'An Unknown Mistake' (Horror Mayur N Sajan FF) - Page 23

Originally posted by: maisha.hossain7

sana its awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continuee soon n pm meee

ok dear update is on a wayyyyyyy

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

can I call u Sanu di? coz ur elder and I dun have a sis in real life.........although I ve many on IF!

as uwish dear😳

thanx guys for ur support keep commting here comes my update

N:kya hain mayank kyun mujhe aisa dekh rahe ho (she said feeling a bit shy)

M:yeh dekh raha hoon ki meri biwi acting kitni acchi tarah sa kar leti hai

N:ma..matlab

M:matlab yeh (he said hugging her from back)ki tum janti thi ki sam jhoot bol raha hain phir bhi uski khushi ka liye mujhsa naraz hone ki acting kar rahi thi (nupur just smiled)

N:sam ko khush dekhna ka liye kuch bhi

M:mujhe bhi naraz kardogi use khush karna ka liye

N:haan kyun ki tum sam sa bahut pyaar karte ho tum usse cha kar bhi dukhi nahi dekh sakte aur woh dukhi bhi hota hain tumhari wajah sat oh tum dukhi ho jate ho aur main tumhan dukhi nahi dekh sakti isiliye,,,,,,,

M:tum itni acchi kyun ho (nupur just smiled)

N:chodho mujhe ,mujhe packing karna hain

M:baat katna toh koi tumsa sikhe hum toh issi ada par fida hain by god

N:mayank (she said a bit shy )

M:nupur

N:hmm

M:hum morena sirf 1 week ka liye jayainga

N:kyun mayank

M:bas aisa hi tum kaam kapde hi pack karo

N:bas aisa hi matlab main dekh rahi hoon jab sa tumna morena ka naam sunna hai khoye khoye sa pareshaan sa rehte ho problem kya hain

M:ku..kuch nahi hain tum bas packing karo main fresh ho kar ata hoon

N:isse kya hua im sure morena main zarur kuch hua hain but WHAT…??????

She start packing the things again wondering what is with this morena thing……..

Gunji was running as fast as she can n went into terras n unknowingly she was about to jump from the terras samrat just caught her hand n pulled her onto him causing both to fall on ground…they were just lost in each other eyes

In his whole life first time sam noticed a girl eye her eyes r brown in colour but really as deep as swimming pool n she has every big eyes n there was unknown tense in her eyes too but y she is tense he cant just make it out……..he was confuse

Gunji was freaked out by the incident the thing she was about to jump from the terras has shaked her really well…

They both got up n sam started shouting

S:tumhara dimag kharab hain kya tum terras sa khudh nah kyun wali thi main tumhain kuch itna bura bhi nahi karne wala tha ki tum dar ka mare terras sa hi khudh jao…

G:nahi samrat mujhe pata kya….ki….. main….kyun…. achaak ki….(she don't know what to say how to explain him it was out of her hands this was really stupid thing ever happen with her in her whole life n she knew one thing was she by herself was not about to jump out of terras)

G:samrat mai..min khudh nahi jump karna wali thi

S:what do u mean ab apni galti chupana ka liye tum yeh sab bologi

G:no samrat im saying u ki….

Just than nupur enter the terras

N:arry tum logh yahan kya kar rahe ho packing nahi karni

S:bas bhabhi jaa rahe hain c'mon gunjan

G:but samrat wo..

S:woh woh kya chalo koi bhana nahi chalega tumhara

N:hmm hmm kya chal raha hain bhai

S:kuch nahi bhabhi bas use husband wife tings

N:accha

S:hmm (he said bringing a fake shy on his face)chalo gunjan(by saying so he took hold of gunjan hand n took her into there room gunji was still in gr8 shock)

Nupur enter the room to find mayank in towel only n she immidately turned around n mayank noticed that n he got irritated…

M:kya nupur kyun tum newly wed bride ki tarah Sharma rahi ho jaise ki tumnah mujhe isse bhi kam kapdon main kab…….

N:shhhhhhhhh(knowing wht he was about to say she made him quite)kya bol rahe ho

M:kyun tumhain pata nahi

N:chup karo

She was about to go when mayank took hold of nupur hand n made her close to himself

N:kya kar rahe ho chodho

M:romance

N:pehla apna towel toh

M:kya hua towel ko……

He immidately freed her from his grip n look down to find everything right towel on its right place he was shock not by the towel thing but by the nupur prank

M:not bad nupur shergill samrat ka saath saath reh kar tumha bhi pranks kehlna aa gaya (he said recovering from the shock)

She just gave a smile n went out of room saying to him to get down with suitcase as soon as he can……

Sajan enter there room n sam immidately closed door

G:samrat main sach keh rahi hoon I myself was not about to jump

S:kya baccho jaisi baat kar rahi ho phir kaun tumhain waha sa dhakalega siwaye mera wahan koi nahi tha tum apni galti maan kyun nahi leti galti manna buri baat nahi hain n im sorry ki tum itna dar gayi mujhsa ki tum chatpa sa khudh nah hi wali thi I promise main aisa kabhi nahi karunga………..

He hugged her…….. gunji hugged him back but still she was not satisfied with the talk

After sometime sam broke the hug to find gunji still tense not knowing what to do how to make her feel satisfy he kissed her on her lips passionately…gunji was first shock but she too responded back with equal passion……….

They nearly kissed for a min or couple of mins they were just feeling the taste of each other salva sam broke the kiss n started kissing on her neck not knowing what he is doing he slowly turned gunji around n was about to unpin her pallu when

N:gunjan samrat kahan ho dair ho rahi hain human come soon

Nupur shouted from down bringing sajan back to sense..samrat was shock by his act but did not said a word gunji was really shyed she turned around n hugged sam…sam just smiled by her actn signed in relief as he thought she maybe anger

After sometime sam broke the hug n made gunji look into his eyes

S:gunjan pata nahi mujhe abhi kya hua but ek baat samjh aa gayi I cant stay away from u

Gunji blushed deep shadeof red

S:pata nahi main tumhain kabhi pyar karunga yeh "I LOVE U" bolunga ki nahi but itna jaan gaya hoon ki I cant lose u

G:I too…(she said a bit shy n in a low tone)

S:toh phir friends

G:friends (they shaked their hands)

S:"maina gunjan sa jis wajah sa bhi shaadi ki ho but ek baat toh jaan aur samjh gaya hoon yeh bahut hi simple n sweet girl hai n I should not harm her feelings by anyways "

S:toh chaplain neech sab hamara intezaar kar rahe honga

G:ok

They took their bags n came down

S:hum sa zyda toh aap lag rahe ho newly wed couple

M:chup kar sam aur chal

S:yup chalo maina kab kaha ki mujhe nahi chalna

M:nupur tum apna devar ko boldo ki yeh chuprahe warna I will kill him here only

S:bhai bhai nah raha bhabhi ab tum bhi tum nah rahogi kya

M:what

N:tum nahi samjh paoge main samjh gayi hoon n don't worry sam chaiye duniya yahan ki waha ho jaye yeh bhabhi tera saath kabhi nahi chodegi

S:thanx bhabhi (nupur just smiled)

M:bahut natak baaz ho gaye ho tum logh chalo ab huh

SAnu giggled to mayanks irritate more

M:I hate u guys

S:n:we too…..!!!!

Gunji burst out laughing

G:u guys r really funny (she laughed whole heartedly which made mayur n samrat too smile)

Gunji got shy thinking what she just done just now

M:don't be shy gunjan tum aisi hi hasti raho kafi acchi lagti ho

S:akhir biwi kis ki hain

M:tu kabhi nahi sudhrega chal

N:yup chalo

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Mayank was really upset thinking y the hell they going morena the place where in his whole life he never wanted to go the place where what can happen no one can say god only knows y the hell they r going..

Nupur hugged him n sad "kya hua mayank"

M:kuch nahi

S:tum morena kabhi gayi ho

G:nahi

S:kyun

G:aisa hi London main, main apni studies main hi bahut busy rehti thi

The again tense look came into gunji eyes talking aout morena he cant get it y

S:r u sure tum kabhi morena nahi gayi

G:nope kabhi nahi

N she turn her head to look out of window

(nupur made mayank see into her eyes n asked what the matter but mayank just smiled n nodded in no indicating nothing had happen)

Yaada teri yaada aati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai(gunji was thinking about someone some flashbacks she was seeing but we cant make it out the other one is whom with her in the flashback as it is in white n black)
Tanhaion mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon(she closed her eyes letting a tear escape from her eye)
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai
Kyun hoon abh bhi main yun bekaraar(sam was thinking about someone same as gunji we cant see the girl face )
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa (pataa)
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa(sajan looked at each other while this lyrics going in background)

Faasle hain magar phir bhi tu door nahin(nupur looked at mayank)
Maanke hum to hai, par tu majboor nahin(mayank was feeling helpless)
Har lamha mujhko ye tadpati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai(mayank was just having flashback too of morena)
Tanhaion mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai
Kyun hoon abh bhi main yun bekaraar(sam turned his head in other side letting tears escap from his eyes)
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa (pataa)
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, doondhe apni manzil ka pataa

("kya morena jana sahi hain" this was not thought by mayank but y samrat)

Yaada teri yaada aati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai
Tanhaion mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai
Kyun hoon abh bhi main yun bekaraar
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa (pataa)
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa

(sajan n mayur with this song came out of airport n entered into morena the place where there life will change for ever)

Mayank was driving…..

S:arry bhai this is not our root

M:yup we r goin………

Before he could complete his sentence the car started drving by himself sajan n nupur did not notice mayak did the car was just drivingitself mayank just kept the hands on it n was shock to the core….

The car stopped near a big bunglow n sajan nupur came down asking to mayank what happen mayank was just seeing towards bunglow not knowing what to do now……?????

Samrat opened his eyes with jerk "shit how dum im how can I forget the main clue shit shit shitttttttttt" he changed his night suit as soon as he can n ran out of house picking his car keys n wallet n was about to sit in car his cell started ringing……

S:dam "hello"

Dr:hello samrat

S:yes doc kya hua

Dr:sam gunjan ko hosh aa gaya but woh..wo…(the call got cutted)

S:hello hello..chashmish ko hosh aa gaya yes

He sat in car forgetting what he was about to do n started driving his car as fast as he can…….

He reached hospital n ran into room to find gunji really out of control n shouting n beating herself with anything what she get……..

S:chashmish yeh tum kya kar rahi ho relax chashmish

Gunjan took a knife n was about to cut her wriste but as sam came in btw a scratch came on his hand n in anger he slapped gunji hard on her face n gunji got enconsious before getting enconcious the thing sam notice was her eyes..her eyes were first red than it change into golden brown than finally into her own eyes brown….colour…

Sam came near her there were many scratches on her face n on her leg he picked her up n made her ly on bed n srated caressing on her cheek lovingly n an tear escap from his eyes n he said "I LOVE U CHASHMISH"

As soon as he said this words nupur got up n sat straight on her bed HER HAIR FLYING IN IR AS IT WAS OPEN n sam again notice the same thing in her(nupur) black eyes which he notice in gunji eyes which now changed into light red n golden brown colour…………

N suddenly nupur started shouting

N:nahi mujhe mujhe bachalo mujhe mujhe nahi marna

S:kya…kya hua bhabhi

Sam said coming near her

N:mera mera pass math ana doc yeh mujhe maar dalega

S:kya bol rahi ho bhabhi aap

The policemens who were passing by stopped at the entarence

N:haan tumhi nah mujhe aur gunji ko marna ki koshish ki tum hi nah..mujh……(she got uncoincious)

Sam stood still not knowing what just happen a policeman came inn n said

Policeman: "U R UNDER ARREST"

Yaada teri yaada aati hai, jaan meri jaan jaati hai
Tanhaion mein rehta hoon, khud se hi aksar ye kehta hoon
Kyun tune dil toda, kyun tune yun choda
Kyun tera abh bhi rahe dil ko intezaar
Kyun chali aati hai, kyun tadpaati hai
Kyun hoon abh bhi main yun bekaraar
Aye khuda mujhko bataa tu rehta kahan, kya tera pataa (pataa)
Hum to yahan pe musafir hain, jo doondhe apni manzil ka pataa

(these lines were going in BG)

In this all thing will they will ever be able to find out their "An Unknown Mistake"...........

Lots of love

Sanu.😳

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Originally posted by: dolly18

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i updates my reply chk it out babes

awesomeeeeee updt dear
mindblowinggggg
ye kya kar rhi hai tu..??😆 Its all getting soo much confusing.. 😕😆
do cont soon...
suspense create karna ho toh koi tujhse seekhe..😆

hey dear great part loved it a lot

Originally posted by: dolly18

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okkkkkkkkk sanuu u r awsome tune meraa yucky modd bilkul theeeeeeekkkk kar diya

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii kya update that by god

everything was perfectttt

sam got arrested (ise jail se itna pyaar kyun hai>???

n u know what that last scene i was actually scared damm scaredddddd esp when nupsi woke uppp

n gunji was abt too jump by herself

n mayu was driving but te car took him to that bunglaw of its own accord????

all this is scaryy

damm sanu u r an awsome writer babessss

cant wait to read more plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss update asap plsssssssssssss

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loads of lov

dolly😳

yup i was not sure u will like it or not