CID Episode 8 - Bank Robbery - 12th January - Page 4

Originally posted by: Ekaurlekhak

Aaj ka episode Maine likha tha. Hope you guys liked it if any pointers for me most welcome. Hope to write more and create more suspense.

This episode was pretty good, though I felt like there were some logic gaps involving Purvi’s injury. Also I wonder why the Shreya Purvi convo wasn’t included in this episode despite being a part of the teaser. The recap deduction scene was nice as it reminded me of season 1.

Originally posted by: Ekaurlekhak

Aaj ka episode Maine likha tha. Hope you guys liked it if any pointers for me most welcome. Hope to write more and create more suspense.

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Honestly the story was really good but not executed very well...felt very rushed

it wasn't an impressive execution..it just fell flat..even the criminals weren't impressive & did the usual rhona-dhona after committing the kaand..4/10

Personally I think you all have been too critical on this episode. It was fine. I knew Satish was involved in some way but didn’t expect the girl.

Originally posted by: WolfieCandy5

Khalifokat itna buildup kiya iss episode ka...

I mean... I have a lot of complaints

1)Next up mein jab aaj ke episode ka promo aaya tha there was a scene of Purvi and Shreya...where was it today??

2)Purvi ko thoda dhakka lagke girne pe hath and kamar ko itna laga ki bandage and patta lagana pada? And fir bhi she was moving ekdum normal...type bhi aaram se kar rahi thi

3) 2 baar sir pe maara and no khun? Also first time jab uthi Satish ko band ke rakha tabhi cid walo ko inform nahi kar sakti thi? She knew all abt Satish right

4) How the hell did they get Purvi out of the cement without a single kharoch??

5)Today I didn't feel the story was very fun I mean jyada kuch samjha hi nahi

Looks like we have to assume that they tried a lot to get Purvi out of the cement. Dikhate nahi hai kyu ki episode aur Iamba ho jayega given runtime is 60 minutes Kya hai na jab cement se nikalna padta hai na to pura nahana padta hai aur pura scene nahi dikha pa sakte You have to assume all these things.

Originally posted by: stan_co4

Personally I think you all have been too critical on this episode. It was fine. I knew Satish was involved in some way but didn’t expect the girl. Well we now have our first episode of this season with two khoonis.

yeah my memory def isn’t doing well. We have had multiple khooni episodes already in this season.

Originally posted by: KuchToGadbadHai

Looks like we have to assume that they tried a lot to get Purvi out of the cement. Dikhate nahi hai kyu ki episode aur Iamba ho jayega given runtime is 60 minutes Kya hai na jab cement se nikalna padta hai na to pura nahana padta hai aur pura scene nahi dikha pa sakte You have to assume all these things.

yeah I feel like episodes have been super fact paced and audience need to figure of some stuff by their own too.

Hi good morning

Yday episode was like previous seasons episode

Lot of dishoom dishoom

Absence of forensic

Purvi mystery injury

Perhaps auto repair ho gayi

Satish I had doubt coz of eyes

The man in mask eyes were visible.

I don't get it. How did they figure it was Satish

Plus purvi phone in truck

So how did Cid reach correct location

Originally posted by: Ekaurlekhak

Aaj ka episode Maine likha tha. Hope you guys liked it if any pointers for me most welcome. Hope to write more and create more suspense.

You were the one who wrote it?? Wow!!

It was a good script. Yes, there were a bit of loopholes but then which script doesn't have it? At least you tied up all the loose ends by the end.

I do have one thing to say though... I hope you don't find me rude. Its just my personal opinion, nothing against you.

The reason for the partnership between that Satish and Rahul's SIL was a little bit weak. In my opinion, a simpler but strong reason would have been to show them as cousins/old friends or maybe they met in the gambling den and had an affair which Rahul found out and was blackmailing them. So, they planned this robbery and also killed him in retaliation.

Just my thoughts... I hope I didn't appear rude to you. Because you did do a good job with the writing.