Abhijeet - Shruti fanfic

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey people..
I took a vacation bt the only thought in my mind then was all the weird sensations I could feel between Abhijeet and Shruti...so then I just decided to give it a perfect fit.

The story is thriller...and I have tried my best to get it to CID level..I mean one of the deadliest episodes...with a huge plot...hope u will like it...

Sorry for creating a new forum...dont close it please! Close it once the whole story is posted.. 😃
hope u will like the story...do tell how did u like it..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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The Case of the widow's husband

Its 4 am in the morning and Abhijeet is still workin on his laptop. He hadnt slept the whole night but was checking Police Reports about a case. However he couldnt find any worth studying results. Only it was mentioned that the culprit died in a road accident and hence the case was closed without any further investigations or details.
It was a 5 month old incident where jewellery worth crores was stolen from an International exhibition and immediately was sold separately in various parts of the world. The money so obtained was converted into diamonds within a matter of hours, after that. This was the biggest robbery ever committed with at least 15000 people involved directly or indirectly with just one Master Mind.
Last evening, ACP received a call from CID headquarters informing him that the master mind is an Indian and suspected to currently operate from Pune This information was provided by Intelligence Beaureu [I.B.] (don't mind the spelling please) 3 months back. Immediately the local Police and special Police was set to the case.
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One CID inspector Rajeev, who was on this case, seemed to have solved the cast. Rajeev had a huge network of informants and within a week he seemed to have found the master mind but he didn't inform the headquarters immediately. He asked for a day's time so he could confirm his report before sending it in. He was granted the time.
But the report never came in and neither did Rajeev. Rajeev had gone to meet one of his informants but never returned. 2 days later, the file came to Rajeev's assistant Kanya by post, who had been helping on the cast but Rajeev hadn't disclosed the true identity of the master mind to her either. The file contained Rajeev's reports on the case but Kanya immediately figured some papers to be missing. Along with them was a letter written in Rajeev's handwriting which read –

"Culprit dead in road accident. CASE CLOSED"

One week later Rajeev's dead body was found outside a church fully stained in blood. Kanya knew her boss better to believe that he could so mysteriously close a case. Someone must surely have surely made him write the letter, before killing him. So, she secretly worked on this case alone
She found out that Rajeev had gone to meet his informant Ayush, who was manager of a resort. However, Ayush to died the same day, Rajeev had gone to meet him, in road accident. Ayush's wife and daughter had moved out of the city. When it seemed a dead end, Kanya turned into the headquarters with her work and that of Rajeev's. But 3 days after that, she too disappeared.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The headquarters studied the case and too smelt something fishy. Hence they decided to hand this case to CID mumbai and also send Senior Inspector Vaibhav and Inspector Sheetal to help them with the case.
Regarding this, ACP had asked all his team members to collect as much information as possible about this. Kaveri, Lavanya, Vivek and Freddie were sent to Pune to investigate about Rajeev, Kanya, Ayush and other useful information. Daya was sent to the headquarters to collect Rajeev's body along with Dr. Tarika and also the full report of the case. Vaibhav and Sheetal were to also accompany Daya and Tarika on the way back.
Meanwhile, ACP contacted all his known people working on the same case to collect information and Abhijeet was to collect all information about the case published by the media.

But Abhijeet couldn't concentrate at all. The reason was his friend, Viren , who too lived in Pune and had also died 3 months back in a road mishap. Abhijeet and Viren were very good friends since college, both with highly sharp minds and strong determination. When they both graduated, everyone was sure that they both would join Police but unlike Abhijeet, Viren joined as a manager in a bank. This didn't make much difference, they were still best friends and spent lot of time together but as Abhijeet's skills fetched him more duties and responsibilities, he soon found less time for his friends. One day, Viren announced that he was transferred to Bhopal.
The news fell upon the 2 friends as thundering. What if not like before, but they were still together and could always spend time talking to each other while they were room-mates. But that wasn't possible now. The friendship became distant and later extinct. Abhijeet received promotion and became very busy and soon forgot about the pain of departing from a dear friend but never forgot his friend.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very well written Shruti...... wish to see it as a case........ do write more, o.k? can't wait to read more..... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thnks a ton...I will post...definitely 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awsome shruti!!
waiting for more!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnks..rite now m writing the update..I will add more here after I right the update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: luna_lovegood

thnks..rite now m writing the update..I will add more here after I right the update

hey..yea..cant wait!

story has already kept me very interested!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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7 years later, one day when Abhijeet was preparing to sleep after a whole day's hard work, the door bell rang. He answered it to find Viren standing there. Abhijeet tried to contact Viren manier times but had always got a cold response. So now he wasn't very excited but surely happy to see his old friend. Viren hugged his friend and said "Andar nahi bulayega kya? Itna gussa hai?"

Abhijeet smiled and let Viren in.

Viren – "Main jaanta hoon tu naraaz hai par main ky karta?"

None of them spoke for a while and then Viren continued – "Tu toh jaanta hai na yaar main bhi tere saath CID join karna chahta tha par phir ek din daddy ka phone aaya. Unki tabiyat bigadne lagi thi toh unhone mujhse kaha ki who chahte hain ki main uka business sambhaloin aur iske liye mujhe experienced hona zaroori hai. Is karan maine bank mein job ki. Bank mein khoob success mili par humesha tujhse jealoused tha kyunki chahe tere paas khoob paise na the par tu who kar raha tha jo tu karna chahta tha aur khush tha…
Bhopal mein kayi ameer aur ambitious log mile. Unke saath dosti kar lee par kabhi tere jaisa dost na mila. Main mehnat se kamata aur wohh sab enjoy karte; phir bhi maine kabhi kuch nahi kaha. Par 3 saal pehle unhone meri saari savings dhoke se apne naam kar leeaur bhaag gaye…
Us din dost teri yaad bahut aayi. Tab bhi himmat nahi hari. 3 saal jee – jaan laga kar mehnat kari. Pichle mahine suna ki jin chaaroin ne mujhe dhoke se loota tha, who chaaro mare gaye. Police ko pata chala ki unhone kayi logoin ko aise thaga tha aur shayad isiliye kisi ne unhein maar diya…
Abhijeet, sach kehta hoon dost, us din mann mein bade ajeeb khayal aaye. Lag raha tha ki un logoin ke saath reh kar kahin main bhi un sa na ho jaun."

After saying all this, Viren started crying. Abhijeet hugged his friend and said "Paagal hai kya tu? Yeh tera hi toh ghar hai. Tu aaj bhi mera wahi sabse acha dost hai. Aaram se ruk yahan"

Viren smiled for a while but then got tensed again…Abhijeet noticed this
Abhijeet – "Arre..kya hua?"
Viren – " Yaar main chah kar bhi yahan ruk nahi sakta?"
Abhijeet – "par kyu?"
Viren – "Pitaji ne agle mahine meri shaadi taya kar di hai."

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