new ff: ~Behti Hawa ~ part 4 pg.12

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys!! im a such a humungo fan of PH! u guys probably no me cuz of the like thousands of pic of ph i have. so i have collected their videos,pics,seen the show,made vms,and for me to be a complete fan i must write an ff!and becuz i luv them.. anywayz this is my first ff on prem heer..so a bit nervous...im going to make this ff liberal and kinda modern some stuff might be ...too adult? for some ppl...so im gonna try tht and if it works out then tell me and if it makes anyone uncomftrable or im not good at writing those kinda stuff then plz just tell me! im gonna put my mind and heart into this ff so i expect truthful comments! i have school and upcoming finals so some parts might be later than the others. and i will only continue if u guys tell me to .luv all u ph fans! wish me luck and here i go!
Bismillah ;) hope u guys like it!
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part 4 page 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1386906/new-ff-behti-hawa-part-4-pg-12

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Setting: san Diego, California

Character sketch: the characters are like done with basic college and onto the career college (u no?) so like the girls r around 20/22 guys around 24/25 not telling u guys the exact number cuz u guys imagine!imagine what age u want them to be? any suggestions?

Maan family:

Teji /blaraaj Maan:

Moved to California from India a long while back. they miss India but their whole life is Cali. , they wouldn't imagine moving back to India. They've been so busy in their lives and their kids' colleges that they haven't had time to visit back home but plan to sometime soon. They raised their daughters like princesses and are constantly worried for their shaadi s(dowry, acha ladka,etc)

Heer Maan:

Came from India when she was 10. She's smart, intelligent, a bit shy, and down to earth a bit reserved but still has fun. But when the time calls for it her shyness becomes her fierceness. She speaks her mind when the time calls for it. She secretly dreams of her prince charming even though she knows nowadays where can one find a decent husband and all the guys r nothing close to her prince charming, but she still dreams on. Is currently in nursing school and wants to be a pediatric nurse. Goes to the beach when upset about something.

Meher Maan:

Loves her big sister. She's bubbly, outspoke, outgoing, bold and beautiful. Speaks her mind. But has her limits, to being outspoken and bold. Doesn't believe in the whole prince charming stuff. Arranged marriage or love? She doesn't know and doesn't care for the time being'she just wants to focus on being a journalist.

Juneja:
Gayatri/lalit juneja: owners of juneja group of industries (which include business firms, hotels and restaurants) have been living in California for quite a while. Plan to visit India but no time. One of their biggest fears is one of their boys marrying a white/foreign girl.
Prem Juneja:
charismatic, charming and the eldest son of the juneja family. Loves his little brother and family. Feels the pressure sometimes since hes the eldest son (lots of responsibilities). plays a lot of sports, works out occasionally in the gym. He doesn't always love the female attention he gets. Sure he likes that the girls think he's hot and are practically swooning at the sight of him, but that's all because of his looks. He wants someone to like him for who he is but if a girl likes him and thinks hes hot, that's fine with him too! Wants to make his own company and own business chain like what his father did. Goes to his abandoned beach house (great view of the ocean) when mad or upset.

Preet:

mischevious, charismatic, and fun loving. Unlike his big bro, he loves the female attention. After all, what's those long hours of working out if he cant show off the abs! Always joking around, hardly ever serious. Doesn't really worry about the future. What's going to happen will happen. Probably wants to become a fireman or a private investigator.

Edited by aishu_fan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sounds fantastic! I love meet!!!! please include them in your story as well! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice character sketch
continue soon
plzz pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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mast concept update soon...........pm me plzzzzz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice....
add me 2 ur pm list!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Good luck yaar....Sound very very good.
Start soon. Can't wait to read more of it.
Kali
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome character sketch
add me to ur pm list if u have
do continue

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gr8 character sketch.....cant wait to read ur updates.......pls add me to ur pm list......hope ul cont sooon........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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A great sketch..
Thanks so much..
please add me to ur pm list
and update soon..

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