my 1st ff Love?ar.r as shilpa pt.20pg30 - Page 16

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Posted: 16 years ago
really a nice one⭐️ so sweet😊😉 but RJ kahan se aygay😡🤢 i wish he dont create any problem😳 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"jo aansu na hote aankho me
to aankhein itni khubsurat na hoti
jo dard na hota dil me
to khushi ki koi qeemat nahi hoti
jo bewafai na ki hoti waqt ne
to wafa ki kabhi chahat na hoti
agar sochne se hojati mohobbat ki muradein
to DUA ki kabhi Zarurat na hoti!"


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Posted: 16 years ago
hey i hv jst caught up wth ur ff nd wowwwwwwwwww realy intrestng 2 read yaar seriously vryyyy fnny lv,evrythng spcilly tul nd kunal nd ar thir jodi superb armaan ki zindagi mein 3haddi thi ab 1reh gay wowwwwwwww yaar cnt wait i hop ar wll say her wht he wnt 2 cnt wait ont sooooooooooon nd plzzzz do pm m.........
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow yaar interesting..............
loved it
thanx for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
Fantastic part... Atul is so cute.. jus luv him for tht Bhabhi part... Arrr i really hope Raj doesn spoil the fun... really wish to c the confession.. Hey dear gr8 goin plzz continue soon.....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part! please continue soon!

Avanti
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Posted: 16 years ago
great updt
thnx 4 pm n contd soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: yachna

hey i hv jst caught up wth ur ff nd wowwwwwwwwww realy intrestng 2 read yaar seriously vryyyy fnny lv,evrythng spcilly tul nd kunal nd ar thir jodi superb armaan ki zindagi mein 3haddi thi ab 1reh gay wowwwwwwww yaar cnt wait i hop ar wll say her wht he wnt 2 cnt wait ont sooooooooooon nd plzzzz do pm m.........
luv yachna

thank you for comments........
i will add u in my pm list......
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part...very very nice & interesting...

do con it soon....reall waiting to know next....
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Posted: 16 years ago
I m so sorry for late update..i had 2 finish my school projects....
Part: 16

RJ saw anjali,'.

Rj: anjali tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

An: enjoy'.

Rj: lekin ridhz'

An: kya ridhz?

Rj: tum ridhima se mili ya nahi?

An: ha me usko ghar par hi mili thi, tum ne usko yaha dekha'.

Rj: nahi'

At: ye rj to meri anjali ke pichhe pad gaya'

Atul go there'.

At: hi anjali'..

An: hi''

At: anjali tumhe kunal bula raha he.

An: muje kyu?

At: anjali tum ruko me abhi puchh ke aata hu'..

An: ruko atul'.

Anjali go from there'..

Rj: atul ridhz kaha he?

At: kaun ridhz'?

Rj: atul I m serious..

At: ambulance bula du'

Rj: atul muje batao ki ridhz kaha he'

At: gussa kyu hote ho yahi kahi hogi..

Atul go from there'..

Rj: atul mujse judh kyu bol raha he? Kuch to gadbad he'..

At the terrace

Armann was waiting for ridhima'..

When he heard someone coming he hide behind the door''

Ridhima came there'..

R: di kaha he?

She was so confused'.

Armaan was lokking at here'

He just wants to tell he how much he loves her'

R: di''.di''

Armaan came out'.

R: tum?

Ar: ha me?

R: di kaha he?

Ar: ridhima muje tumse kuch baat karni he'

R: abhi nahi'..

Ar: ridhima please..

Armaan grab ridhima's hand'

R: armaan please let me go'.

Ar: lekin tumhe mero baate sunani hi padegi'..

R: armaan'.

Ar: ridhima. I love u'.

Ridhima was shocked'.

She had a tears in her eyes..

Armaan leave her hand..

R: armaan'..please aisa majak mat karo'.

Ar: ye majak nahi he'

R: me tumpe kaise yakin karlu'

Ar: me tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu'

R: kuch bhi?

Ar: ha kuch bhi''

R: tum please ye majak mat karo mere saath..

Ar: ye majak nahi he'.

R: armaan please''

Ridhima go from there''..

And left armaan sad'..

He was crying'.

Ar: ye mera saath hi kyu hua'.

Maine kya bura kiya tha'..

Muje kyu pyar hua'.

Ab ye pyar muje jine bhi nahi ega aur marne bhi nahi dega'.

Me ridhima ko kaise batau ki me kitna pyar karta hu?

Kyu muje ridhima nahi samjati? Kyu?

Guy: woh tumhe samjati he'.

Ar: kya?

He turn back'.

He was so shocked'

Ar: RJ tum?

Rj: ha me'.

Armaan smiles at him'.

Ar: hi.

Rj: armaan me je muskurahat ke pichhe chupa dard samaj sakta hu'.

Ar: tum kya baat kar rahe ho?

Rj: tumhe sab pata he'..

Ar: lekin tumhe to kuch bhi nahi pata'..

Armaan was about to leave..

Rj: I know that u love ridhima'.

Armaan was shocked''.

Rj: maine tumhari sab baate sunli'.

Ar: Rj aisa kuch nahi he..

Rj: armaan its ok'.

Ar: I m sorry'me samaj sakta hu ki tumhe kitna dard hua hoga ye sab sunke..

Rj: armaan I told u its ok'.

Ar: tum bahot lucky ho ki tumhe tumhara pyar mile gaya'.

Rj: no I m not lucky'.

Ar: kyu?

Rj: kyu ki ridhima meri girl friend nahi he'.

Armaan was shocked'.

Rj: hum dono natak kar rahe the'.

Ar: to tum ridhima se pya nahi karate?

Rj: ha'.bahot pyar karta hu'lekin ridhima muje pyar nahi karti..

Ar: kya?

Rj: ha woh kisi aur se pyar karti he'.

ar: kise?

Rj: tumhe'..

Armaan was shocked'.

Rj: ha tumhe'.

Ar: lekin woh to'..

Rj: me tumhe sab batata hu'

Jab me ridhima ko bahhapan me pehli baar mila tha tab who sirf tumhari hi baate karti rehati thi'.

Aur jab hum school me the tab me ridhz ko tumhara naam leke bahot paresan karta tha'.and then I went to london''.

Ar: tumhe kaise pata hai ki ridhima mujse pyar karti he'.

Rj: kyu ki ridhima ne muje bataya tha'

Tumhe pata hai ki me ridhz ke saath dinner par gaya tha'

Ar: ha'

Rj: maine ridhima ko propose kiya tha lekin woh to muje pyar hi nahi karati'.

Ar: I m sorry'

Rj: it okey'..

Ar: to ridhima ne muje kyu nahi bataya'.

Rj: kyuki ridhima ko aisa lagta hai ki woh tumhare type ki nahi hai..u know like modern'..aur phir usne tumhari aur atul ki baate bhi sunli thi'.

Ar: lekin woh to maine tab kaha tha'.

Rj: I know'

Ar: aab me kya karu?

Rj: tum jo bhi karoge me tumhare saath hu'.hume ridhima ko sirf yehi yakin dilana hai ki she is perfect for u'..

Ar: thanks yaar'..

Atul and kunal came there'.

At: armaan kaam ho gaya'.

Ar: nahi yaar''

At: ye RJ ne hi kuch kiya hoga..

Atul was so bad and about to punch Rj'.

Ar: atul ruko'

At: kyu?

Ar: Rj muje help karne wala hai'..

At: kya?

Ar: ha'.

At: kyu?

Ar: ye kyu ka javab me baad me duga'.

At: I m sorry rj '.

Rj: its ok.i can understand'..

At: friends'..

They all shack hands'..

please comment....

Edited by cutelove1111 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey i am first i think...???!!!! yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

awesome part dude....but armaan should be ecstatic yaar..;ab aayega mazaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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