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Tia

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Friends! 😊 This is quite a fantastic forum with umpteen number of fanfics. This one's an FF on RKAB. Read it, enjoy it n plzzz lemme know wat you thought....

Your precious comments and suggestions shall motivate me to write further so they are quite necessary. I hope i can expect at least one comment per view? 😃

So here's me, Tia, presenting to you my first FF ever.I really enjoy myself while writing it, hope you guys enjoy while reading it too. 😆

The charachters are as follows:

Kunwar Yudhishter

Rani

Kunwar Rudr

Rajkumari Bhumi

Saksham

Rajkumari Niharika

Index

Chp.1 Prince Yudhishter Shishodiya

Chp.2 The Magical girl

Chp.3 Princess Niharika

Chp.4 Inaugaration Ceremony

Chp.5 Saksham and Niharika's plan

Chp.6 Pehli nazar me…. Teri ore….

Chp.7 Magical girl to the rescue

Chp.8 Saksham Arrives

Chp.9 Back to the Palace

Chp.10 Princess of his heart~RANI

Chp. 11 Journey to the palace

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Tia

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Posted: 16 years ago

Chp.1 Prince Yudhishter Shishodiya.

It was a bright sunny morning. The sun was shining brightly, yet the weather was cool and pleasant. A perfect day to go hunting thought Saksham. He was smart, decent and a good looking guy. A fair complexion, brown eyes, messy and tousled hair. His features were such that could easily capture any girl's attention. He had gotten the horses ready and they were due to leave any moment now. He patted the back of Emporio. Emporio was a huge horse with a coat of shiny white silk. Emporio was the prince's horse which the king had gifted to his son on his birthday two years ago and since then he had been the prince's favorite. Both of them were very fond of each other and enjoyed each other's company very much. But where was the prince? What was taking him so long? Saksham was just wondering when he heard a voice. "We ready to go Saksham?" Saksham turned to find a tall and handsome guy standing before him. It was the prince.

Prince Yudhishtir Shishodiya, the elder son of King Chandrapratap Shishodiya and the future king of the Shishodiya Kingdom. He had really unique features. A fair complexioned, perfectly chiseled face, with eyes to die for-yes, even though blue eyes are a rarity among Indians, prince Yudhishtir was endowed by God by just those bright deep blue eyes-jet black hair, and a height of 6.5'. He winked at Saksham and gave him his killer smile. He had that million dollar smile which easily made girls go weak in the knees. Today he was dressed in a beige cotton shirt and coffee brown corduroy trousers. He had a gold chain around his neck and a platinum bracelet dangled at his wrist. Simple - yet a total stud!

"Sure kunwar ji, we've been waiting for you for quite some time", replied Saksham. "Yeah, pitaji wanted to have a word with me hence I was held back for a while. Hey Emporio, how you doing today champ?" said Yudhishter.The horse nodded his head and neighed softly in reply. Both of them mounted the horses and started strolling towards the forest. Yudhishter really loved the forest. It had a calm and peaceful aura about it. Once you enter the forest you feel that you've left all your tension and worries out there somewhere and you feel light hearted. "So kunwar ji, what did Raja Sahib(RS) say?" Saksham inquired. Even though Saksham was the prince's right hand man, he and the prince shared a more intimate bond. The prince treated him as his younger brother and always shared his ideas and feelings with him.

"Well, pitaji wants me to get married. He said that next week on the inauguration ceremony of the swarna mandir (golden temple), he has invited all the kings from all over India along with their families, so then I can meet all the princesses and select my future bride from them," replied Yudhishter. "Right kunwarji, so what did you say," queried Saksham. "Well, I said that even if he and choti maa(CR) selected a bride for me, I would agree to and respect their decision," replied Yudhishter. "But kunwarji!!! This is a decision about your life! If you had this wonderful opportunity, why did you let it go?" exclaimed Saksham. "Saksham dear, you know me very well. You know that I'm not interested in all this and that I don't believe in love. I have already met so many princesses on various occasions, but none of them intrigued me or ever touched my heart. So these will also all be the same. Hence, I thought that rather if pitaji and choti maa selected a girl for me, she would be perfect," said Yudhishter calmly. It was no use arguing with the prince and Saksham knew it. He dropped the topic but still couldn't stop thinking about it.

Waiting for comments before I can continue writing further....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Reserved!

Hey dear! Gud start yar! do continue soon! Nd thanx for the pm! 😃

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princess52

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey tia.....
i m really sorry actually the thing is i dont watch thi epi n i dont know ht goin on....
al i read abut is armaan ridhima if u have any ff on it plzz do tell me
i read ur part just incase if i get anything but i didnt coz i dot watch it
i m reallly sorrrryyyyyy
but.....plzzz do continue coz there r lots of other ppl who would love to read ur work.....
bye
love habs
by the way freinds?

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zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey nice start... thnx for the pm

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Mehek

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey tia...great update dear...ur starting was very good
keep it up

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princess52

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey tiaa.....

u know wht......i m going to read ur fff....even thought its not AR but i m imagining it lollzzz

n i really like the part...lets seee.....how does arman n ridzzz sorry lollzzz how does Yudhishter meet his cindrella
eagrly waitng for it....
plzz continue soon n pm me as well
love habs

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats
Reserved! Hey dear! Gud start yar! Thanx hun! do continue soon! Nd thanx for the pm! 😃ur most welcome!

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey dears!

Thanks to all who read and commented! ur comments matter a lot to me... keep reading and commenting! A request to the silent readers, pls press the thank you i.e. the LIKE button.Here's the next part but before that a recap of part1.

Recap: Kunwar Yudhishter and his friend Saksham go hunting in the village and kunwarji tells Saksham that the king and queen want him to get married. so Yudhishter has asked them to select a girl for him as he does not beleive in love and wud get married to any princess they select for him.

Chp.2 The Magical girl

If only kunwarji would believe in love. But that would be possible only if some miracle occurred. But Saksham had faith in God and he believed that a miracle would happen! Kunwarji would find a girl who was Special and worth him. They had reached the interior of the forest and Saksham spotted a deer. He showed it to kunwarji, "There kunwarji, there goes our prey. Shall we go for it?" Kunwarji saw it too it was a golden deer with white spots over it. It was quite beautiful and he just felt that he shouldn't injure it. "No Saksham let it go, we shall not hunt today, let's find someplace to relax for a while, the Sun is directly above our heads." "Yeah kunwarji, sure!"

They soon found a huge tree near the riverbank below which they could rest for a while. Saksham tied the horses securely to a nearby tree, meanwhile kunwarji went to the riverbank to wash his hands and face and freshen up. Kunwarji took the cool water in his hands and splashed it over his face. It felt cool and refreshing, so he splashed some more water on his face. It was then that he saw her. Across the river, on the other side was a very beautiful girl. She had waist length hair, almond shaped brown eyes and delicious looking pink lips. She had a fragile body with luscious curves, and an air of innocence about her. She was dressed in a pink chudidaar with a white kurta and a pink dupatta around her neck. Unlike the princesses he had seen and met, she had no makeup and nor did she wear any jewellery or accessories, yet the sight of her was enough to mesmerize anyone. She seemed like some fairy that had descended from the heavens. She was playing with a lamb.

Yudhishter was mesmerized by her he just couldn't take his eyes off her. Saksham had finished tying the horses, he saw kunwarji looking at that girl so he decided to remain quiet and take in what was happening. Yudhishter was debating with himself whether to go there or not, but before he could decide anything, she was gone. "Dammit!" he said out aloud. "Ahm ahm!" Yudhishter turned around to find Saksham grinning. "What?" Yudhishter asked. "Nothing", replied Saksham still grinning. Saksham had prayed for a miracle, but he didn't know that his prayers would be granted so soon. The sight which he had just witnessed was actually a miracle. That angelic beauty had definitely struck a chord in kunwarji's heart. Kunwarji and Saksham spent some more time in the forest Saksham did not say anything about that girl. They talked about the weather, the animals, the plants, etc and soon it was time to return to the palace. Saksham untied the horses and took them to where Yudhishter was standing. He was lost in thought. Saksham was quite happy because Yudhishter's face clearly showed that he was thinking about that girl. They mounted their horses and set out towards the palace. But all the time Yudhishter was constantly thinking about that angel. He just couldn't put her out of his mind. The innocent manner in which she was playing with the lamb, the way she carried herself. Her enchanting beauty, those beautiful eyes, that lush hair, those lips, that face- wait a minute! Why am I thinking about her? I don't even know her. It did not suit a kunwar to think such things about any girl. This girl was really getting on his nerves. "Kunwar ji?" The voice of Saksham got him out of his reverie. "Uh?" asked Yudhishter. "We've reached the palace," replied Saksham.

They entered the palace. Raja Sahib and choti rani were sitting in the living room waiting for Yudhishter, he entered the living room with Saksham and greeted Raja Sahib and Choti Rani. Raja Sahib said, "Yudhishter beta, I and choti rani want to tell you something." "What is it pitaji?" asked Yudhishter. Choti rani replied, "Well dear, the inauguration ceremony has been preponed. Instead of next week, it shall be held tomorrow, because Raja Sahib has to go abroad on an urgent business trip." "Hope you don't mind son, I know you also have to select your future wife in the ceremony tomorrow, but -" said Raja Sahib. "Its fine pitaji, I'll manage," replied Yudhishter. "Ok, now you may go to your room and have some rest, you'll have to be prepared for tomorrow," said choti rani. "Pranam pitaji, pranam choti maa," said Yudhishter and left with Saksham.