My reality Poem: Yuvi 2 Naina - Page 2

Originally posted by: koolaries4

oh jos.. thanks alot!! i am in no way as good as you!! 😳 but thanks alot!! m really honoured!! 😃 i am glad you liked it!!

MJ that's beautiful *hug*....though I still wanna hurt Yuvi after reading this :P...but I still need to watch yesterday's episode...

Originally posted by: princessuma

MJ that's beautiful *hug*....though I still wanna hurt Yuvi after reading this :P...but I still need to watch yesterday's episode...

loved it!! *forcefully kisses MJ who squirms in disgust :P*

MJ u really like UV don't U ...................lol thts UV's dialogue

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

MJ u really like UV don't U ...................lol thts UV's dialogue

but yes da poem depicts turmoil inside UV n so wnderfully written 👍🏼 🤗

ELO is rite it shud be in frnt page of da islan n Jose also

MJ, its beautiful....!!!
You have depicted his feelings amazingly. 👏

HEYY koolaries4 [sorry dunt noe ur name]
loved ur poem its just gr88 YUVI"S TRUE FEELING FOR OUR NAINA SHOULD BE CONVEYED TO HER ................It explains that yuvi truely deserves some one like naina no not some one ONLY NAINA in his dark and firece ful life ............

LOVED THE LINES:

"Your Trust for me is like a bird in a cage,

that binds me and makes me enraged"

Yes truely naina holds yuvi binded in her love so hard that she willnever ever let him go away!!!
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All she ever wanted to say, was left unsaid,

if only, i could tell her the truth,

you are the only one that i could woo,

not that others wouldn't have fallen for me,

but its your heart that tugged the heart inside me

Yes, truely yuvi have never fallen for any 1 expect ourbeatiful, ever curious, detective, chirpy, fun loving, WORLDS BEST LIER, and most of all a good natured NAINA.
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And as much as i want to deny this fact,

The reality is that You are my fate!

Yes i think yuvi thinks that : " When my eyes got their first look at you, I realized I just simply couldn't help myself but to dream about you in my future.I love you perhaps because simply I love you. Perhaps because it is with you that heart beats. I love you maybe because my heart tells me that you should really be the one I should love. Or maybe I love you because that is what is written in the book of my fate. "
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SO IN SHORT EVERY LINE WAS SUPERB ..IT DEPICTED YUVI'S HEART......

Originally posted by: sups2222

HEYY koolaries4 [sorry dunt noe ur name] loved ur poem its just gr88 YUVI"S TRUE FEELING FOR OUR NAINA SHOULD BE CONVEYED TO HER ................It explains that yuvi truely deserves some one like naina no not some one ONLY NAINA in his dark and firece ful life ............

Hey supriya.. now you know my name right ?! 😉 Thanks alot for your lovely comments. I am glad you liked it. All my poems are very situational based on YuNa.. 😆

LOVED THE LINES:

"Your Trust for me is like a bird in a cage,

that binds me and makes me enraged"

Yes truely naina holds yuvi binded in her love so hard that she willnever ever let him go away!!!
................................................................................................................................

All she ever wanted to say, was left unsaid,

if only, i could tell her the truth,

you are the only one that i could woo,

not that others wouldn't have fallen for me,

but its your heart that tugged the heart inside me

Yes, truely yuvi have never fallen for any 1 expect ourbeatiful, ever curious, detective, chirpy, fun loving, WORLDS BEST LIAR,😆 and most of all a good natured NAINA.
................................................................................................................................

And as much as i want to deny this fact,

The reality is that You are my fate!

Yes i think yuvi thinks that : " When my eyes got their first look at you, I realized I just simply couldn't help myself but to dream about you in my future.I love you perhaps because simply I love you. Perhaps because it is with you that heart beats. I love you maybe because my heart tells me that you should really be the one I should love. Or maybe I love you because that is what is written in the book of my fate. "

👏I loved this line, because I believe Love is just love.. it can never be explained!!
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SO IN SHORT EVERY LINE WAS SUPERB ..IT DEPICTED YUVI'S HEART......

awesome MJ... you're a great poet besides being a great writer!