A CINDERELLA STORY Upd new (Chp11. Pg.11) Dec7 - Page 5

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Hey dearies!

here's the update, do read n comment! waiting eagerly for ur comments as usual!

Recap: Yudi is bit by a snake and is cared for by the magical girl.

Chp. 8 Saksham arrives.

Saksham called kunwarji again, luckily this time he could hear the ring. Kunwarji, please, please pick up the phone, he prayed. But no one answered, he tried again. The girl, who was taking care of the wounded man, heard a phone ringing. It must be the man's cell phone, she thought. She checked his shirt pockets, empty. Then she realized that it was from near the man that she heard the sound. His pants, she thought. She checked his pant pockets and found the cell phone. It was blinking and had SAKSHAM written on the screen. She had never seen or used a cell phone before. She had only heard about it. But still instinct told her that she should press the green button. She did so and the device stopped ringing. She put it to her ear and said, "Hello?" Saksham was finally relieved to hear someone answer the phone. But it was a female's voice. "Hello," he answered. "May I know who I'm speaking to?" she asked. "Yeah sure, this is Saksham, may I know where is my friend and why are you answering his phone?" Saksham asked calmly and braced himself for the answer. "Saksham ji your friend is wounded and I'm looking after him. He's unconscious so I had to answer his phone," she answered. "Ok now can you tell me your location so th- hello? Hello?" Damn, thought Saksham, the phone lost network and got disconnected. He tried calling again and again and again but without any success. He saw the trail formed by blood leading towards the north and decided to follow it.

Around ten minutes had passed but Saksham had not called again. She changed the dressing again. She was feeling quite tired. She sat down near the cot with her head resting on it and within a few minutes before she realized it, she fell asleep.

Saksham walked for some time and then he spotted a hut. He went nearby and peeped in. There on a cot lay kunwarji. A girl was sitting by his feet, she was asleep. He entered the hut kunwarji had a bandage tied on his shoulder and was unconscious. He was slightly pale. The girl had taken good care of kunwarji she must be tired, thought Saksham. He decided not to wake the girl, but rather wait. He was pacing up and down the hut when suddenly his phone rang. It was Nihariha. The network was weak so he went out and received the call. "Hello Niharika ji," said Saksham. "Saksham, where are you? Where's bro? I been trying his cell but it is not reachable. What is taking you guys so long?" she asked restlessly. If he told her anything she would simply be worried. He decided not to tell her anything. "Niharika ji, relax, kunwarji is fine, he's not here at present, we have been held back due to work, we'll be there by morning. Due to weak network it won't be possible to contact you. I'll inform kunwarji that you had called," said Saksham. "Fine, take care of bro and yourself," she said. "Yeah you too, good bye," replied saksham. "Good bye," she said and hung up. Saksham went back in the hut, the girl was awake. "Excuse me," said Saksham. The girl turned and Saksham was surprised to see her.

It was the same girl who they had seen by the riverside. The girl whom kunwarji had developed a secret liking to. "Are you Saksham?" she queried. "Yes," he replied. "What happened to my friend?" queried Saksham. "Snakebite," she replied without emotion. "What! Then we need to see a doc urgently. Snakebites can be fatal too!" said Saksham in a worried tone. "Relax, your friend here is very lucky. I and my friends happened to be nearby when he was attacked. We heard a yelp of pain and then a thud. So we decided to check out. We found him in the bushes. I've removed the venom from his body and bandaged the wound after applying a herbal paste. He'll recover soon. He did wake up twice but became unconscious again. The fever has also come down," she said calmly. "Well, thank you very much you will be richly rewarded for what you've done," Saksham told her. "I do not want any rewards for this, it was my duty. Now since you are here, I hope I can entrust him to your care and go home," she said. "Yeah sure, thank you very much once again," he replied. She rose to leave, Saksham wanted her to stay but he couldn't tell her to. He didn't even know whether kunwarji had even seen her. He couldn't just let her go, this was their only chance.

"Excuse me," he said. She turned, "yes?" "Well you know my friend would like to thank you personally, so could you please tell me where can we get to you?" he asked innocently. "It's ok, there's no need for that," she replied. A cell phone rang, this time, it was Yudhishter's. He went to receive it. "Hello," he said in the mouthpiece. "Hello sir, this is Smita from NEW PRODUCTS, we have launc-" "At present I'm busy and not interested, thank you," he said curtly and hung up. He turned to face that girl, to his surprise she had vanished.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely updates-read them in one go and it is flowing along beautifully!, tia- 👏 waiting for the next episode...
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Hey dear! Very sweet update!!! Hope Kuwarji sees Rani!!! Do continue soon! Thanx for the pm!!!
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hey really sweett update hope..ydh gwt to know it was her who treaterd her....
continue soon n pm me as well
love habs
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hey where r u ???????when u gonna update?

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Hey dears!

Thanks for all ur lovely comments n the patience is soon going to be rewarded!!

m back n so are my updates...

shall be updating soon..........

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Hey dears!

Sorry for the long long gap in updating....

I know its been around threemonths but m really sorry... things kept coming up n i jus couldn't come online...

neways, now that m back here's the update and a good news for u all, from now on i shall be updating even more frequently…so enjoy......

n THANK YOU for all ur lovey-dovey comments on the last update, I jus loved them....

Recap: Saksham arrives at the hut whr the girl was caring for Yudi


Chp. 9 Back to the Palace.

He rushed out of the hut to follow her but there was no sign of her. Damn these telecallers he thought, because of that idiot phone call he couldn't even ask her name. All along he had been thinking about getting kunwarji close to that girl and make him accept his feelings for her and now when his work had been made easy by her presence, he had done absolutely nothing to stop her. He had failed. He wouldn't get such a chance again. He thought that he was being too cynical he didn't even know whether kunwarji had even seen her or no today. After all, whatever had happened today had been the plan of destiny.

But what exactly had happened today? He was still lost in thought when he heard kunwarji call his name, "Saksham, how did you manage to find me?"

"Kunwarji relax, you need rest," he said in a concerned tone. He made Yudhishter lie down again and then said, "When you didn't turn up for so long, I decided to call you up but your cell was not reachable. So I decided to go in search of you. On the way, I saw a pool of blood near the bushes and found your bracelet near it. I was worried for you. I saw a trail of blood and decided to follow it and then I spotted this shack. Yudhishter tried to get up but his shoulder ached severely, he touched it and found it firmly bandaged.

"Saksham, who tied this and how did I land up here? The last thing I remember is that I was listening to those girls when I think I was attacked by a snake and within a few moments I lost consciousness and fell on the ground," he said.

"Girls? Which girls kunwarji?" queried Saksham.

Kunwarji's face lit up as he said, "Saksh, you remember the other day, the girl who was by the riverside, I saw her today!"

"Really?'' Saksham feigned surprise.

"Yeah, while I was going to check the remaining 2 locations, I was walking through the bushes when I heard someone singing. The girl had a very melodious voice. I halted for a while to listen to her. But soon she was interrupted by her friends and they started talking about her love," replied Yudhishter.

"What! She's in love?" asked Saksham incredulously.

"Yeah, but why are you so shocked?" asked Yudhishter.

"Oh nothing, kunwarji. So then what were they saying?" he asked feeling dejected, since this girl was out of bounds, they would have think of some other way to get Kunwarji away from Princess Bhumi.

"You know, this girl intrigues me. She is in love with a guy she hasn't even seen, and she loves him with such sincerity and devotion you won't believe. You know I was really jealous of this guy initially, but now I'm not," he grinned and continued, "Saksh when I saw this girl that day, I was instantly attracted to her in some unnatural sort of a way. The more I thought about her, the more restless I was to meet her. But still I just didn't want to accept my feelings for her. But today when she said that she was in love with someone, I felt like I was stabbed, I felt that I had lost my most priced possession, and it was then that I realized that I am in love with her. Yes Saksham, I'm in love with her!"

Saksham was shocked at this discovery. He was happy and sad at the same time. Happy because kunwarji finally believed in love and sad because his new found love already belonged to someone else. "But kunwarji, didn't you just say that she is in love with someone?" asked Saksham depressed.

"Yeah Saksh, you're right," Yudhishter said with a twinkle in his eye. "She is in love; she is in love with none other than the prince of the Shishodiya kingdom, Prince Yudhishter Shishodiya!"


Saksham was relieved to hear this. He said, "Whoa! kunwarji congrats. So did you talk to her? What's her name?"

"No Saksh, unfortunately I couldn't talk to her and nor do I know her name. Before I could talk to her I was bit by that snake and I fainted. What happened after that I don't know, but yeah, she's become the princess of my heart and so I shall call her RANI," he replied gleefully.

"I know kunwarji. Your wound was taken care of by that very girl and she has done it really well. She was here when I came. She said that she has removed the venom and applied a herbal paste. Does it hurt still?" asked Saksham.

"Not much, I really want to meet this girl Saksh," Yudhishter said with longing in his voice.

"Yeah kunwarji, we shall definitely do something about this. But at present you need rest. We need to get back to the palace. One more thing, Niharika ji had called, she was really worried about you but I haven't told her anything," said Saksham.

"Good Saksh, thanks a lot. What would I do without you?" Yudhishter sighed.

"It's okay Kunwarji will you be able to walk back to the car?" he asked concerned.

"Yeah, I'll manage. Let's go," replied Yudhishter.

Yudhishter got up and put on his shirt. They slowly walked out of the shack. It had grown extremely dark. They treaded their way through the bushes in the dark. They soon reached the car. Saksham sat in the driver's seat with kunwarji by his side. He drove slowly in the cool night. The sound of cicadas following them. A bat swooped in the sky above them. It was after midnight that they reached the palace. It was quiet. Everyone was asleep. Saksham left Yudhishter in his room and after making sure that he was comfortable and didn't need anything more, waved him good night and left. He decided to check on Nihariha before he hit the bed. The corridor was deserted. He sneaked to her room. She was sleeping peacefully. He kissed her forehead and whispered, "Sleep well my princess, see you in the morning." He closed the door and left. He was extremely tired and fell asleep immediately as he hit the bed. However, Yudhishter couldn't catch a wink of sleep till the early hours of dawn. He was still thinking about Rani before he fell asleep. She kept haunting his dreams throughout the night.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great Update!! I can't wait til they meet!
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HEYY TIAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
WELLLCOMEE BACKKK
ATLASTT UR BACKKK
MISSED U N UR FFSWEETY...
THNKZZ FOR THE LONG BUT SHORTUPDATE LOLZZ....I JUST LOVED TO BITSSSS.....DANMM ATLAST HEREALIZED HE LOVES HER N HEHEH OPBV RANIALSOLOVES HER...SOOO NOW WHN R THEY REALLY GONNAMEEEEEET???
PLZZZZ CONTINUEE SOOONNNNNN
LOVE U
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hey gauranitai, thanks!

Habz,

m glad u loved it!

here's the next one for u...

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