My reality Poem: Yuvi 2 Naina

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys,
hope you are all doing well and are enjoying the new year. My condolences to all those victims in the train accident!
I have written a poem in Yuvi's POV.. Its not turned out as i wanted it to be😳... but here is goes:
My reality

Your Trust for me is like a bird in a cage,

that binds me and makes me enraged,

For me its something too hard to keep.

but in my mission, you I need,.

So I had to lie, as I had no other choice,

when she came to know, her eyes were moist,

All she ever wanted to say, was left unsaid,

if only, i could tell her the truth,

you are the only one that i could woo,

not that others wouldn't have fallen for me,

but its your heart that tugged the heart inside me

And as much as i want to deny this fact,

The reality is that You are my fate!

Hope you guys like it!! 😳😊
Comments and Criticisms wellcome..
Tc
MJ
xxx
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aanchal_c thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its awesome,i hope yuvi realises his feelings for naina.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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A.M.A.Z.I.N.G !

Seriously, This is the BEST !! Wonderfully written MJ...and the words fit PERFECTLY !!

Write more !!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG this is amazing MJ 👏👏👏

I love this one! Infact this poem, along with jo's poems should be on the first page of every Island topic!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW !!! Its fantastic.I really loved the last line.Its so touchy.I hope Yuvi soon realises that Ms Butterfly eyes is his fate.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Your Trust for me is like a bird in a cage,

that binds me and makes me enraged,


Beautiful.Your poem reflects what Yuvi's character is like on the inside.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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a very nice poem 👏

n it brings out the yuna theme revolving currently..
the word rhyming is excellent..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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And as much as i want to deny this fact,

The reality is that You are my fate!

beautifully written, especially the last lines say it all. just love dem.👍🏼
with yuvi's state of mind n stubborn nature,one can just say
'how ever much i deny you
u still remain my reality'
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ aanchal: i hope Yuvi starts to feel something with regards to Naina.. i dont want love to develop so soon.. with yuvi's charachter it should take some time!!

@ Leah: thank you so much.. I shall definitely try and write some more!! :D

@ Elo: thank u so much for your kind words!! I now know that if there was anything lacking, you would have told me right?! J

@ ayesha: it will take some hard drilling into him for him to realize that!! Hehe.. He will deny it for a long, long time!!

@ nits: thanks.. I tried to portray Yuvi, and I am glad that it came across!!

@ Tushtih: it was written keeping a tab on the current YuNa situation… m glad you felt that way!! And yes, being in really old school, I love rhyming poems too – so I try to rhyme my own poems!! Hehe..

Guys, thank you soo much for leaving such heart warming comments!! I am glad you like the poem!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: josephina_vegas

And as much as i want to deny this fact,

The reality is that You are my fate!

beautifully written, especially the last lines say it all. just love dem.👍🏼
with yuvi's state of mind n stubborn nature,one can just say
'how ever much i deny you
u still remain my reality'

oh jos.. thanks alot!! i am in no way as good as you!! 😳 but thanks alot!! m really honoured!! 😃 i am glad you liked it!!

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