MRINU DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
I LOVED THISSSSSSSSSS
I know... I know... I'm late as usual
But, my stupid office trip came in the way, and I haven't been online in a loooooooooong time!
But, now that I'm here, I have a lot to sayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
Coming to the 2nd Chapter, Roshi yaaaaaarr! Itna attitude!
Talha Pookie kitna koshish kar raha hai bechara!
I love how Talha is dealing with her in this light-hearted, teasing way, and his amusement at her annoyance. Banda knows that she'll come along one day
And I loved the way he uses Baba and Mohid's names unflinchingly to get his wayyyy... smart husband
And Rosh, how long will you lieeee? Kya tum sach mein sirf Baba ke liye yeh sab kar rahe ho
Talha reaction when he sees Rosh in her Walima outfit... Hayeeeeeeee
And Roshi... you know that Talha's complements are real! Ab bano mat! Aur kitna tadpaaoge meri Talha ko
Bechara!
But Mrinu Di... the way you've incorporated those subtle inner thoughts Roshi, that she is on her way to acceptance *chef's kiss*
This is such a wonderful piece of writing, but it's toooooooo short
I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Love,
Niya
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