KDMH Fanfic-ALL FOR YOU MY LOVE(updated page 57)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys....dis is mabel...
i am starting a new fanfic....
i wud b updating it as frequently as possible....
but only if u guys find it interesting...i wud continue...

I wud b continuing from last week's episode where aman n gayu follow rahul n kakul

dis is my official ff bannar
index:
episode 1 --> page 1
episode 2--> page 1
episode 3 --> page 4
episode 4 --> page 6
episode 5 --> page 7
episode 6 --> page 8
episode 7 --> page 10
episode 8 --> page 12
episode 9 --> page 13
episode 10 --> page 15
episode 11 --> page 17
episode 12 --> page 19
episode 13 --> page 20
episode 14 --> page 25
episode 15 --> page 27
episode 16 --> page 29
episode 17 --> page 31
episode 18 --> page 33
episode 19 --> page 35
episode 20 --> page 38
episode 21 --> page 40
episode 22 --> page 43
episode 23 --> page 46
episode 24 --> page 48
episode 25 --> page 51
episode 26 --> page 53
episode 27 --> page 56
episode 28 --> page 57
Edited by mabel - 16 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Episode 1:
Scene 1: @ de hostipal

Tanu is being treated inside n rahul n kakul r talking about all dat happened.

Kakul tells him everything n he is damn angry wid rohit.

Rahul: I wont spare him!!!!! (wants to go n confront rohit)

Kakul: No rahul!plz!control urself!dis is not de rite tym!rite now tanu needs u!u shud b wid her.

(gayu n aman enter...but rahul n kakul dont notice their presence)

Rahul: ok f9.but wat next?

Kakul: I don't knw!I m confused!

Rahul: if evry1 @ home comes 2 knw about dis?I don't wanna even think about de scenario!

(Aman n gayu r hearin all dis secretly.)

Kakul: I fear de same!but hw long can v hide it?...de truth will come out sum day!n neways dis is something dat cannot be hidden!

Aman: (to himself) wat r dey talking about???

Rahul: I don't think dere is a way other dan abortion!

Gayu: (softly) abortion!!!! Omg!!!

(Gayu storms out)

Kakul: what r u saying? Hw can u even think dat way? Wat's de poor baby's fault?I don't think it is rite 2 kill de innocent child.

Aman walks away hearin dis...n thinks 2 himself...hw did dis happen?hw can things go against my planning?hw cud u do dis kakul?I m not gonna 4give dis mistake of urs kakul!u r gonna pay 4 dis!!!

Rahul: I don't wanna do dat either!but v hav no choice!!! U tell me wat else can v do?

Kakul: I don't knw! l8 tanu recover...v'll decide wat 2 do after dat.

Precap:

Aman: but mom?

Gayu: no aman!!!u cant stop me now!!!kakul has crossed her limits!!!!!

Aman smiles wickedly.

Edited by mabel - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i hope u guys lyked it...if u really did plz giv me ur reviews...if u guys find it gud i will continue!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its good but 1 thing just cut out the shortening of words some of them i just didnt get! but cant wait for next episode
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wonderful, Mabel. Great job. Keep it up, hun 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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so many views n just 2 comments...but since de comments come from the two of u it boosts up my esteem...n thus means a lot 2 me...thnk u so much 4 ur comments...if i m continuing wid de fanfic...its only becoz of ur comments....i m so sorry cudnt get back 2 u guys earlier....was very busy dats y....i hope u guys lyk dis....

Episode 2:

Scene 1: outside de hospital

Aman: mom plz!I think dere is sum misunderstandin...dis cant be!!!!!

Gayu: dere is no misunderstanding aman...u r too innocent!dats y u r not understanding all dis...(now angrily)but nw I hav understood evrythin!!!!!!!...kakul is pregnant...dat too wid rahul's kid!!!!...i never thought dat rahul will do sumthing lyk dis!!!!!disgusting!!!....n dat kakul?she did exactly wat I feared!she cheated on u aman!but now I wont spare her 4 wat she has done!just wait n watch aman wat I am goin 2 do

Aman: but mom...

Gayu: no aman!u cant stop me now...kakul has crossed her limits!!!!!

Aman smiles wickedly.

Scene 2: in aman's bedroom

Aman is walkin back n forth wid anger...

Aman: (2 himself) how did dis happen?how???? Kakul never hid anything from me before?then how cum she didn't tell me such a big thing?if anything had happened between the two...she wud have definitely told me before our marriage @least!!! But she didn't do dat! am I thinking too much into it? Maybe they were talking about sumone else!...but who?...i will go mad like dis!!!KAKUL!!!!!!

Scene 4: rohit's house

Rohit: dad, I dont wanna do dis!!!!! I can't cheat her...I luv her and...and she is also pregnant wid my kid!!!

R's Dad: I know my son..wat v r doing is wrong?I am also not happy doing it...but think of our future son...if v don't do dis den v will b finished!!!!!!!

R's Mom: exactly rohit...v'll b on de streets!!!!!! Wat will v do den?if u dont agree to devi's condition...she will not take dat lightly...didn't u c how she spoke 2 us?

Rohit: still mom...I cant abandon my luv n my child?I know v hav no option...I will do wat u want me to...but I will never b happy widout her in my life!!!!!

(rohit walks away)

Scene 5:back 2 de hospital

Tanu regains conscience. She starts cryin n kakul consoles her

Rahul: hw cud u even think of committing suicide? U dint even think of wat wud v go through?

Tanu: (crying)I m sorry bhaiya...but I dint knw wat 2 do...I was confused..I was scared 2 face all u ppl...after all dat I hav done!I was ashamed!!!...i m sorry bhaiya...i m sorry!

Rahul: tanu plz!!!plz stop crying..u don't worry 1 bit..kakul n I will go n talk 2 rohit..v'll make him understand...u don't worry @all...evrythin will b alrite!

Tanu: no bhaiya...nuthin is gonna b fine!!!rohit has deserted me!!when he cud say dat de kid is not his...den hw can I even hope 4 anythin gud 2 happen!

Kakul: no tanu!!!u need not loose hopes...v will try our level best!!!mayb he was pressurized by his parents!v'll try talkin 2 him when he is alone.

Rahul: but u hav 2 promise me 1 thing...u will never repeat this!

Tanu: I wont bhaiya...thnx bhaiya!bhabhi I m sorry dat u I put u in such an embarrassing situation

Kakul: u don't hav 2 say sorry tanu!all u need to do is take care of urself.

Kakul: rahul its too late...u go home n take rest!I will take care of tanu.

Rahul: r u sure?

Kakul nods.

Rahul: (smiles)ok...I'll cum 2mrw morning...tc.

Scene 6: punj house

Rahul enters the house n is confronted by gayu

Gayu: where were u all dis tym?

Rahul: mom...actually...I was

Gayu: tell me de truth rahul!wid whom were u?

Precap:

Kakul: mom...I did not tell dis 2 any1 till now...but I think I shud tell dis 2 u 2day itself!

Devi: wat is it kakul? Is dere nethin rong between u n aman?

Kakul: wat v thought was all rong mom!...aman is a....

Edited by mabel - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i hate it when you guys stop at cliff-hangers! otherwise wonderful i really want to know whats going to happen next-but 1 thing PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE USE PROPER ENGLISH WORDS! It ruins an otherwise wondeful ff! cant wait for more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 fanfic keep it up, ...cnt wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi love it
please in next epi let devi know aman killed naina atleast some1 beside kakun will know and can help her
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Posted: 17 years ago
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absolutly brilliant marble keep up the great work that mean me and elysia and shasha can rest out fingers for a little while lol🤣

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