FF- Rab ne bana di Jodi!!!-Parts 20,21&22-END 4/4/

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This is hugely inspired by my SRKs films (what else can u expect from me?)'
Cast:
Main lead:
Shiv Kapoor: Yash
Gauri Singh: Pallavi
Prateek Singhania: Sandeep (-ve grey character'sorry Prateek fans)
Special supporting lead:

Gopal: Shivs best buddy- Same guy in KAA-

Anupam Bose: Gauri's Rakhi brother-Hiten Tejwani

Ipshita: Gauri's best friend-Shriya Bisht- I like her yaar!

Kaya: Gauri's sister(dunno her name)

Very Special Cameo:

Alok Singh-Gauri's father

Vrinda-Gauris Masima.

Palak Kapoor- Abegail-Shivs Cousin sister.

Shivs Mom & Dad-Mahen& Nikkila Kapoor- No more'..

And a very special character'

Juhi Chawla as Ekta Mai'.d famous crystal ball reader-'Sab iski maya hai'' Shivs Rakhi sister'. (Well I was very impressed by Juhi's character in 'Kismet Konnections')

PART 1:
'Oh my God!!!I'm getting married tomorrow!!!!!'
'oh shut up n go to sleep Gauri'n allow me to sleep too.'

'Oh come on Ipshy di'Gauri di is getting married for the first time!!!'

'Kaya'u naughty girl'everyone gets married for the 1st time in life'unless u r a TV soap actress!'

There was a huge roar of laughter'suddenly'the door opened'Masima was standing there''U girls will u go to sleep right now''n Gauri beta,sleep or else u'll get dark circles round ur lovely eyes'..now that's something Prateek wont like, right!!!!'

"Right Masima!''. The door closes.

"Gauri, I still don't understand, what u liked in that Prateek 'that u decided not only to fall in love with him'but also marry him'.I mean he is a such a self obsessed guy, so selfish n yet u loved him'he's the total opposite of you!"

"Oh no Ipshy di please don't start all over again!"

"let it be Kaya, let her say whatever she wants'..today I won't feel bad for anything in the world'.I'm getting married'that too with baba consent'.Ipshy u don't know what it feels for a girl'.that the man she loves is gonna be her husband! U'll understand this only when u seriously fall in love'n in love nothing matters'other than the happiness of your partner'Prateek 'maybe self-centered or selfish'.but I luv him'n that's whats important for me'.i get happy when he's happy'I feel proud when he achieves what he gets'"

"Achieves??By cheating others'having selfish motives'"

"That's only in business'.n in today's business no policy is a fixed policy'"

"I just hope he doesn't mix business for ur happiness..."

"no Ipshy di'Prateek Bhaiya luves Gauri more than di'"

"baby'u r too small to understand d meaning of love!"

"then teach me na di'.." Joked Kaya.

"oh shut up n go to sleep!"

Ipshy was Gauri's childhood friend, she has stood by her in all her crisis n happiness'..she supported her for all her decision except Prateek!....but Gauri thought that was bound to happen among friends'insecurity when a man enters ur friends life!

Ipshy pretended to sleep'she just prayed to God, " I hate Prateek'..but God give my friend all d happiness n fulfill all her dreams n wishes'.she deserves the best'.I know that Prateek is not the best for her'but then he is her world'.I just want Gauri to be happy!"

Gauri badly wanted the night to end 'so that the new dawn sets her into that life she always desired'she always wanted to be Prateek's from the day she met him'.

As soon as she slept'she entered her dreamworld'she saw herself in Amritsar'she was entering the Golden Temple with someone'.she could not see his face'his voice was not familiar either'she offered her prayers along with that guy'.She touched his feet for his blessing ,he gently kissed her forehead'. Then they held each other's hand'.then'there was a mela going on somewhere near the temple'they went over there'.she pointed out towards a set of bangles to him'.he was putting the bangles one by one carefully and gently into her handles'.she fondly looked at him'when the last bangle was put on'.she mischeviously ran from there'."Gauri'Wait'"the guy was running after her'but she refused to listen'she ran across the lush green farms'.finally he got hold of her'he fondly hugged her'"I love you'" said the guy'"I love you too'." '.Gauri got up with a jerk'"What was that?? And who is he??? Why am I getting this dream time and time again?" thought Gauri'Well Gauri she has been getting this dream from her childhood' When she was small she couldn't figure out who the girl was'as she grew she realized it was her'but the guy has always been a mystery to her'she wondered'because the face was supposed to be Prateek's'as per logic'b'coz she considers him the love of her life'..however this dream contradicted to everything'.her mind and her heart refused to believe that the guy was Prateek'if he's not Prateek then who can he be'.wondered Gauri'Anyways she believed that tomorrow 'the big day' of her life would wipe out all her fears!!! So she went back to sleep again'.

Next day, Morning'..Everyone in house was busy in the marriage preparations'.Gauri's baba was busy instructing how he wants the decorations done'when suddenly ," Namaste Alok Sir!"

"Alok Sir!" this voice sounds very familiar, he turned back '.n had such a wide smile on his face'..

"Shiv! Beta Shiv'.I'm so glad that u've come to my daughter's wedding!"

"Sir, when have I ever refused ur order or request?"

Shiv Kapoor was Alok Singh's best student in school'a true all rounder'but very shy'perhaps not too vocal about his opinions'that's y people took advantage of his simplicity''.

"Alok baba'where do I keep these flowers?" inquired Ipshy.

"Ipshita beta, meet Shiv'"

"Achha toh u r Shiv, THE Shiv Kapoor!"

An Embarrassed Shiv smiled and said "Yes, have I done something wrong?"

"No, but baba, never ever gets tired of praising you'my God'v get jealous'b'coz he never praises us this much!"

Shiv smiled and looked down'.there was something in Shiv'.Ipshita thought'."God y didn't Gauri meet this guy!"

There was a lot of commotion in the house, well Shaadi ka ghar hai, aur kya umeed kar sakte hai!

Ipshy went upstairs'Gauri was getting dressed for her big day, she had designed her wedding dress herself'it looked so beautiful'her favourite colour red '

"Oh my God Gauri'..u look like a dream!"

"Ipshy di nazar mat lagao Gauri di ko!"

"Baby, apno ki nazar nahi dua lagti hai!"

"oh by the way'Gauri do u know whos come for ur wedding?"

"Who?"

"d great Shiv Kapoor!"

"What'wheres he'I've heard so much of him'finally I'll get to see him!"

They went towards the window'n Ipshy pointed at Shiv'.Gauri saw him'.Simplicity is what she saw in him'..his simple yet elegant kurta stood out among the rest of the guys who were wearing designer kurtas'.his smile'got a smile to Gauri's face'his innocent looks struck a chord with her'"Gosh!..whats d matter with me ?" she thought'.

"Meri pyaari behaniya banegi dulhaniya''.." sang someone

Gauri, Kaya n Ipshy turned behind'.

"Anupam dada'when did u come? I thought u wud never come"

"how dare he does'nt cum?" screamed Ipshy'.

"Ipshy babe ,Mandap bhi hai, Shaadi ka sama bhi hai'tu kahe toh hum bhi phere mare!"

"very funny Anupam!" poked Ipshy.

"I'm so happy for u ,Gauri'I just hope that gud sense prevails in ur friend'n she too agrees to marry me!"

"Shut up Anupam!"'she loved him too,but never let it show'.

Anupam left the room'n d girls were busy giggling'when suddenly there was remote silence downstairs'."what happened? Y has everything turned quite?"

"I'll just check n come. Kaya just brush up d make up for her!" said Ipshy and went downstairs.

"Gauriiiii"'Ipshy ran trying to catch hold of her breath'she was crying ,had anger on her face'"that ba***** has refused to marry u!"

"What? What d hell r u saying?"

Before she could say anything'.Anupam entered'he caught hold of Gauri'."listen to me carefully n calmly, Gauri'Prateek just called'he's at the airport'he's flying off to London in the next 15 minutes"

"London?"

"Ya, he's said that he's finally managed to get an appointment with Mr Brown for his KPNC Project, he can crack the deal if d meeting goes off well'."

"ya but what about Gauri?" Ipshy asked'.her worst nightmares had come true'.

"He said that marriage can wait n Gauri wud understand what this project meant for him."

Gauri'.was lost in her thoughts'KPNC project 'it was Prateeks dream project'he has foregone many occasions important for this project'but marriage??????

Suddenly Masima came up, she had a panicked look in her eyes'"baba has just had a mild attack but he's fine now !"

"what????"

All of them ran downstairs'.

In Baba's room'Shiv was pouring water into a glass when they entered the room'Shiv saw Gauri'the look of betrayal, dreams broken was so visible in her eyes'..there was something about her'

"Baba!"

"Gauri beta, yeh kya ho gaya hai'tumhari khusiyo ke saath Prateek aise kaise kar sakta hai?"

"Baba!"

"Gauri, I always wanted you to be happy that's y I agreed to get you married to him'but this'I cant take this'" he started crying'.

"Baba, please don't cry'I trust him'.he'll come back n get married to me!"

"marriage??? To that ungrateful man! Never'..i'll never get u married to him!"

"baba'."

"on your insistence I agreed to have u married to him'now u have to decide if u want to chose between ur father or him?"

"baba, please don't panic!"

"ur father or him???"

"baba, please don't do this I love both of u'"

"Alok babu, shaadi ka kya karna hai'baaratiyo ko waapas jaane ko kahe ki'.?" someone in the crowd came in and asked.

"Nahi'shaadi toh hogi aur isi mandap pe hogi!"

"Baba, what r u saying? U know that Prateeks not there'toh shaadi kaise hogi?" asked Anupam..

"the marriage will take place..today'n Gauri will have to marry or else she'll see my dead face!"

"baba'please calm down'.please try n understand 'who will she get married to?" Anupam asked.

" Shiv!"

All were shocked'.but dared to say a thing'Shiv did'nt know what to do'he was about to walk out of the room when Alok said, ' Shiv beta, I know I am not being fair to you..but I know that I can only rely on you at this moment'beta please'."

He folded his hands ,head bent down n tears flowing from his eyes'

Shiv 'was too sweet to hurt anyone or for that matter see anyone hurt or in pain'.

He held his Sir's hand and said, " Sir, I respect your feelings'but this is a question of not my life but the life of your daughter'"

To which Alok babu replies sternly, "She will do as I say now'I have entertained all her demands till date'if she refuses what I say'then she can leave my house for good n she no longer would be my daughter!"

Shiv: Sir it's a question of her life'.

Alok: Shiv I know what I'm doing'..

Masima: Dada'please don't take any decision in a haste

Alok: Vrinda, the only decision which I took hastily was agreeing Gauri to marry Prateek and see whats the result'

Vrinda: But dada'..

Gauri: Masima'please dont say anything'baba'I have always listened to what u have said'I'll get married to whoever u tell me to'but please don't stress yourself unnecessarily'

Kaya: But di..this ai'nt right.

Ipshy:Shut up Kaya! Don't interfere in this matter'

Kaya sulked. She gave a cold stare to Shiv'.Shiv'poor boy did'nt know how to react'.

Finally at the scheduled mahurat time'the wedding took place'while the phera's were on'Shiv promised to himself that he would give his wife all the happiness he could, he would take care of her in all the times ,that his sole responsibility now would only be her happiness'nothing else would matter to him now'.whereas Gauri'she had only one thought in her mind' "why did Prateek do this to me? Why?"

After the marriage rituals were over, Kaya went up to Shiv and blowed out her anger on him, "what on earth do you think of yourself? When u knew that my sis's happiness and life is only Prateek'y the hell did u say 'yes''who do u think u r? God? Well get one thing straight'my Di only loves Prateek'n she is only Prateek bhaiya'don't even think of being hers'she is only Prateeks'."

"Kaya!!!!" shouted Anupam," is this the way you speak to Shiv!"

"I Don't care'.may he rot in hell!"

Anupam was about to slap Kaya'when Shiv held Kaya'a hand'n Kaya walked off the place'.

"I apologise on behalf of Kaya, Shiv'Actually'"

"You don't have to be sorry Anupam, I understand that it's the luv for her sister that's speaking'I understand'"

"Shiv'Gauri is a very good girl'.we all know that she fell in love with the wrong person 'I never expected him to be such a'."

"Anupam'please be rest assured that your sister will never regret this decision in her life'I can't promise the stars for her'but I'll promise you that all her dreams and wishes would be fulfilled'I will try and give her all the happiness she deserves'.please trust me'"

Anupam didn't know what to say'but he felt the honesty and sincerity in each and every word that Shiv said'he was rest assured that his sis was in safe hands'.so he just smiled and hugged Shiv'.

During the bidaai, Alok babu gave his blessings to Shiv-Gauri'n as they were leaving he said to himself, 'I know whats right for you Gauri'.i hope u forgive me for what I have done'but this was for your good'I can't see ur life being ruined infront of me'.!"''..What was that Alok babu was trying to hide????

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Pasha84 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi pria
gr8 one i am the 1st one to see it & its mind blowing & love it too much
thanxxx a lot for only taking yash & pallavi , thanxxx no iq is thier , i think first FF here without IQ ( PLS NO OFFENSE , AS ALL I READ I FOUNF IQ AFTER 2 YRS OF SHOW ASLO )
gr8 keep t up i am soo happy & it think yu go tdiff. plans for show & that ekta mai wowowo i was only laughing it completetly
gr8 keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy roqin gal!!!!!! u kno it yaar ...its amaizingg nd m already lovingg it madly????????? wat will hapn dey r married!!!!!! WOW!!!!! waitingg desperately wat is it tht alok's hidingg yaar?? do cont asap!!! x muah x roqstar!! thnx fr da pm ;)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: devil8442002

hi pria

gr8 one i am the 1st one to see it & its mind blowing & love it too much
thanxxx a lot for only taking yash & pallavi , thanxxx no iq is thier , i think first FF here without IQ ( PLS NO OFFENSE , AS ALL I READ I FOUNF IQ AFTER 2 YRS OF SHOW ASLO )
gr8 keep t up i am soo happy & it think yu go tdiff. plans for show & that ekta mai wowowo i was only laughing it completetly
gr8 keep it up

nd pasha dear.....
all of uz hve yash in r fics...which r new
yh da old 1z dont hve it
alongg wid iq...deres yash
nd in jagu's ff.....deres no iq....its jst yash
awrryt??
hehe
i think u werent sure
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey di awesummm i luved it yaar da characters n allll simply superbbbbšŸ‘ shiv is so sweet ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø well wht alok babu is hiding well soon u will reveal 😳 they r married now ā­ļøšŸ‘šŸ˜ƒ now their luv story will start eagerly waiting 4r more now n diz is 4r u šŸ‘
saba
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: devil8442002

hi pria

gr8 one i am the 1st one to see it & its mind blowing & love it too much
thanxxx a lot for only taking yash & pallavi , thanxxx no iq is thier , i think first FF here without IQ ( PLS NO OFFENSE , AS ALL I READ I FOUNF IQ AFTER 2 YRS OF SHOW ASLO )
gr8 keep t up i am soo happy & it think yu go tdiff. plans for show & that ekta mai wowowo i was only laughing it completetly
gr8 keep it up

Thanks so much.....Ya i had to mention Ekta Mai....and trust me this Ekta mai loves her Shiv-Gauri to death....not like the other EK who gave a step motherly treatment to our Shiv-GaurišŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Pria
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

heyy roqin gal!!!!!! u kno it yaar ...its amaizingg nd m already lovingg it madly????????? wat will hapn dey r married!!!!!! WOW!!!!! waitingg desperately wat is it tht alok's hidingg yaar?? do cont asap!!! x muah x roqstar!! thnx fr da pm ;)

Hey Rockstar....Dont worry i've reached the end of the FF...i'll post it jaldi...so all your questions are answered...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†...Actually it's not too descriptive as the other FF's...but i wanted to write one so badly na...so my friends and i came up with this onešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Pria
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_pavi

hey di awesummm i luved it yaar da characters n allll simply superbbbbšŸ‘ shiv is so sweet ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø well wht alok babu is hiding well soon u will reveal 😳 they r married now ā­ļøšŸ‘šŸ˜ƒ now their luv story will start eagerly waiting 4r more now n diz is 4r u šŸ‘

saba

Thanks so much Saba....their love story has started...but they will realise it much later...actually i'm not that romantic person na...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†...so this is just a simple straightforward kind of luv story...
Pria
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PART 2:

Shiv…while driving back home on his sweet white Santro…his prized possession….

"Gaana laga du ya…." He gave a glance to Gauri who was seated besides him …she looked lost in her thoughts…she replied…" ha gaana laga do…"

As soon as he switched on the radio…the song," Meri pyaar ki umaar ho itni sanam…" was playing…..

"Wow…I just love this song!" exclaimed Shiv-Gauri together…n they looked at each other….n smiled…

Gauri remembered how Prateek used to ridicule her for liking this song…he used to find the song boring, n too melodramatic….

"Actually this song has a flavor of true love…something I believe in ……." Said Shiv interrupting her thought flow…

"Have u ever been in love before?"…. asked Gauri

"no…actually girls find me too boring to fall in luv with!" … Shiv

"gud for u…its better never to fall in love….it hurts…it hurts real bad….!" Sighed Gauri

Shiv just looked at Gauri…the pain in her words pricked him even more…."Luv hurts…no wonder my heart is paining since the moment its seen u Gauri…." Thought Shiv n smiled…..

As he was nearing his house…his heart started beating faster…he was getting scared….scared of whom?????

As he parked his car in his car park….it was late in the evening…As he and Gauri stepped out of the car and started walking towards Shiv's house….

"Wohi Ruk Jaoo tum dono…." Screamed a voice….

Shiv….."Oh no!…Ab mera kya hoga…mein toh gaya…hey Bhagwan meri raksha karna!" he pointed a thumbs up to God….But the terror was something even God had given up long time back….

"Di….Aap…aap…woh mein tume batane hi wala tha…aap hi ke paas aa raha tha …."

"Chup raho nalayak!" Ekta mai breaks into her patent laughter…hehehaha…Gauri gets scared hearing not only her laughter but also her gypsy appearance could scare any normal human being!!!!

Ekta mai…well what do I tell u about her…she could predict the future…well that's what she would say( I doubt though)….crystal ball future teller….everyone in the area consulted her for everything…she loved being an agony aunt to everyone… she was Shiv's rakhi sis…no one dared called her anything but,'Ekta Mai"…except for Shiv….he was the apple of her eyes…Shiv called her,'di' …right from his childhood if there was someone other than his mom whom he trusted it was his 'di'…she was peculiar…she was strange…she was different…but the only person who could understand him…Shiv's mom died when he was barely 15 yrs…Ekta's husband deserted her long time back…she took over the responsibility of Shiv…

"Meri bhavisyavani kabhi galat nahi hoti…meine kaha tha na Shiv aaj teri zindagi ka sabse important din hai…dekh liya….! Ab tu toh kaam se gaya Shiv….."Sab uski maya hai"…bol baccha bol tera naam kya hai???"she asked pointing towards Gauri

"Gauri…"

"uttam..atiuttam…Shiv-Gauri….Shiv-Gauri…yeh naam bana hi hai ek duje ke liye…"Sab uski maya hai!"

Gauri just did'nt react to anything said…Shiv was proceeding towards his home when Mai stopped them at the door…..She went inside the house….got the aarti thaali outside…Shiv-Gauri ki aarti uthari n asked Gauri to step inside the house ….it was a small,simple yet beautiful house….Ekta Mai handed over the house keys to Gauri n said that all important documents were with her…n she would givethe documents to Gauri tomorrow….She was happy…very very happy….

Inside the house…Shiv showed the house to Gauri…'Is he an estate agent?" thought Gauri….. well he was giving Gauri all the details of the house…just like an Estate Agent… well Yaar…Our hero wasn't an estate agent but a project manager in a leading MNC…

As they entered the bedroom…Gauri froze…she feared the worst…but then she knew her life was now a compromise and she had no say in it…so quietly she entered the room….Shiv sensed her discomfort…

"Don't worry Gauri...this is your room…I'll shift to the next room…n please make yourself comfortable…incase you need anything please let me know….n ya evrthing will be alrite!"

"Everything will be alright,ya right!" thought Gauri as she closed the door,"its so easy for people to make comments but those who suffer know how difficult it's to be alright" n she started crying…

Shiv knew that…he went towards the gardens…n started gazing up towards the sky…

"Kya baat hai Shiv?". Shiv turned back to see his di behind…

"Di…aap ab tak soi nahi kya?"

"Kaise soti jab mere bhai ko meri jarurat hai….kya hua bacha? Yeh shaadi…sab itni achanak?"

Shiv told his di everything that had happened…what made him take the decision of marrying Gauri….

"Sab uski maya hai Shiv! Just listen to me…at this moment and this time…she needs a friend more than a husband…try to understand her…give her some time and space…trust me she seems to be a really good girl…just give her some time…"

"I'll give her my whole lifetime di!...i can very well understand what she's going thru n I promise u that I'll try my best so that she can recover from her grief at the earliest…!"

Shiv walked back home….Ekta mai looked upwards n said a small prayer…n turned back towards her home…a star just broke in the sky as she turned….

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pria4ever

Thanks so much Saba....their love story has started...but they will realise it much later...actually i'm not that romantic person na...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†...so this is just a simple straightforward kind of luv story...
Pria

oh yesh yesh started in gauri's dream na if em not wrong hmmmm
saba

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