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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sagnikasenapati
...but Abhijeet has fallen into many troubles on screen as well!!! isnt???

Yeah...but he has NEVER NEVER been seriously injured and landed in a life-threatening situation. The worst is Talking parrot, but even there he was pretty ok in the end.

And I hope it remains that way...I have had one nightmare in Behroopiya...cannot take another one in this lifetime!!!

Reading stories here is fun yaar...no one will wind up a story with a dead Daya or dead Abhijeet. What did they do in Behroopiya? I'll never forgive them for ending that episode in that manner. I cried for one full week. 😭 Don't remind me.

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: visrom

Yeah...but he has NEVER NEVER been seriously injured and landed in a life-threatening situation. The worst is Talking parrot, but even there he was pretty ok in the end.

And I hope it remains that way...I have had one nightmare in Behroopiya...cannot take another one in this lifetime!!!

..yeah dats correct!! somehow, he has never been shown so critically injured...and has hardly been shown in a hospital!! other than the case of the unknown girl where just the first scene has him in the hospital, and he refuses to recognise anyone!!....i pray for the same!!!God bless him and all other officers!!

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

I have added my 2nd story to the 1st post..please read it and comment whether u like it or not.Also PM me some titles for this story cos i am really unhappy with mine one!!!! i felt the story didnt have a very nice plot and ended up abruptly...but surely i wanted something related to Vivek and Tasha..also the fact that i somehow want to end up with the character Taarika!!!😉

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Nice story....👏

I don't know how to react to the last scene. I like the character of Tarika....an intelligent forensic expert will be an ideal match for Abhijeet but everyone seems to dislike her and probably want to get rid of her.

I personally don't want Abhijeet to have another heartbreak yaar....😭 While reading that scene, I can really imagine how his face would be. 😭

I love him so much....I don't mind anyone with him as long as he is happy.

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prabha.

@prabha.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Very Nice. Good attempt. Vivek and Taasha got their moments aur apna Freddie proved yet again that he is a sweetheart. Daya-Abhi ke kya kehne. Aakhon aakhon mein baatein ho gayin. There was hardly any conversation between them during the case, except the last scene. Good to see no injuries.

@sagnikasenapati Wah wah jo Fireworks ki team na kar saki woh tumne kar dikhaya. I loved the last scene. Taarika leaving for good. No tacky Forensic Humor and Stone Faced Expressions. What a bliss. The last scene was very well written, I could actually see it infront of my eyes. About the case, it was different, even your last story was different. You are thinking differently, that is really good.

However Taarika's Transfer does not mean heartbreak for Abhi Sir. Yes I understand he is sad and upset as he will not be able to see her or spend as much time with her as he used to. Lekin CID ko kitna kaam hota hai. He can't remain sad for too long. Plus, they can always be in touch on Phones, Emails, etc. Yeh to long-distance relationships ka zamaana hai bhai.

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

your story khooni kaun made me really happy i know that i was supposed to feel sad for Abhijeet because he's facing a heartbreak for the 2nd time but i could not control being happy when i read of Taarika 's transfer and yes the new office thing also made me happy.nice one short and sweet .keep it up 👍🏼

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

your second story was very good was in nice flow. but was sad for Abhijeet don't want to have 2nd time heartbreak (virtually third time. if his memory is not lost.). I don't have problem with the character of Tarika its just Shraddha's acting I dislike. This is beauty of reading that we read characters and not actors. Tarika's character is fine.
Please Abhi pe daya karo.

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: visrom

Nice story....👏
I don't know how to react to the last scene. I like the character of Tarika....an intelligent forensic expert will be an ideal match for Abhijeet but everyone seems to dislike her and probably want to get rid of her.

I personally don't want Abhijeet to have another heartbreak yaar....😭 While reading that scene, I can really imagine how his face would be. 😭

I love him so much....I don't mind anyone with him as long as he is happy.

same here visrom!!! even i love him so much that i can bear anyone with him...as long as he is happy!!! thats the reason i havent spoken much about Taarika in any other thread...and its true that Taarika is a nice character.May be thats the reason i never clarified about Taarika's transfer much in the story...just said that she will b leaving next month.My next stories for the time being might have Taarika (cos i said she will b leaving next month😉)...or may just have Abhi-Taarika in a long distance relationship, just as Prabha di suggested!!

Abhi is a strong guy, he will surely get back to normal...and Daya haina saath mein!!!😆

Thanx for liking the story everyone! The fact that i wanted a new office for them has been shown too!! i guess many of us will agree that we want a new office for the team!!!😃

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414
your second story was very good was in nice flow. but was sad for Abhijeet don't want to have 2nd time heartbreak (virtually third time. if his memory is not lost.). I don't have problem with the character of Tarika its just Shraddha's acting I dislike. This is beauty of reading that we read characters and not actors. Tarika's character is fine.
Please Abhi pe daya karo.

i love Abhi equally..and trust me even i dont have any problem with Taarika as a character.But the fact that everyone wants to get rid of her and also the flirting scenes, i thought of giving their relationship less importance!! Dont worry...Abhi wont have a complete heartbrk!!!..i wont let him😉...if necessary will get back Taarika on public demand!!!😆😆 just kidding!! Arre long distance relationship haina!!

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

I would like more people to read and comment on my 2nd story please.... also if anyone has some suggestions abt a better title pls PM me...i'll be waiting!!😃

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