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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
OMGGG aweusmmm fan-fic. shruti
veryyy thrilling
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
sure I will post the whole thing soon...lemme tell u its a really vast plot
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
great story Shruti......so thrilling it is.......do continue very very soon........I really wish to see it as a case....
keep continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
Kaveri – "sir…"

ACP – "haan..Kaveri bolo" and turns back to face her.
Kaveri – "sir…chori karne ke baad bhi yeh X exhibition mein roz gaya, bina kisi darr ke, isse 2 cheezein pata chalti hain –
Ek toh usse apne plan par bahut bharosa tha aur doosra who saare kaam akele khud karna pasand karta hai."

Sheetal – "yes sir. Aur yeh bhi ki jaise raatoin – raat, usne jewellery gayab kar lee, usse zaroor har security measure ki jankari hogi."

ACP – "par yeh toh namumkin hai. Security toh khud humari CID, U.K police aur Russian Intelligence ne ki thi. Security plans toh sirf in 3 agencies ke selected officers ke paas the."

Freddie – "sir…mujhe lagta hai…"

ACP – "haan aage bolo"

Freddie – "sir mujhe lagta hai ki X ka ek saathi in teeno organisations mein se kisi ek mein zaroor hoga."

Vaibhav – "Ye kya mazaak hai? Itni reputed agencies mein sirf desh ke liye marne wale hote hain…desh drohi nahi."

ACP – "nahi Vaibhav…kai baar kida apne target ko andar se hi khokla karta hai."

Abhijeet – "sir mujhe lagta hai ki hume Pune jaana chahiye. Wahin par kuch aur pata chalega."

Daya – "sir mujhe bhi yahi theek lagta hai. Directly to X tak pahunchna mushkil hai. Pehle uske uske saathiyoin ko pakadte hain aur unke zariye us tak pahunchte hain."

ACP – "Haan…yeh theek lagta hai."

Sheetal – "Par sir agar sab gaye toh ho sakta hai baat spread ho jaaye…after all X ka network kafi bada hai."

ACP – "Good point Sheetal. Main bhi yahi soch raha tha. Ek kaam karo, Abhijeet, Daya, Kaveri aur Lavanya (they step forward)…tum chaaroin Pune jaao aur Abhijeet tumhara dost..umm kya naam tha..haan Viren…jo marr gaya par tumne usse dekha hai…usske bare mein chaan-been karne ki acting karo."

Abhijeet gets disturbed hearing that ACP knows about Viren and gives Daya dangerous looks and hopes ACP knows nothing of Shruti. But he knew Daya good enough to say that Daya wouldn't have said anything about Shruti to ACP.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ACP – "Freddie…tum aur Vivek, Mumbai mein jitne chor iss chori mein shamil the unhein pakdo. Sab informers ko bulao aur unse poocho. Koi bhi chootna nahi chahiye. Aur Vaibhav aur Sheetal Pune jaakar chooroin ko pakdenge…saath – saath Rajeev ke informers ko dhoondenge."

Silence…no one speaks…all look at each other except ACP who is deep thinking..

ACP – "chooroin ko pakadenge to X ko lagega ki hazaroin chor pakadte pakadte hum ustak kabhi nahi pahunch paayenge…Par tab tak Rajeev ka murder case of iss robbery case, hum kafi aage badh chuke honge.
Tum sab aaj hi kaam par lag jao par haan informers ke agar tum milte ho toh iski khabar kisi ko na lage. Tum sab sirf chor pakad rahe ho.
…Aur haan…koi bhi..koi information kisi written form mein nahi rakhega. Koi baat batani ho toh forensic mein Dr. Tarika ko bata do, wohh mujhe bata degi…mujhe directly yahan par ya mobile par koi phone nahi karega ya ek doosre ko bhi."

Freddie – "Par sir, Dr. Tarika ko kyun?"

ACP – "Freddie kyunki Forensic ke phone tape nahi ho sakte. Koi CID ke andar gaddar chupa ho toh wohh humare phone tape kar sakta hai…par forensic ke nahi…toh chalo sab kaam par lago."

Everyone turns to leave. Abhijeet catches up with Daya for wanting a word but –

ACP – "Abhijeet…"

Abhijeet stops on the way and turns back

Abhijeet – "ji sir."

ACP goes to Abhijeet and looks straight into Abhijeet's face. Abhijeet looks straight back. Daya stops near by not to leave Abhijeet alone which ACP notices.

ACP – "Daya tum chalo, Abhijeet aa raha hai."

Daya nods and walks out of the office but waits for Abhijeet in the corridor.
ACP sees Daya leave and then talks to Abhijeet.

ACP – "kya baat hai Abhijeet? Aajkal bahut pareshan dikhte ho?"

Abhijeet cant look back straight at ACP anymore, he bends his head and looks at the floor as if like a child in punishment.

Abhijeet – "nahi sir…kuch bhi nahi."

ACP – "muje Daya ne kaha ki tumhare dosh ki maut ho gayi hai aur tumne usse dekha, isiliye tum disturbed ho…par mujhe nahi lagta…baat kuch aur hai…kyu?"

Abhijeet was relieved to know that ACP had no idea about Shruti plot. But at the moment he had no answer to ACP either.

Abhijeet – "nahi sir…aur toh koi khaas baat nahi hai."

ACP – "Abhijeet…itne saaloin se saath kaam karne ke baad bhi kya tumhe lagta hai main nah jaan paunga ki koi baat tumhe sata rahi hai? Pata nahi tumhe kya pareshani hai? Ya tum aur Daya mujhe sach kya nahi bata rahe…"

Silence…

ACP – "haan par koi bhi problem ho toh hum sab hain tumhare saath. Isiliye mann mein koi baat mat rakhna. Chalo mood theek karo aur kaam par la jao. Tum logoin ko aaj hi Pune pahunchna hai. Wahan par tumhari help ke liye Rajeev ki poori team hogi par unhein lagta hai tum Viren ke bare mein investigate kar rahe ho. Unhein pata mat lagne dena ki tum asal mein robbery ke case par kaam kar rahe ho."
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Abhijeet was seriously something much more than 'just shocked'. He was completed startled…didn't know what to say or how to react…all he did was stared ACP with big eyes in surprise. ACP smiled and left.
Everyone knew that ACP cared a lot for his team but it was actually the first time in years tat he would have shown it. Abhijeet had never seen ACP like this to anyone..not to his son either.

Anyways the totally amazed Abhijeet, walked out of the room to find Daya waiting for him. Daya had heard what ACP had said and was equally amazed if not more.
They both went to Daya's place to pack things and later to Abhijeet's. When Abhijeet announced that he had to go to Pune as CID decided to investigate Viren's death, Shruti was surprised but she was scared.
While Daya and Abhijeet packed Abhijeet's bag and Abhijeet's room, Shruti came to the room. She stood at the door silently till Daya noticed her and nudged Abhijeet.

Abhijeet – "Shruti ji aap? Koi kaam tha?"

Shruti looked extremely scared and not at all her usual self.
Abhijeet was little surprised to see Shruti there and much more surprised to see her scared. He secretly wished to go away quickly as then he wouldn't see Shruti and could possibly forget her and free him of the feelings he has suddenly developed towards her.

Shruti – "aap log Viren ka case kyun investigate kar rahe hain? Jab Police ke hisab se yeh ek accident tha toh ab ismein investigate karne ko kya hai?"

Abhijeet opens his mouth to speaking thinking hard what to say but Daya stops him as Daya feared that Abhijeet might tell Shruti the real purpose for them going to Pune which couldn't really harm them but any kind of risks couldn't be afforded in this case atleast.

Daya – "Shruti ji, cheezein humesha waisi nahi hoti jaisi dikhti hain. Dariye mat…hum bas thodi chaan-been karne hi toh jaa rahe hain."

And what Shruti speaks next…gets the two indeed shocked…

Shruti – "kahi aap dono exhibition se hui chori ka case toh nahi solve kar rahe?"

Abhi and Daya are surprised and then Abhijeet remembers that he hadn't shut the computer in the morning when Shruti was in the room and he had gone to the washroom.

Abhijeet – "nahi..par Shruti aap us case ke bare mein kya jaanti hai aur aise kyun pooch rahi hain?"

Shruti gets on the verge of crying, shouting..howling..out LOUD..she is extremely frightened. Abhijeet and Daya exchange looks.

Shruti – "Abhijeet ji yeh case bahut khatarnaal hai…bahut khatra hai ismein…main aapse keh rahi hoon agar aap us case mein hain toh usse chod dijiye aur Viren ki maut bhi bhool jayiye. Jo nahi hai, uske liye jaan gawani bewakoofi hai…main keh rahi hoon aapse…main keh rahi hoon"

And saying this..she left the room and ran towards hers and bolted it shut from inside. Abhijeet went after her but couldn't stop her…he called her from outside to open the door but she didnt
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Abhijeet and Daya are in their jeep with Kaveri and Lavanya at the back seat. Abhijeet and Daya are unusually quite as they are still thinking about Shruti's unexpected behaviour. When Abhijeet checks that the girls are busy with their talks, Abhijeet seized a chance to talk to Daya.

Abhijeet – "Daya tujhe lagta hai ki Viren ki maur road accident main nahi hui..par kuch aur hi chakkar hai?"

Daya – "Haan boss. Kuch toh hai warna Shruti aise toh reach nahi karti..zaroor wohh in choriyoin ke bare mein bhi kuch janti hai."

Abhijeet is deeply thinking. When Abhijeet doesn't say anything for a while, Daya looks at him to find him worried.

Daya – "Kya hua?"

Abhijeet – "Tumhe theek lagta hai agar hum…I mean main Viren ki maut ke bare mein investigate karun?"

They both look at each other but no one speaks.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
going strong...very strong........keep posting more 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
very well done shruti!
waiting for more...
this is so interesting 😃 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^^ yea..shes an amazing writer..kept me very well in the story

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