😳
😳& also the ending poem ws lovely.....👏
it ws really nice being a part of the whole journey.....
As I said keep it up for trying to be a script / story writer in Tv / Bollywood....😳

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humaira rajpoot

@Humaira.Rajpoot

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Ho he gaye Pyaar Kii Jeet i im so happy realy end main yash has a complete family and happiness awasom aur toh aur lalit b insaan ban gaya aur woh stupid sawayam uss ko b uss k keye ke saza mil gaye it was a perfect end thanks dear for sach a lovely story and making me a part of this journey thanks alot in fect love u for this hope bohat jald he tum phir se koi mindblowing se story start karo love u

Edited by Humaira.Rajpoot - 15 years ago