My STORY!! 2ND TRY...UPDATED ON 30.04.10

I liked each and every word instead of this line

..for me it will be the first and the last story cos i think i am really bad at creativity!!

Never under estimate yourself. Why it will be your last. Just give a try you are good at creativity. With your each story you will be improving and we will get new stories to read.

Your story was such, I read in one go. I couldn't move till i read THE END

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

I liked each and every word instead of this line

..for me it will be the first and the last story cos i think i am really bad at creativity!!

Never under estimate yourself. Why it will be your last. Just give a try you are good at creativity. With your each story you will be improving and we will get new stories to read.

Your story was such, I read in one go. I couldn't move till i read THE END

good one. yes it was long but well written

AWESOME....!!! i mean i really liked it..1 God ... its strange.. How being a "CID" fan... we get emotionally attached to it....! I guess most of teh stories written here are about the Emotionaly bond between d officers..1!

I Loved it..!!! :D Daya-Abhi U Rawk..!! nd My Abhi Saved d Children... yohoooooooo

nice story, interesting!👍🏼 par ek baat meri samajh mein nehi aati. we have many good writers in this forum. par un sabne bechare Abhijeet ke piche hi kiun pade rahte hain? hain?😕

Originally posted by: shreela

nice story, interesting!👍🏼 par ek baat meri samajh mein nehi aati. we have many good writers in this forum. par un sabne bechare Abhijeet ke piche hi kiun pade rahte hain? hain?😕

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well actually ppl love to play (creatively ie) with abhijeet as a character.... everyone loves to see him rescued by others, himself solving his problems etc....😳😊

(No Offense Meant Guys)

Originally posted by: drilabh

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well actually ppl love to play (creatively ie) with abhijeet as a character.... everyone loves to see him rescued by others, himself solving his problems etc....😳😊

(No Offense Meant Guys)

I think Abhijeet is such a character for which you know and you don't know whether he will be able to save himself or someone will help. It keeps in curiosity. He is intelligent and smart enough to get himself out of trouble but when comes to muscular strength. hmmmm. No offences I myself like abhijjet sir very much. Its just like when daya is not around abhi it looks what if he get into trouble. With Daya around him he is secured in that way. Its what I feel

Thanx everyone for ur appreciations!!! Love u all...😊