|| Aap Ki Yaad || Premeer One Shot - Page 2

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Me second! (: YAYY! 😃

Dang, I was this close! *pouts* You really were!😆😳

Aww this was sweet! Except that I wish Heer hadn't let her resolve crack. After what Prem did to her, I stand firm by my belief that Prem needs to seriously redeem himself before Heer should take him back. Prem should have to prove his love for Heer. I know Bhav....believe me....I really wanted to write more anger and all....but I just feel that with Heer and Prem...it wouldn't change!😆😆 She's too easy!😳

Rantings aside, I love how you described Prem looking so disshevelled. And you could so feel the pain they had when they seperated. And the love that still binds them. I have no idea if I'm making sense, but yes. Awww thanks, and yes....the pain and the love was what connects them, and yes Bhav that all makes sense! 😃

Looking forward to moar! (: We'll see! 😛

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: nikitaic

If only they made up like this!!!

Really nice...

nikita...

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Yeah, yeah, I know. :P I unreserved btw! (:

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

Me third :)

ahha, I just wanted to follow the pattern. You're so cute! 😛

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fifth. editing again in a few :) I need to find those smileys.Can't wait! 😃

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Meeeeeeeeeera. You and your little one shots always bring a smile on my face :) Me too? 😳 That makes me happy! 😛😃😳 And awwwwww you're seriously just a sweetheart Sanya! 😃

for all these PH one shots! Don't thank me...I love writing! 😳

First of all, why is this your last for a while? That's a shock. These can't stop! I look forward to these. Please keep 'em comin :) Esp the PH ones! Awww sorry hun! 😛 The only problem is....I focus too much on them instead of my ff's! 😳😛

Secondly .. I don't have words for this one, even though I know I'll end up saying alot. This was AMAZING. Just perfect. and you said you wrote this quick? It flowed so smoothly :) I'm touched hun....really the lack of words just makes me feel sooo good! 😳😃

What a happy ending! Always what I want :P It was a mixture of everything! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😛

HONESTLY, why can't this happen in the show? it was just perfect. Did I mention how much I LOVED it? :D Because they're insane!😆😆

-sanya.

Originally posted by: purplestar22

That was sooo good.. i really want something like this to happen!!

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

Nice one shot.. it was a romantic one... loved it...

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hai that is really romantic and cute! when will prem do that! i think that they are too busy tryin to save meet's pretending to be failing realtionship at the moment!