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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#901

mahak wonderful end

excellent, i guess u felt bad for ur last outcome right

yet we had enjoyed it hope this time u urself would hve enjoyed writting and got satisfied for the upd.am i right?..it was superb buddy...i should say grt ending...mmmh so wts on package?mee waiting...you finished ur exams huh?

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Divya (Divz)

@ch0c0lates

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#902

Lovely ending! loved this ff of your!

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#903

sorry 4 late update.. hey mahek... luv d end... all misunderstandins.. cleard...

luvd it ....👏

luv mayur...😳

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#904

Heyyyy mahak
Sorry for being late
But amazing update dear
N wat an amazing ajeeb dastan
Thanx for the pm

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kiareene

@MysticAura

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#905

sorry dear didnt comment due 2 work-load.....me feelin sad that da story is ended....bt dear it was fabulous.....divine anything what u say....true love transcends everything..........and ur ff is an example of it........arti part was cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A
m the 1st one to coment!! thanx Mahi... btw i luvd it dear!! haha...the kissed one!! twas fancy!! nd i luvd it alll... cutie angel! :) thanx 4 d pm.. :)

thanks for loving it anshika!

yup......that was an extraordinary way to make someone quiet........

how sweet!

angel is cute!

thanks for ur precious comments..........

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#907

Originally posted by: fanofmjht
great ending
hating nupur's bauji
but at last they are together
loved this whole part
it was awesome
i have no words to describe it
arti is also cute
surely it was ajeeb dastaan

thanks a lot....

i don't hate him.......all he wanted was his daughter's safe future......

thanks for loving this part......

thanks for ur lovely comment!

yup it was! that's why the name goes like that!

thanks..........

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#908

Originally posted by: bhavana2692
reserved *edit* wow!what an ending sirjee!👏 nupur ke saare savalon ke javaab mil gaye aur usko apna asli jeevan saathi bhi mil gaya!u know what i like most in ur short story? 1. the style of narration, it feels good 2 read it in Nupz POV,u brought out her desire, anger, hurt & all other feelings in a fantastic way!🤗 2. poorab!his cameo in MJHT was my fav![itz a wonder ki itni acchi character ko aaj tak koi bhi mjht ff mein maine nahi dekha!😲] 3. arti, yaar kya kahoon, i'm totally in❤️ with the name! but ek chota sa question hain.....pehle Nupz ki Bauji ne MayUr ki shaadi roki thi.....phir poorab ke arne ke baad kaise MayUr ki shaadi honi di?😕[hmm.....i'm guessing that it may be his repentence 4 spoilinghisdaughter's life....] accha ab bahut bol diya.....going 2 sleep now[& dream abt mayur!😳].....good night! Bhavana

thanks a lot bhavana!

haan yaar........

kabhi kabhi dukhon ke baad khushiyan bhi aati hain.........

just wait for the happiness........they wud come........

thanks for loving my style of narration.......i am happy that i could bring out her feelings.......her pain......and u enjoyed that too.......

thanks a lot.......

same here.........poorab was my favourite too........he was the only character whom i liked as a cameo......and yes it is strange that no one includes him in their ffs.....

that's why i chose him.....

same here.......i too love arti.......and angel......

see........pehle mayank established nahi tha.....unki beti ka future khatre mein tha......that's why he didn't allowed.....but now when she is a widow.......and mayank is established and he still wants to marry her......then who is he to stop? i mean her marriage was organised by her in-laws.....and he was happy that his daughter got someone who loves her....

hope u got ur answer......

thanks a lot for ur sweet comments!

love u a lot!

thanks a ton!