FF: Love Lust Betrayel?(AR RM)Prt10-76(UPDATED!!)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys!This is my 2nd story that i am writing. My first is Zindagi Ka Raaz

I really hope you like this..Please leave your comments saying wether i should continue or not. Leave any criticism and suggestions.Its all welcome.
PM LIST-PAGE 4
part 1-page 5
part 2-page 9
Promo-page 13
Part 3-page 15
part 4-page 21
part 5-page 28
part 6-page 35
part 7-page 41
Promo page 46
part 8-page 51
Promo-page 59
part 9-page 59
part 10-page 76
Love Lust Betrayel? AR
Light breezes were taking over the young girls room. The walls were light blue with flowers painted pink and white. She was wearing her night gown that was hugging her figure softly.. She sat on her swing that was straight dead center in the middle of her room. She sat down and looked at her leather book. It wasent in that bad of shape...Right? The binding may have been a litltle ripped but the rest was pretty good. She opened the book carefully with the fear of it being ripped and shredded into a trillion peices and then finding it nowhere becuase then it would be trapped in cyberspace by evil monkeys...
Hehe..she laughed at her crazy thoughts..yaar riddhima still the brain of a 5 year old much? She flipped to the last page 2 pages and looked at the dates...her heart felt hollow again..she felt mad..angry..betrayed..disgustied with herself but she read...A year Ago....
Febuary 21 2008
Dear Diary,
It was a normal day i guess?...well i guess..you know those normal classes.that boring old campus..crazy muskaan and atul..and ARGH!!! wow i should have had so many more explamation points! but whatever who cares..my dairy has happy things..like unicorns and hehe..hot guys..arghh john abraham..taylor lautner..Ranbir Kapoor..well whatever..argh how i hate that anjali..always trying to get in everyones way..The day was pretty good..actaully boring until.well last night..she empasized on last night..gosh his hot muscular toned chested body..He said he loved me..for the first time!! omg! Armaan Malik said it..most eligable bachelor of the college..He made love with me! and said he loved me! wow i am squeling like a 9th grade girl..Last night was just perfect..how can i explain..That beach and those candels..the air smelled like love..well actually roses..but i guess thats how love smells...there was a small white table in the middle of the beach..and the waves were hitting against the rocks..it looked all just so amazing..the sun was setting..i was wearing my favorite red dress..just for him! and woah..did i tell you i ran out the house just for him..i am not even allowed to wear dresses..ONLY SALWAR! who cares it was for the armaan malik you know? he took me by the hand and kissed it gently..walking me over to the table..We ate the lovely food he so happened to cook..had a romantic dance..how his eyes were enchanting..after that...well IT RAINED! like seriously thunderstorm ON THE BEST NIGHT OF MY LIFE!..but luckily he had a guest house nearby..we went inside..and boy was i drenched! he gave me extra clothes..they were his and smelled just like him..all cologne! he took a quick shower and came out half naked..he was topless and had shorts on..hehe.😳.he came up to me and pulled me by the waist slamming me against him broad manly chest...he kissed me soflty on the neck and then slowly i could feel his soft lips on mine.,..but i didnt get that electric shock your get..it felt..FAKE..he dug his hands into my shirt and started unbottoning it and opeing up my bra...his hands carressed my back and and chest..he picked me up and put me on the bed gently and came on top of me...there were a thousand thoughts going through my head..why was i doing this? Riddhima throw him off you..you know he is touching you everywhere..comeone touch him too..my hands were clasped tight onto the bed sheets resisting to touch him..but all the thoughts crashed when he whispered into my ear..I Love you... it sounded to passsionate..fake..real? my heart couldent decide..but i let my brain win..i started carresing his back..he took the bed sheets and put it on top of us and he started taking of my clothes..i did too..by the end..i knew it..we had made love...it was morning now...i woke up as the sun rays were hitting my eyes hard..i smiled..i felt sore..actaully my whole body ached..i took the bed sheets and wrapped them around myself..i was about to get out of bed..when a old women came into the room...
K-armaan baba?
She looked at me..she seemed a little schock but the face soon disappered..sorry but i kinda giggled when i saw here..what can i say ..the face was priceless
K-armaan baba kaha hai?
R-mujhe nahi pata...
K-great he brought another one..she muttered and left the room in anger..
R-whatever..
I searched for armaan around the room and found him nowhere..nor in the bathroom..terrace..under the bed..closet..nope nowhere..However i did find a not on the table..i read it..
Good morning Baby,
Thanks for last night..you may be soar..take a tylenol..and get out..
Love armaan.. 😊
There was a cheesy smile next to his name and a bunch of scribbles next to baby..i looked closely..Tina..Monicha..Supriya..That low life bas***d forgot my name..what did u he mean by get out? what happened? why was he so mad? I drove home in his clothes..climbed up the pipe..gosh how i was used to this..with all these late night parties with armaan..i took a shower and put on my favorite..actually his..sauce wala lal salwar..
I drove off to college..and ran through the hallways looking for armaan..yes i proclaimed in my head. when i found him...i ran even faster and bumped into anjali..stupied diva of this school...
A-watch were your going bi***
R-you watch it! dont you have eyes?
A-yes i do sweety..and for one..i am not the one with bags under my eyes..what did you not get any sleep? did daddy keep you up again with all the test answers?
R-dont dare say anything about my dad GOT IT! arghh..yes i was the principles daughter..Riddhima Sharma..daughter of Shashank Sharma..
A-f*** off..
She walked off..i spotted armaan looking at me..he turned around when i saw him..
I ran up to him and hugged him tight...
R- i love you i whispered
A-woah hold on there girl! he pulled me offf of him..all his friends were around him laughing..except Rahul..he game me the sympathy glare?
A-i dont love you though?
R-kya masak kare ho armaan? aur tum subaah subaah kaha chale gaye?
A-college? where else?
Subaah Subaah? one of his friends questioned.
A-yeah i took her out on a date and she got all fiesty on me..
Rawr..one of his friends said..
R-disgusting i said..armaan ye note?
A-ha..tumare liye tha..so now what do you want from me? god your annoying..
R-armaan tum aise kyu behaive kare ho? kal raat..
A-oh yea..kaal raat..Sex..haha..yea dont worry your were really good..call me if you want hook up again..he winked at me.😉
R-sex? armaan ye kaisa naam? it was love sweethaeart..i put his hand into mine..
He pullled away..
A-hey guys it was here first time with sex..not wait LOVE!
WOOT WOOT!
A-you know she wasent bad..who else wants to try?
Their were tears flooding down my face.. i looked down and looked back up and saw him and anajli kiss slowly..there tongues were dancing togethor..
An-comeone baby..leave this low class cheap b****
A-yea comeone..
He turned around and started walking away..i stood there..lifeless..stoned..i felt like a thousand people were yelling at me and pointing at me..i wanted to die..i waited there glued to the floor..he looked back..he looked sad and then slowly and smirk played on his lips..next thing i knew i was in the hospital..with machines and everything on me..my wrist was cut..my dad was crying and there were bouques all around me...and muskaan standing there..but nowhere was ARMAAN
Back to present..
May 22 2009 8:20
I threw the book across the room and jumped off the swing.with tears flooding down my face..i couldent breath...i went to my dresser and threw everything off of it..
Mr.Armaan Malik i am back!
Well thats the intro..please tell me if you like it! i need your responses..Tell me if i should continue or not..Stop the story? Any suggestions? Critisicm?
Hehe..Please leave repsones
Love Anisha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey yaar,
great intro...
Man am loving da concept so far...
God Armaan is such a jerk.. bah now Ridhiamz back..
letz see wat she does...
plzzz cont. soon!
nd do pm me if possible...
Luv SAZ!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ouch this is harsh! poor ridz, feel so bad for her! and i hate armaan, what a cheap b*****!!!!!!!!
interesting start, continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Characters of my Story-

Armaan-skirt chase..sleeps with every girl every night..love is a game for him..mad rich..inherited money from parents who died at age 12...now lives with rahul..armaan college hot shot..hates anjali..
Rahul-2nd topper of college after riddhima..loves to cook...parents are never home..armaan big brother and support..nothing like armaan..wants to find a girl like riddhima..books are his life..once had a crush on riddhima..hates anjali..
Anjalii-evil drama queen of the model..short skirts..money..bars..men..style..fashion..her life..her money..hates her parent..never got the right love..loves armaan..for his money? owns her own bar
Muskaan-sweet bubbly..lives with riddhima..parents are in punjab..loves to talk..impossible to shut her up..smart at times..loves chocolate..simple style..loud as anything..same as dmg
Riddhima-[you may imagine kasu, kash. kajen] impossile to make her talk..sweet as an angel..salwar type..smart as anything..1 topper of her college..good voice as a singer..really good at sports..after what happened in Excel College..she changed..lives in Mumbai..doseant talk..brave..
Atul-nature friendly..loves books and his cycle..hates computers..muskaan and riddhima and nikita are his younger sisters..likes to sing dance..make people smile..
Nikita-anjalis rival..she has class..drop dead gorgoes..wears skirts..is mad rich..really sweet though..caring..soft spoken..always there for her friends..smart..natural beauty..like in dmg
Group 1-live in mumbai
Riddhima
Muskaan
Atul
Nikita
Group 2-coming to mumbai dont know riddhima is there
Armaan
Rahul
Anjali
hey guys these are the characters..Abhi will come later when he meets Nikita later on in the story..please read and leave comments..suggestions..critisicm 😊
p.s.- Abhi will hate armaan..they will be rivals..but abhi will be best friends with Rahul and Anjali
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey really gr8 cocept
poor ridz
pls pm me wen u update
love
susha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey your FF sounds so niceee... my eyes where glued on the screen...and i agree with susha11 the concept was gr8 keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy dear,
nice intro & Characters


love
Riddss



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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww wow

sooo cool
great story
do continue soon
PM me k
luvs ya
swancy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was really good continue and pm me when u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ur ff sounds realy interesting plz continue ..

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