KDMH Fanfic-ALL FOR YOU MY LOVE(updated page 57) - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mabel

thank u 4 ur positive comments
dont worry honey....
i will update as soon as possible...
actually i am desperate 2 red shasha's ff and she is adamant dat unless she is bribed by every1 she will not continue...
so i was bribing her dis way...
once shasha updates her ff....i will update mine too...i promise!!!

Your welcome for the comments
Shasha's ff is good i understand why ure striking
I saw the bribes on Shasha's post some one even offered her Aamir
She should update fast now
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kiran_1

Your welcome for the comments
Shasha's ff is good i understand why ure striking
I saw the bribes on Shasha's post some one even offered her Aamir
She should update fast now

it was i who did dat!!!!...lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
OMG wen r u gonna update ur story Mabel
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
i give up guys...i will continue waiting 4 shasha's ff update...but wont keep u guys waiting ne longer...
my ff will be updated very soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thats good to kow mable lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
Episode 3:
Scene 1: punj house
Rahul: mom...I was at the basketball court...with naina
Gayu: is it? then why was it that you left the house with kakul?
Rahul: yeah mom...she had to urgently go sumwhere...and aman was
busy so I offered to drop her...thats it
Gayu: then what were you doing with kakul in the hospital?
Rahul: (shocked and wondering what to say) mom?were you following us?
Gayu: (sternly) first answer my question
Rahul: kakul's friend tried to commit suicide...so she wanted to go to the hospital to meet her...thats why...I just accompanied her to give her moral support..and once her friend regained conscience I left.
Gayu: where is kakul right now?
Rahul: she was going to stay back at the hospital
Gayu: okay then...its too late...go to sleep.
Gayu: (2 herself)is rahul telling the truth?? Were they discussing kakul's
pregnancy or her friend's?

Scene 2: in the hospital canteen

Rahul: because of you...my sister is in this state...how can you even think of hurting her?

Rohit: I don't know what to do! I'll have to sacrifice my love...if I want to support my parents...and if I do that...(a brief pause)

Kakul: to support ur parents????what do you mean?common rohit...tell us the truth..we'll help u.

Rohit tells them everything that happened at devi's office.

kakul and rahul are shocked

Kakul: I will handle that problem...but u have to promise me that you will get married to tanu once I solve this problem.

Rohit: I promise bhabhi...even I don't wanna hurt her...but I was in such a situation that...I couldn't do what I really wanted to!

Rahul: do you think devi aunty will agree??

Kakul: don't worry, I'll manage evrything...you just take care of tanu

Kakul is about to leave and her shawl gets stuck on rahul's watch. Both of them try to take it out and end up starin at each other. It felt lyk as if just the 2 of them were present and then suddenly kakul realises wat she was doing and leaves...while rahul just looks on.

Scene 3: devi's office

Devi: kakul beta...how are you??

Kakul: I'm fine mom...but what has happened to you??

Devi: what happened beta?

Kakul: mom...why did you put that condition in front of rohit n his family?

Devi: don't you know why kakul? how can you ask me this question??? I had 1st thought that the law will punish rahul...but I was wrong...nothing of that sort happened...and now I have decided that I will punish him..I will destroy him and his family..I will not spare them for what they did to my naina.

Kakul: but mom?isn't this wrong? What is tanu's fault? How can u punish her for somebody else's fault?

Devi: I know that this is wrong...but kakul everything is fair in love and war...and this is war!!!!

Kakul: but mom?tanu was like your daughter?wasn't she???

Devi: yes kakul...she was...but now she is only rahul's sister...and rahul is my daughter's murderer and I have no other option left but punish him this way!

Kakul: I understand your feelings mom...but there are a lot of things that you don't know!

Devi: what are you saying kakul?I don't understand...

Kakul: mom...I did not tell this to anyone till now...but I think I should tell this to you today itself!

Devi: what is it kakul? Is there anything wrong between you and aman?

Kakul: what we thought was all wrong mom?we failed to identify aman's true face!...he is the one who killed naina!!!...not rahul...it was him!!!

Devi: (shocked) what? What r u saying? Aman! How can it be him??? And why would he kill naina?he never had any problems with her!

Kakul: believe me mom...it was him!! She briefs devi on how she came to know about this and why rahul took all the blame.

precap:

Kakul: yes mom, we will together bring him to justice!!!we'll make him pay for his sins...and we'll have to do sumthing...fast...very fast!

Devi: yes my dear, we will not waste anymore time..I wanna see him behind bars as soon as possible.

Edited by mabel - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
great update Mabel but like Rakun17 its toooo short plz update the next chapter soon, cant wait to read what happens next
Edited by rbb1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: rbb1

great update Mabel but like Rakun17 its toooo short plz update the next chapter soon, cant wait to read what happens next

thanx dear...
i hav edited the thing and made it longer...check it out...hope this is long enough!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
yh i liked reading it , atleast Devi knows now, they can bring him down together
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
rilly nyce update mabel
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