Originally posted by: blue-jen
hi!!
I think after a long time im commentibg.very sorry yaar for not commenting๐ญ.
so u finished ur ff.๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ.finished this ff so early yaar.but the ending is very nice๐ณ๐ณ๐ณ.
the way gauri feels jealous on hearing ganga's name is very nice๐๐๐.i liked the part wher the duo escaping without paying the amount ๐.finally kaya called shiv jiju & understood shiv.๐
shiv& his gang played very much with gauri.but finally ended up with marriage๐.
al the parts was very good.๐๐๐.i dunno wat 2 say other than this.you ended the part in a good manner.shiv& gauri r meant toghether.
s they are
โญ๏ธ RAB NE BANA DI JODI!!!โญ๏ธ.
Jeni
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