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Posted: 2 months ago
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Salutations to all our soldiers

(Soliloquy of a soldier's wife)

This is a tribute to our brave soldiers and their families.👏

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I pushed aside my distress to hear your heroics in the battlefield

And I focused on the route you were gone, my dear

Recalling your warrior stride to take up the heroic action.

Spread my gaze on the path to see you come back.

Come once, riding on my wishes to share your smile.

Come, to rest your head for comfort on my waiting heart.

Blood, Fight, and the surrounding snow mountains...

Death, no one nearby, invincible hope as your friend.

Beyond heaven and hell, to safeguard your mother's pride

Left behind your kith and kin, you marched forward

In this awful darkness... extending my prayers to provide you safety.

Riding over clouds and wading through harsh seas.

Missiles on your shoulders, moving as a valiant soldier.

But, what a fool I am for thinking you as my own.

Calling you back to rest for a while before continuing your stride.

Yes, I am worried about you and your whereabouts.

Yes, my heart is longing to see you... once, once again

Must be sleeping on a hard rock, using the rifle as a pillow.

Counting the stars to make a medallion to adorn your nation!

My only wish at present is come back my dear soldier

To see the glow in your wife's eyes, to caress your child's head

Come back, my dear soldier, to salute the tricolour flag!

With pride, once again, to say Jai Hind.

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Madhuri you wrote this ?

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Originally posted by: Swathi_7

Madhuri you wrote this ?

Of course, Yes. It was written by me.
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Posted: 2 months ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Of course, Yes. It was written by me.


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Posted: 2 months ago
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So powerful, so full of emotion...you’ve captured what so many feel but can’t say.

Truly beautiful smiley27

Here's something I wrote few years back -


you walked into the fire like it was your road

left your name behind and carried only duty

and here I am, still looking at the door

wondering if the wind brings your scent back

or if the stars above you are the same ones above me

come back… just once… let me breathe easy again

Edited by nushhkiee - 2 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
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Originally posted by: nushhkiee

So powerful, so full of emotion...you’ve captured what so many feel but can’t say.

Truly beautiful smiley27

Here's something I wrote few years back -


you walked into the fire like it was your road

left your name behind and carried only duty

and here I am, still looking at the door

wondering if the wind brings your scent back

or if the stars above you are the same ones above me

come back… just once… let me breathe easy again

In a delicate manner, you have wonderfully conveyed deep feelings and hard facts. smiley10smiley32
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Posted: 2 months ago
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Originally posted by: nushhkiee

So powerful, so full of emotion...you’ve captured what so many feel but can’t say.

Truly beautiful smiley27

Here's something I wrote few years back -


you walked into the fire like it was your road

left your name behind and carried only duty

and here I am, still looking at the door

wondering if the wind brings your scent back

or if the stars above you are the same ones above me

come back… just once… let me breathe easy again

Please share the full version here.
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Posted: 2 months ago
#8

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Please share the full version here.

This is all I’ve writtensmiley10

Randomly after I watched the movie Bhuj ... it's not even in rhyme smiley12

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Posted: 2 months ago
#9

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

This is all I’ve writtensmiley10

Randomly after I watched the movie Bhuj ... it's not even in rhyme smiley12

It is an extremely commendable and appreciative expression, relatable to the present situation. smiley10
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Posted: 2 months ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

It is an extremely commendable and appreciative expression, relatable to the present situation. smiley10

Thank you...means a lot !!

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