A CINDERELLA STORY Upd new (Chp11. Pg.11) Dec7 - Page 6

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okay dears,

here's the next update. hope u guys enjoy it!

Ppl, i do get a lot many no. of views but hardly any comments and the LACK OF COMMENTS IS DEMOTIVATING... it's a request at least hit the like button aft u read if u don't hv tym to comment... but comments are more appreciated...

Recap: Yudi and Saksham return to the palace and Yudi realises that he's in love wid the riverside girl.

Chp.10 Princess of his heart ~ RANI


CR was pacing up and down in her room. She had played her first trick. Yudhishter's engagement had been fixed with Bhumi. Everyone thought that Bhumi was the perfect wife and daughter-in-law anyone could get. But CR knew better. Bhumi was one of the most hopeless person one could have as a wife and a daughter-in-law that anyone could get. This girl didn't have even a tinge of the Indian culture. She was drenched from head to foot in the western culture. Her day was incomplete without a late night out. She was a totally extravagant and spoiled brat. Once Yudhishter was married to her, he would be confined to her clutches and would have no time for RS or the masses, which would ruin his image making him ineligible to become the heir and future king of the Shishodiya kingdom. His ineligibility would leave RS with only one option the thought of it was enough to make her happy. She was waiting eagerly for that day. She was lost in thought when her cell phone beeped. It was a sms from an international number. She read it and smiled.

Be prepared for a surprise next week.

That was all that the entire message contained.
***

Since Saksham had arrived, the girl who had been taking care of Yudhishter was free to leave. She had informed him and was about to leave when Saksham had stopped her and asked her where they could meet her again. She was more frightened than shocked to hear the request. She had refused as politely as possible but he was quite persistent. But then she had been saved due to that phone call. Taking advantage of which she had fled from there. She ran as fast as she could and hid in the nearby bushes. She had seen him when he came running after her, but the bushes had saved her. He looked here and there but couldn't find her, he went back inside. She was relieved. She started walking towards her house, lost in thought. The past few hours had been a hell for her. She just couldn't put that man out of her mind. He was so handsome; with a perfect body and unique features even while he was unconscious he had a strong magnetic charisma. Who was he? Where had he come from? She wondered.

In the hours when she had been taking care of him, she had come extremely close to him. She had felt attracted towards him. He had a good physique, but there was more to it than mere physical attraction. She wanted to care for him her entire life. She felt as though they both belonged to each other that their futures lay together. But then she realized that this could not be possible. She felt that it was absurd because she was in love with the prince. Having such feelings for any other man was like betraying her love, the prince. She loved the prince with such passion and devotion that she would never be able to love any other man in such a manner. In this life it was not possible for her to be united with the prince due to the huge rift in their social status, but she would pray to God to make her a princess in her next life. Now very soon he would be married to Rajkumari Bhumi. But she wanted to see the prince of his dreams at least once before he got married. She wanted to be a part of all the ceremonies and see him happily married. That one glimpse of him would be sufficient for her to spend her entire life. But for that she would have to find a way to get to the palace. She had to think up a plan.
***

At Rajkumari Bhumi's palace.

It was almost noon time. Bhumi woke up. A maid knocked at the door and entered her room with her bed tea after seeking her permission. She was wearing a flimsy night gown and her hair was loose falling on her shoulders. Bhumi usually woke up at this time every day. The maid served the tea and left. She sat back on the bed and was sipping tea when her phone rang. She picked it up, "Hello?"

"Hey my princess, how are you?" said a male's voice.

"Ohmegod! Prince! I'm fine. How are you?" exclaimed Bhumi.

"I'm fine sweetheart, what's going on?" asked the prince.

"Aw nothing, life is boring without you," Bhumi replied.

"Hey honey, there's a surprise for you," said the prince.

"Wow! What is it?" queried Bhumi.

"You'll have to wait for a while. Maybe by the next week you'll get it," he informed.

"Oh, I'm eagerly waiting for it, and yeah I really liked your previous surprise," Bhumi told him.

"Surprise, what surprise?" he asked surprised.

"Oh, very smart. I like it," she replied.

"What?" he asked puzzled.

"Ok fine, so you act as though you're unaware of it, anyways we'll talk about it after your surprise. Hey, when you coming back?" she queried.

He smiled to himself and replied, "Well sweetie, you're very well aware how busy I am, so can't say anything about it."

"Aw, I miss you honey," Bhumi said.

"Miss you too dear. Okay then bye, take care," he replied.

"Bye," she said and hung up. She finished her tea and went for a shower, dressed up and went downstairs to her mother's room to intimate her about her day's plans.
***


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Posted: 15 years ago
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really nyc.. it's nyc to read the story!!
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Here's a new update.. plzz don't forget to leave ur comments, or atleast hit the like button....



Chp.11 Journey to the palace.

Rani reached home and was greeted by her grandma. When grandma saw Rani's face, she understood that something was bothering her.

"What's the matter Rani dear? Where were you and why do you look so down?" she asked.

She told her grandma what happened during the day and also told her about her plans to go the palace. Dadi understood her anxiety and said, "O my dear, rest assured, we will definitely come up with some or the other idea. Now relax and freshen up while I serve dinner. After the day's events, you need a good night's sleep. So have dinner and go to bed, we'll talk in the morning."

Rani's mood did lighten up after talking to her grandma. She washed her hands and face and sat down for dinner with grandma. She had prepared dal, rice, chapatti and spinach and sheera for dessert. Rani ate the simple yet delicious and sumptuous meal with her grandma. She then cleared the dishes and then made the bed for her grandma. She put on the small lamp beside the table and turned off the lights before she hit the bed. But she couldn't sleep. The thoughts of that guy kept haunting her memory and how much ever she tried, she couldn't block them. It was nearly 3 a.m. in the morning before she could catch some sleep.
***

Rani lived with her dadi in that small house of theirs in the village. Rani's parents had died when she was 3 yrs old. They had become the victims of an epidemic that had struck the village. Rani and her dadi had been away from the village on a pilgrimage hence they had been saved from the clutches of the vicious epidemic. The Royal people had done everything that was possible to save the villagers, but despite their efforts, around 1/3 of the village had fallen prey to the disease.

When Rani and dadi had returned from the pilgrimage, it had subsided and they learnt of the heart-breaking news from their fellow villagers who had been lucky enough to escape the fangs of death. Rani due to her little age could not comprehend the meaning of it. Dadi told her that her parents had gone to live with God in heaven, leaving behind all their worries and sorrows. That they lived in a big house with streams of honey, milk, chocolate and crystal clear water flowing around it and gardens with flowers and orchards of fruits of all kinds in it. Rani was very happy for them, but she still missed them very much. It had been very difficult for them to bear the loss, but gradually as time passed, they learnt to live with it. As Rani grew up, dadi told her the truth. But it didn't weaken her rather she became even stronger and learnt to face the challenges of life with much more determination. It made her an independent, strong girl loved, respected and adored by all.
***

Rani, as usual, woke up early in the morning before her dadi. She fed the hens and chicks, watered the plants. Then she washed the clothes and did the cleaning. She had a bath and dressed up, and then she put the washed clothes to dry. She went on to prepare breakfast. When she had finished all her chores and breakfast was prepared, Rani woke her dadi. Dadi woke up, took a bath and got dressed. Then they both did the puja and had breakfast. While Rani was clearing the dishes after breakfast and dadi was sitting out on the porch, Sohni came running calling out for Rani, she was panting and gasping for breath.

"Sohni have you participated in a marathon or something? Why are you so out of breath?" asked dadi.

Rani finished the cleaning and came out. "What is it Sohni?" she asked.

"Oh Rani, it is the most amazing news I've ever heard!" she replied.

"Ok, but calm down and let us know what are you so hyper-excited about," said dadi.

"Dadi you won't believe it. Rani, I just heard, rather overheard munshi ji talking to someone. He was saying that the Royal palace needs a nurse for Badi Rani Sahiba, as the one who was previously caring for her has quit the job," replied Sohni.

"Ok so?" said Rani. "So here's your chance to get to the palace!" exclaimed Sohni.

Dadi's face showed a look of recognition. But Rani still looked confused, "I still don't think that I get you."

"Rani, Rani, my dear Rani, think about it. You want to go to the palace, and they need a nurse for Badi Rani, so don't you think that you are the best person for the job. I mean, the way you took care of that man yesterday, I'm sure he must be dancing on his feet by now," said Sohni.

"Yeah dear, I perfectly agree with Sohni, this job is your ticket to the palace, to meet your prince," said dadi.

"But Sohni, taking care of that man was different whereas, taking care of Badi Rani Sahiba is different," said Rani.

"No it's not, that man had a snakebite, you had to act fast, a delay of a second and that man would've lost his life, but you acted at lightning speed and saved his life. Whereas, Badi Rani is suffering from paralysis, you just have to treat her well, give her medicines on time, make her do a few exercises and the other one or two things told to you by the doc," said Sohni.

"But dadi, how can I leave you alone here and go to the palace?" Rani said.

"O dear, don't you worry about me, I can take care of myself and Sohni is always here whenever I need help. You go child, go to your prince before it's too late," Dadi told her.

Rani's face lit up. "Sure Dadi?" she asked.

"Sure dear," she replied.

"Oh thank you dadi, thank you so much," said Rani and hugged her dadi.

"But dadi, if anyone wants a job in the palace they are supposed to have a talk with munshi ji, so what about that?"

"Just let the wicked, spoil sport munshi remain out of this. I know my girl, and I know that she is quite capable of handling it on her own. Now what are you waiting for? Get going, hurry up and pack your belongings," dadi said.

"Dadi you mean right now?" asked Rani shocked. "Yes sweetheart, at this very moment. I do not want you to waste anymore time, now go!" replied dadi.

Rani hurriedly went in and began packing her belongings. She came out all set to go. While Rani was packing her belongings, Sohni had arranged for a bullock-cart to take Rani to the Royal Palace. She came out of the house and stood staring at dadi. Suddenly she hugged her her eyes were filled with tears at the prospect of leaving dadi alone behind. Dadi had been her only family since childhood and now she was leaving her dadi and going away. But she held back her tears knowing well that if they started flowing out it would be difficult for her and dadi. Dadi also understood this very well so she said, "hurry dear, your Princey is waiting for you!"

Rani smiled at this. She got in the waiting cart and waved good bye to Sohni and dadi, not knowing that this journey of her's would change the course of her life and her world forever.
***




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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Hey!! Great update! I loved both parts! now lets see what happens to Rani on her journey to the palace! I can't wait!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey tia....
i m soooo sorrryyyy....
i know i know im late...but i told u the reason..if not chekc ur scrpbook
n plzzzz dont i dare think tht i dont like ur .....ff...
itsss different n unique n realllly nicee...
muaaaahhh
n ...lsietn....u knowww.....do anj AR version as well..coz its really nice n unique....i m suree...all AR fans re gonnnaaaa like it...
all u have to do is....just chnage the name,....n if u want any help.....i will be alwayz there
love u sweety
update soon
habs
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks to everyone who have been reading this FF but now this FF shall no longer be continued here, those who wish to read it can follow it here:Index
A Cinderella story


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