Originally posted by: sofsunmannee
hey finally u update it
its long 1
chalo intezaar ka koi toh fyaada hua
really awesme part
loved everybody just 2 gud
really outstanding
do conti it soon now
good work dear
Im really really happy to hear that you think that fayda to hua for the wait! Sorrryy I no it was long! Thnk u so much! Willl cont soon!
Originally posted by: nisha1984
nice update
Thnx
Originally posted by: uru_hershey
Dedicated to me? AWWW! Thankyou love! You're such a sweetheart.
Absolutely loved to read this update! Twice. But yeah, definitely worth it! You make everyone wait, but its definitely worth it. And... honestly, I LOVED IT. You've improved so much man. Now its summer, update more often girl! I am gonna make Zinnie read this soon!
Heer works as a nurse. She makes such a sweeet sweet nurse! If all the hospitals have these kinda nurses, it would just be so awesome. Heer is just so good with kids, just so awwwwwww!!! Make her mum understand that!
The last Prem Heer scene was nice. Ofcourse, it could have been improveeed a tinnnnyyy bit... they have just met, so its just sorta hard to come up with dialogues for them. Maybe in the future, try to make them friends. ;) Friendship... first step towards love! lol... [I am stilll wondering if Heer's dad heard Prem's voice]
Finally, the Preet+Meher Tacobell scene was just FAB. Just awesooome. Preet can be cute, funny, sweet, loving...at the same time, can be serious too. Just loved that part. The way he asked Meher out for Dinner, that was just totally unexpected, but still... it was a nice surprise. [OMG... I LOOOOVEEE PREEET! HE'S MINE]
Overall, it was just a FAB update. Sweet, cute, unexpected, and superb. Loveeed it!
Thank you soososos much for the long comment! Of course dedicated to u! u helped me so much in this ff! and the idea of the fone was all urs and so was a lot of the details and ideas throughout the ff. I couldn't have done it without u. not at all! I no I no im gonna update sooner…I hope! Yessss!! Make zinnie read!
Yea I kinda wanna be a nurse so ….yeaaaa but yea thts an awesome idea!! Heers mom shall be nice!
The ph scene was only nice? Thnk u so much for the honest opinion! Appreciate it and will make it better! But yea u understand my dilemma completely! They just met its really hard to make dialogues and scenes with them without making one look stupid or like a stalker,u no?
Thnk u sooo much! Im very glad u luved the MEET scene! Ur so FAB!
awsome update.....loved the meet part..the have a date preemer scene was also nice....looking forward to the next chapter.....haha i think meet s date will be extraordinary just like them....continue sooon
Thanks dear! Im glad u liked it! Im thinking u liked MEET scene better..? its kool! Yea I wanna make it extroadinary!
Originally posted by: brainychild92
i know the answer i know the answer... TO ARJUN!!! how cutee!!! a daddy's annoying but most of em are like em.. u gotta love em..lol
continue soon!!!
Hahaha I got so happy seeing ur comment!! Yesss!!!ur so smart! To arjun! Lool u guessed right off even with the slightest mention that arohi is getting married! Hahah go girl!
Very very true! Annoying but u gotta luv em!
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