A Broken Stringed Guitar - Page 3

Originally posted by: Nush_Rat

This was absolutely brilliant Tanu! Heartbreakingly beautiful! 😭 🥺 🥺 🥺 😭

Such a short piece yet you brought out her pain so effectively! The inclusion of rain added a different layer to it.

Amazing! ❤️

Keep writing more dear! 😊

Thank You 🙏

Will certainly try 📖

Originally posted by: Shri_12

That was such a great piece of writing 👏

Friendly suggestion: that he/she/they kinda gives away the plot that the protagonist is dreaming/hallucinating. Instead just stick to they or it.

Thank You 🙏 Suggestion duly noted 📝

I'll keep it in mind and edit it in my piece 👍

Tanuuu🤗

You’re back with your writing 🥳

For a moment I thought the protagonist is having some happy emotions but then it took a complete u-turn! Nicely done there buddy, seriously!

Keep writing and thanks for the pm🤗❤️ Keep them coming

Originally posted by: SRKian

Tanuuu🤗

You’re back with your writing 🥳

For a moment I thought the protagonist is having some happy emotions but then it took a complete u-turn! Nicely done there buddy, seriously!

Keep writing and thanks for the pm🤗❤️ Keep them coming

Thank You 🙏

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Look forward to your review 😳

I loved it

I had forgotten how good you are with words

It's awesome ❤️

I could feel all her pain & that makes you a brilliant writer

Originally posted by: la_Reine

I loved it

I had forgotten how good you are with words

Thank You 🙏

Originally posted by: Majnu_Bhai

It's awesome ❤️

I could feel all her pain & that makes you a brilliant writer

Thank You 🙏

Writing is something that really gives meaning to my life 😳

Originally posted by: Sutapasima

Thank You 🙏