Beqaraar Dil ~ TalRosh TS | Part 3 (Last) - Pg 9 - Page 10

So beautifully written! You have way with words, mina. I especially loved the way you wrote Talha's confession. It was so heartfelt, could feel his honesty through those words. Finally, a happy ending. Loved it!

Originally posted by: m4manju

So beautifully written! You have way with words, mina. I especially loved the way you wrote Talha's confession. It was so heartfelt, could feel his honesty through those words. Finally, a happy ending. Loved it!

Thank you so much Manju!❤️ This means so much to me. I’m so happy that you enjoyed reading it despite not having watched the show.🥰

Sorry for delay in replying ..I was actually a bit busy with studies and work but I took some time today to read the final part and man this was awesome 🤩🤩🤩I liked this confession too beside the episode one as well. Loved how you wrote about roshi continue to find answers on why Talha is doing this why he is behaving like this when it's only a marriage due to dadajaan. This was missing in episodes..that inner monologue from roshi pov was not shown post the marriage but now I'm fully satisfied after reading this.

I just love your writing mrina😍😍 ..you were able to fill the gaps which we thought were missing from episodes. I'm now more excited to read your new writings. Please do tag me 😁

Originally posted by: serena_shadow

Sorry for delay in replying ..I was actually a bit busy with studies and work but I took some time today to read the final part and man this was awesome 🤩🤩🤩I liked this confession too beside the episode one as well. Loved how you wrote about roshi continue to find answers on why Talha is doing this why he is behaving like this when it's only a marriage due to dadajaan. This was missing in episodes..that inner monologue from roshi pov was not shown post the marriage but now I'm fully satisfied after reading this.

I just love your writing mrina😍😍 ..you were able to fill the gaps which we thought were missing from episodes. I'm now more excited to read your new writings. Please do tag me 😁

Serenaaa!🥹🥰 Thank you so much for taking out time and reading. I hope it was worth it.

I’m so glad you enjoyed the confession. I really did miss Roshi’s POV in the show post marriage so I really wanted to make sure I add that. I also missed the fact that Roshi never pushed or probed Talha more about why he married her! It was very unlike Roshi because originally she is a person who wants answers and wants discussions.🙂‍↔️

I’m so happy that you like my writing. It means the world to me that my friends and readers enjoy what I write.😁

I’m working on my next TalRosh story. It’s a AU fanfic.☺️

Sorry for the delay

Minu just loved it. That confession was sooo beautiful

Originally posted by: NINALOGY

Sorry for the delay

Minu just loved it. That confession was sooo beautiful

Thank you so much meri pyaari Ninu.

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain,

Jaane kya bole mann, dole sunke badan,

Dhadkan bani zubaan...

Hey Favourite Person,

This is what I felt was playing in the background towards the end of the chapter...

I liked the fact that Talha actually apologised for his rudeness and gave her a chance to forgive him. Unlike the show where the verbal apology was brushed under the carpet, but his actions spoke his words and her gestures showed that she forgave.

I loved the fact that Talha explained his part of the story himself. It was not the third person who knocked sense in Roshi... I wish she was that sensible there in the show and Talha quicker in explaining his part of the story; it would have resulted in the beautiful scene that you've etched here...

This short story was a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for putting in efforts for this beautiful piece... I love it that you've patched up the parts skipped in the show, and now it looks complete.

Lots of love to you

Your favourite person

Mrini Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Finally hum aagaye hain yahan!

I'm soooooooooooooooooo sorry for the delay in commenting Damn my job for keeping so busy!

But let me dive straight into the chapter now!

First of all, THANK YOU FOR GIVING US A WALIMA SCENE! I don't know why the makers never gave us one

Poor Roshi, lost in Talha's words from before. But I'm not surprised. If Talha had said he wanted to marry me, I'd be thinking about it all the time.

Also, Talha, ever the gentleman, asked her if she was tired. Yes, Talha Ahmad. She's tired of trying to figure you out! Go get straight with her, and put her out of her misery!

And the bedroom conversation... that was much needed! I loved every bit of it!

Oh. My. God. 😭❤️ This conversation absolutely shattered me in the best possible way!! I don’t even know where to begin — the emotions, the writing, the depth — everything was perfection. You've truly outdone yourself with this one.

Talha baring his heart out to Roshi. Him talking about the accident and how he felt he didn't deserve her. It just broke me! I could literally picture Ahad acting his heart out in this scene!

I was holding my breath through most of the confrontation and confession, and by the end, I had literal goosebumps. And the way you explored Talha's vulnerability — it’s so raw and real. I don’t know how you do it, but you make us feel everything that the character is going through.

Thank you for gifting us another gem, Mrinu Di — I really can’t wait to see what’s next in our TalRosh journeyyyy! Don't ever stop writing!

Lots of Love to you,

Aapki Choti Behen,

Niya❤️

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain,

Jaane kya bole mann, dole sunke badan,

Dhadkan bani zubaan...

Hey Favourite Person,

This is what I felt was playing in the background towards the end of the chapter...

I liked the fact that Talha actually apologised for his rudeness and gave her a chance to forgive him. Unlike the show where the verbal apology was brushed under the carpet, but his actions spoke his words and her gestures showed that she forgave.

I loved the fact that Talha explained his part of the story himself. It was not the third person who knocked sense in Roshi... I wish she was that sensible there in the show and Talha quicker in explaining his part of the story; it would have resulted in the beautiful scene that you've etched here...

This short story was a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for putting in efforts for this beautiful piece... I love it that you've patched up the parts skipped in the show, and now it looks complete.

Lots of love to you

Your favourite person

Hey Favourite Person!🤗

Thank you so much my dear dost. I’m so glad to hear that you enjoyed reading the story. Yesss… I literally worked on all the complaints I had with the show and made up the scenes according to what I thought should have happened.🥹

A verbal apology should definitely have been there in the show coz the way he disrespected her was just unacceptable.😔

Love you so much ❤️

Your favourite person.

Originally posted by: LadyWhistledown

Mrini Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Finally hum aagaye hain yahan!

I'm soooooooooooooooooo sorry for the delay in commenting Damn my job for keeping so busy!

But let me dive straight into the chapter now!

First of all, THANK YOU FOR GIVING US A WALIMA SCENE! I don't know why the makers never gave us one

Poor Roshi, lost in Talha's words from before. But I'm not surprised. If Talha had said he wanted to marry me, I'd be thinking about it all the time.

Also, Talha, ever the gentleman, asked her if she was tired. Yes, Talha Ahmad. She's tired of trying to figure you out! Go get straight with her, and put her out of her misery!

And the bedroom conversation... that was much needed! I loved every bit of it!

Oh. My. God. 😭❤️ This conversation absolutely shattered me in the best possible way!! I don’t even know where to begin — the emotions, the writing, the depth — everything was perfection. You've truly outdone yourself with this one.

Talha baring his heart out to Roshi. Him talking about the accident and how he felt he didn't deserve her. It just broke me! I could literally picture Ahad acting his heart out in this scene!

I was holding my breath through most of the confrontation and confession, and by the end, I had literal goosebumps. And the way you explored Talha's vulnerability — it’s so raw and real. I don’t know how you do it, but you make us feel everything that the character is going through.

Thank you for gifting us another gem, Mrinu Di — I really can’t wait to see what’s next in our TalRosh journeyyyy! Don't ever stop writing!

Lots of Love to you,

Aapki Choti Behen,

Niya❤️

Niyaaaa

I am honestly overwhelmed by your words of appreciation. Thank you so so much my darling girl.🥹 I’m so glad you enjoyed reading it and that you loved it so much.🥰

I am working on my next TalRosh story along with some oneshots as well. Currently working on my version of the continuation of the rain sequence.😏🤭😉

Lots of love right back to you,

Tumhari Badi Behen,

Mrinu di 🩷