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Khawaish...Pyaar Ki

Khwaish pyaar ki is a story about Love being the first priority in life. Love gives us strength, happiness, and the courage to accomplish something. This is a story has the characters from Maayka'Saath Zindagi Baar Ka with some of my own affects in the characters.

The Khuraana's

Angad: The oldest son of Khuraana Family. He is 24 years old. He is the son of Veer's father and first wife who died when Angad was 5 years old. He never accepted Durga as his mom and neither Veer and Jeet as his brother. Their father is died few years ago so he does not care about anyone. He does not believe in love until he meets'

Veer: A handsome police officer, the second oldest son in the Khuraana House. He is a very responsible guy who respects his parents a lot and loves his brother. Veer also respects Angad a lot. Veer is 22 years old.

Jeet: The youngest son of the Khuraana Family. He is a nice guy respects his parent and older brother Veer. Stands up for everybody's rights. He loves his mom a lot. He is 21 years old.

Shabd: He is very sweet but flirty guy. He likes to flirt with any girl. He is a total player. He is Veer and Jeet's cousin. Durga is his Maasi. He has been living with them since he was 10 years old because his Mom died and his dad left him. He is 22 years old and is very close to Veer.

Durga: She is sweet and caring mother who loves her children equally. She has always had this affection for her son Angad but he has always insulted her and treated her like a stepmother. Veer respects Durga. Durga does love her children a lot but she has some grey-shades which will happen later on in the story.

Anarkali: She is Durga's younger sister. She is very young 5 years older than Veer. She is the side worker for Durga she will show up later. She flirts with guys thinking she is very beautiful. Everybody calls her kali. She is waiting for her Mr. Right.

The Malhotra's

Raaji: The oldest daughter of Brij Malhotra & Moni Malhotra. She is very sweet and quiet. After her parents died in a plane crash she took care of two younger sisters Soni and Mahi. The three sisters have their own little world.

Soni: She is the second youngest daughter. She is very cute and shy. She loves both her sisters and their Mom like Maasi.

Mahi: The youngest daughter of the Malhotra. She is a bubbly and cute girl. Whose life surrounds around her two sisters and Maasi.

Maasi: She is very nice woman she was Moni's sister. She loved her sister a lot and also her daughters.

Authors Note: There will be more Characters in the Future but for know this is what the story surrounds around...Btw Angad is not Indraniel it is Iqbal Khan just incase of confusion...

Hey guys here are the character sketch of Khwaish...Pyaar Ki if you like the concept and characters then please do comment. If you don't like it please so tell me so I won't continue. 😊Btw do tell me if you want me to add pictures:) If i get more than 5 responses I will update tommorow.:)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey i really like it..please continue...but only if you intend on finishing it.i hate it when ppl leave fan fics incomplete in the middle
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Originally posted by: sl032597

hey i really like it..please continue...but only if you intend on finishing it.i hate it when ppl leave fan fics incomplete in the middle

I know I hate that too so manny times i read its just left right there but I intend on finishing....
Thnkss for commentingg
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow...it sounds really nice
Please post your first part really soon..Can't wait for this great FF
wish you all the best and luck
Reena
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow continue soon i really like the concept btw who is mahi paired with angad or shabd sorry but i really want to know lolz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow its great! plz continue soon..is it going to be like the serial khwaish?? i loved that show!! thanxx for the ff...cant wait to read more! 😛
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Originally posted by: jaanlover

Wow...it sounds really nice

Please post your first part really soon..Can't wait for this great FF
wish you all the best and luck
Reena


Thankss...for the luck thats what I need right know;) and I will posting up Part 1 just in few minutes:)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: meharbibi

wow continue soon i really like the concept btw who is mahi paired with angad or shabd sorry but i really want to know lolz

Thankss for liking the concept...Mahi is paired up with ...Time will tell us that thats the fun part if you tell of wont be interesting...;)
Posting up Part 1 in few minutes:)
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Originally posted by: Sweetsana27

wow its great! plz continue soon..is it going to be like the serial khwaish?? i loved that show!! thanxx for the ff...cant wait to read more! 😛

Heyy..thanks for liking it .....Im going to post up Part 1 right know and its somewhat like the serial Khawaish but with my own affects more like Maayka and Kaisa yeh pyaar hain with my affects:)
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Part1:

The Sun has just risen and is shining on the roof of a very big Mansion... Inside there is a very a simple dressed woman …

Durga: Veer, Veer Beta

Jeet: Mama, Bhai Mandir gaya hain

Durga: Soba Soba

Jeet: Aaj voh Angad ka janam din hain isliyeh

Durga: Veer bhi naa

Veer always went to the Mandir on Angad's Birthday to pray for his wellbeing. Veer worshipped his older brother as much as God. To the Mandir…Veer is shown praying

Veer: Eh Wahe Guru mere bhai Angad ki har ek khwaish poori karna useh os insaan she milwu jiseh who apna keh sakeh.

Song Playing in the Back: Sajana hain Mujhe Sajana keh liye
Anarkali is wearing her orange and red combination suit with big earrings and is coming her long curly hair. She looks at the mirror and says to her self

Anarkali: Haye meh marjawa, Mainu koi haak nahee keh meh ini sonii huwa. (I have no right to be so beautiful.)

Here in a room there is an alarm buzzing in this very dark room that has everything but light. It is Angad's room…

Angad: Screams "Meri bottle kahaan hain?"

Servant: Ji Saab

Angad goes to the Washroom and takes a shower with very hot water.

Servant: Saab apka nashta…Saab aap seh ek baat pooch

Angad: Mereh paas zaada waqt nahee hain jaldi pooche

Servant: Aap itneh ameer hain lekin sakhat garam Pani Seh kyun nahhate hain?

Angad: Takeh koi jab mereh saath aag she kehli Mujhe Dard Na hoon *WithPainInTheEyes*

Preview: A small but beautiful house is shown…with a garden full of flowers and we hear a cute voice Mahi…Mahi …Mahi

Author's Note: I just wanted to tell you guys thatAngad sure does not care about anyone...but he just thinks that no one loves thats the reason for his aggnorance...and will change in the future:) Pleasee leave ur comments and you may critize my work ...and pleasee leave a rating out of 10. Feel Free to tell me if you find any mistakes or give me ideas:)

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