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Posted: 15 years ago
**Scenes written by mich09**

SCENE 11






Ivy couldn't not fulfil your request. So here is a scene. Hope you like it.

Well continuing from the bedroom scene when Abhi (in the yellow Tshirt) goes to Nikki's room and seeing her looking so pretty in her sleep cannot resist but to kiss her. Nikki opens her eyes and thinking Abhi is in her dreams puts her hand on his lips and says "Sapne mein bhi tum sataoge? Chain se sone nahin do ge ?" Abhi holds her hands and kissing it says "Mera neend churake, tum chain se sona chahti ho ?" Nikki dreamily says "Oh Abhi !" and then caressing his face with the hand that was free says "toh kya humein sazaa do ge" Abhi smiles and says "Haan" Nikki wraps her hands around his neck and asks "toh kya sazaa do ge?" Abhi says "A sleeping beauty only gets ....... and with a mischievous smile bends his face forward to kiss her. Nikki's hand scrapes against his chain and the scratch from it makes her realise that it is not a dream. It is actually Abhi in her room. Just as he was about to place his lips on hers she puts her hand again on his lips and screams "Abhi! Tum !" Abhi laughs and says "Haan Main !" Nikki slides away a bit and sits up in nervousness. She asks him "Tum Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho" Looking at her nervousness Abhi says "main tumse baat karna chahta tha isi liye tumse milne aaya. Lekhin tum neend mein itni khoobsoorat lag rahi thi, mujhse raha nahin gaya ........" Nikki tells him "toh tum chori karoge?" Abhi gives her an innoncent look and says "bilkul bhi nahin, main toh sirf woh wapas lene aaya hoon jo mera tha". Nikki asks him with a confused look "aur woh kya hai ?" Abhi says "Mera Dil jo tumne churaya hai". Nikki blushes and says "Abhi main main ..." She manages to get off the bed. Abhi too stands up and holds her by the shoulders and says "Nikki tum baaki ke time bak bak kar sakti ho, sab kuch keh sakti ho lekhin woh baat kyun nahin keh paate jo main kabse sunna chahta hoon.....Wohi baat tum neend mein keh sakti ho toh mujhse kyun nahin " Nikki looks at him and says "toh tum pehle kyun nahin kehte" Abhi says "nahin es bhaar tum pehle kahoge.....maine bahut baar tumhe apne dil ki baat kehne ki koshish ki aur bahut baar tumhe bata bhi chuka hoon". Shaking her by the shoulders he says "Ab tumhari baari " Lifting her chin with his finger he says "bata do Nikki what do I really mean to you ?" Suddenly there is a some sound outside the door and Nikki gets worried. She holds Abhi's arm and says "Abhi ab tum jao, koi tumhe meri kamre mein dekhenge toh hungama ho jayega" Abhi shakes his head and says "nahin main nahin jaaoonga" Nikki gives him a worried look but Abhi stubbornly refuses to budge. Nikki says "Abhi don't be stupid ! Please go ! Please" Abhi is still adamant he folds his hand against his chest and watches Nikki with a bemused look. There is some more sound outside the door. Nikki goes to Abhi and says "Listen ! kyun zid kar rahe ho! please jao, main tumse kal baat karti hoon". Abhi doesn't budge. Finally Nikki loses her cool and starts blabbering "Pata nahin mujhe kya hua jo tumse,..... she points her finger at him and continuously jabbing that finger into his chest says " tum tum jo ek ziddi, badimaag, paagal ho, tumse main pyar karti hoon. Poora time satate ho, gussa karte o, phir bhi mujhe tumse pyar hai. Woh tumhara kasoor nahin hai, main hi paagal hoon, meri dimaag kharaab hai jo tumse bahut pyar karti hoon" Seeing Abhi smiling she realises what she just blurted. She blushes and lowers her eyes. As she slowly tries to remove her hand from his chest, Abhi pulls her hand and teasingly says "Dekha tum kitni achi bak bak kar sakti ho" As Nikki blushes he kisses her forehead. As he was about to leave Nikki calls out softly and says "Abhi..." He teasingly says "ssshhhh mat roko mujhe koi aa jayega ! Throwing a flying kiss at her he leaves with a happy smile while Nikki can't stop blushing.


Mich



Edited by mich09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Michi nice..
the way you patched up that badly edited/shot bedroom scene was amazing.. Esp the way abhi is sitting by her and niki thinks it as a dream.. wonderful. And portion where he refuses to go before listening - so like abhi... and niki refusing to say and then blurting it out in anger.. haha.. thats Niki...
awesome job :)
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Posted: 15 years ago

AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanx so much Michelle!!! ur the best!!! 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
AWWwwwww...mich dat was soo cute...da scene jus sounded like a FAIRY TALE..
nikita
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Posted: 15 years ago

Michelle loved that scene, so romantic!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Mich..I loved the cute little scene...I hope this would have happened instead of what they showed us
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Posted: 15 years ago
michi...
First of all i am going to warn you... you have aknife near your neck. if you dont continue soon .. you know.. 😃 how dare you stop at such a interesting point....

Part was completely amazing... the way you switched the story back and forth abhi's memories and Adi's narration it was excellent.. and loved how agfter all this as well abhi didnt say anything about simi.... (abhimaniaac being writer helps in not messing up with his character :D ) i loved the bond niki and adi shared :) it was amazing..

The concern abhi showed for niki when she was almost under the vehicle.. and the emotions you got out of them.. it was amazing.

Last but not list.. The BOMB :) adi telling Niki is the special one.. omg.. omg.. wondering if he is going to cover it up or not.. :)

Continue soooooooooooon
Edited by anotheranfan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG !!!
I loved part 5 !!!
Continue Now Michy di !!
now !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Michelle I hate u! HOw could u leave me hanging like that!
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Posted: 15 years ago
mich the part where adi point out at nikki saying she is the specail one has left me gasping for air .

lovely 👏

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