My STORY!! 2ND TRY...UPDATED ON 30.04.10 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: prabha.

Very Nice. Good attempt. Vivek and Taasha got their moments aur apna Freddie proved yet again that he is a sweetheart. Daya-Abhi ke kya kehne. Aakhon aakhon mein baatein ho gayin. There was hardly any conversation between them during the case, except the last scene. Good to see no injuries.

Thanx for liking the story!! ...and 😆 i realised it now that Abhi-Daya only did aakhon hi aakhon mein baatein in the entire story!!!😆😆

Originally posted by: prabha.

@sagnikasenapati Wah wah jo Fireworks ki team na kar saki woh tumne kar dikhaya. I loved the last scene. Taarika leaving for good. No tacky Forensic Humor and Stone Faced Expressions. What a bliss. The last scene was very well written, I could actually see it infront of my eyes. About the case, it was different, even your last story was different. You are thinking differently, that is really good.

Thanx for the complement that my stories have been different!!!😃

Originally posted by: prabha.

However Taarika's Transfer does not mean heartbreak for Abhi Sir. Yes I understand he is sad and upset as he will not be able to see her or spend as much time with her as he used to. Lekin CID ko kitna kaam hota hai. He can't remain sad for too long. Plus, they can always be in touch on Phones, Emails, etc. Yeh to long-distance relationships ka zamaana hai bhai.

😊I agree..there wont b an xact hrtbrk!!!! Taarika might return after some yrs...(not shradhha😉)...just imagine how happy Abhi would be at that time!!! Makes me go crazy when i think of it!! he will be soooooo happy...khushi se nachne lagega!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
Glad u didnt make ure first story ure last one!!! Really fantastic job!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
No more comments!!!😭 wish there were some more comments on my 2nd story...good or bad.
Ur precious comments help me to improve!!! Plss do comment when u read the 2nd story, added to the 1st post itself!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
hey i liked the story very very very muchhhh and it was awesome dear
specially abhijeet was to nice i love him 😍and i know that u will rite more stories coz u r great
y tarika is going?
oof mera abhijeet koi baat nahi he is to cute🥳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: ayushijha

hey i liked the story very very very muchhhh and it was awesome dear

specially abhijeet was to nice i love him 😍and i know that u will rite more stories coz u r great
y tarika is going?
oof mera abhijeet koi baat nahi he is to cute🥳

Thanx dear...Taarika going cos some ppl wanted so...But not to worry cos as Prabha di said... long distance relationship ka jamaana hai!!!
u read my 1st story??
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its to nice my dear princess i love it and loved abhijeet also
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i kust loved yur story y dont u write another one
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ayushijha

i kust loved yur story y dont u write another one

will surely write one..but right now busy with the CONTEST STORY....only after 14th can i concentrate on the next one..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Both the stories are too good. I could imagine the whole serial in front of my eyes. Thank you for such a nice demonstration.

CID Rocks.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushavvi

Both the stories are too good. I could imagine the whole serial in front of my eyes. Thank you for such a nice demonstration.

CID Rocks.....

thank you buddy!!😃

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