Meet || La Lailailai La Lai La Lailai (a oneshot) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I swear my desktop hates you. It never lets me open your threads! You're lucky my laptop is so nice...
Anyway I loved this one way more than the other one! I can totally imagine Preet orchestrating a water balloon attack and Meher shrieking like an alarm...I think it was the playfulness in this fic that I liked a lot...
I so started Meet-fic fever.
Love,
Bhav (:
P.S. Ohmygod ARTHUR! *fangirl giggle* 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jamune

awww dat was so cute and dats preet

Yup, that is Preet! 😉 Thank you Jamune!

Originally posted by: shikha87

ahhhh haila preet u r sumthin you know that? please hun do more i loved it

Thank you Shikha. Yeah, he knows it. 😆 I'll try doing another one soon!

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey great one shot luved it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: srk_crazy

wow tht was sooo cutee

good job!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😛

*unreserved*

I LOVED IT!!! *jumps up and down* *jumps with Meera* YAY!

It was simply superb!😆😆😆 And as Shabo said...totally Preet-ish!😃😃😃 Thank you! I'm sure he'll be glad to hear you approved. 😆

Oh yes and the song is Ek shararaat!😉 but I love it! 😃 (srk makes it obvious)😳 Of course you would love it. 😆 But it is one of my favourite songs. I love that movie. It was hilarious. *sigh* They just don't make them the same anymore. 😆

He made the kids throw water balloons? Totally adorable!😃😳 I just love the simple way in which you write, everything comes to life Rads!! 😃 Aw, thank you so much! You are too sweet. 😳

Write more soon! 😃 I will! Going to work on Shayad Yehi Toh Pyar Hai in a bit!

Love you loads, love you too!

Meera😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

That.

was.

so.

cute.

Honestly, it was so PREEEEEEEEEEET! Ughh, I hate it, why are there no guys like him in the world huh? *hmph* But I loved the elements you used with the kids and all! So worth the read and it was adorable! =] Wow...can you believe you actually had me blushing with that?? 😆 I am so hopeless. =] Loved it to bits and pieces!

Jaan, you are way too sweet! What with so much praise. 😳 Preet just sort of wrote himself. And Meher, well, she just had to succumb to his charm no? And then she got shy. 😆 Thank you so much!

--shabz

@ Ravzie: Cannot wait to read what you think!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimmu

Oh Gosh, you too? Am I like the only one that doens't like Meet? *crosses arms and pouts* OMG, you don't like Meet? *shocked muh* But, but - why?? 😕 *sigh* I'll just have to try and convert you I guess. 😉

But i love Preet. ☺️ ... so yes, I read it. And oh, one more thing! Feel special that i'm reading this. Its only you, and shabz, that have ever made me read something with Meet in it. Yay! I feel special, oh-so special! *sings to tune of 'I feel pretty'* Ooh, story-idea! 😆

You kno, i really can't think of Meet as lovers. I can only think of them as BFF's. So, I liked how Meher was preparing herself to "save" Preet from bauji. But what made me giggle more was imagining the kids flinging colorful waterbaloons at her, and one ofthe kids getting carried away and bringing in his water gun. 🤣 Gosh, that was a sight in my head. Preet is just awesome! How'd you know Varun did that? Did you put in that transmitter than? 😆 But am glad you liked that bit!

Ew, ew, ew...!! I will ignore the part where Preet looks at Meher in other emotions than his best friend. No comment. 😆

Haha, yaayy! Kids to the rescue. 😎 Okay, fineee...!! Preet's an awesome lover too. ☺️ Haha, thanks for reading it!

Lurved it!! Love you! 🤗

kimz

Originally posted by: sourpuss

I swear my desktop hates you. It never lets me open your threads! You're lucky my laptop is so nice... Yeah, I got the message. Why do you wake up so early? Dude, we're free. Wake up late! Sleep late! That's the fun of life! 😉😆

Anyway I loved this one way more than the other one! I can totally imagine Preet orchestrating a water balloon attack and Meher shrieking like an alarm...I think it was the playfulness in this fic that I liked a lot... Aw, thank you so much! Preet would so do that to her no? And shouldn't she try to get revenge sometime? I need a song for a sequal now. Great. 😆
I so started Meet-fic fever. Yup. 😉
Love,
Bhav (:
P.S. Ohmygod ARTHUR! *fangirl giggle* 😳

Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Yeah, I got the message. Why do you wake up so early? Dude, we're free. Wake up late! Sleep late! That's the fun of life! 😉😆

You try sleeping in late when the bloody sun is shining straight onto your pillow! Blinds don't help either, you know, because the stupid thing filters in at an angle in the gap between the blinds. I keep complaining to mum about that, but yeah...YOU TRY SLEEPING LATE ON MY BED! Though I daresay you probably could do it...😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sourpuss

You try sleeping in late when the bloody sun is shining straight onto your pillow! Blinds don't help either, you know, because the stupid thing filters in at an angle in the gap between the blinds. I keep complaining to mum about that, but yeah...YOU TRY SLEEPING LATE ON MY BED! Though I daresay you probably could do it...😆 Oh shut up! I'm a light sleeper okay! A really light sleeper. But I just enjoy lazing around till late. 😆

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Reserved😎

Unreserved =)
Ooh I love this song! Used to listen to it all the time! This and Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon😆
*sings* Main koi aisa geet gaoon, ke arzoo jagaoon. Agar tum kaho. Zameen ko asmaan banaoon, sitaron se sajaoon, agar tum kaho.
K I'm done now😆 Ooh, I love that song too! *thinks* I have an idea for that now. 😆 But not Meet.
Ooh I love how Preet has all the kids on his little plan and how Meher's worried about what he has in mind and thinks it has to do with Lalit instead of her😆 Bechari is so unaware. Yup. I had to have both of them in each bit no? And she knew he was planning something, she was just never the target for his pranks. (She usually either helps him with them, or saves him. 😆)
Water balloons?🤣 That's hilarious! I did that to my mom once😆 And I love how you used the ek qayamat line for it too =) You did that to your mom?? And survivived? 😆
I love how Preet catches Meher before she falls and stares at her and how he grabs her hand after. And the bache had to come and be the kabab mein haddi. Love how Preet got mad and said that it was the first time he was romancing with Meher and they interrupted😆 Aw, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. It was all part of Preet's masterplan, but how were the bachche to know that?
Me loved it! It was awesome =) *runs to find more one shots by you* So sweet! Thank you!

Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wonderful shot thts sooo cute😛 and lovly😳.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome one-shot! 👏
So cute!! 🤗
Lol loved how he used smartie kids in his plan 😆
And when she fell and he caught her, so romantic 😍
Such a sweet ending 😳
Ugh but the kids came 😵
I guess Preet should have rewarded them in advance
Ah well it was mega-cute anyway 😛
Love TJ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you TJ! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Was cute can imagine mehers anger after being drenched in water and that too with water balloons even though i love tannu and all they all somehow seem to stop meher and preets romance in most ffs😕 aww anyways it was soo good to read another meet ff

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