A Broken Stringed Guitar - Page 2

This is an amazing piece of writing.❤️

Am so happy you shared your creation here 🤗

Originally posted by: Sutapasima

This is an amazing piece of writing.❤️

Am so happy you shared your creation here 🤗

Thank You 🙏

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

I will, surely 📖

Originally posted by: SassyPoet

You're welcome!

Wow another story by you after so long

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Originally posted by: la_Reine

Wow another story by you after so long

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Look forward to your review 😳

Oye Tannu..!

Nice one my dear.. I read it twice and let it sink in..

It gave me the chills.. Goosebumps.. Angst indeed!

Without giving away too many details, you made me paint a picture of an emotion, a painful one. For me, this was a scene in black and white..

Hope you feel motivated and inspired and that you will treat us more on such jewels.. I am always the selfish one, who wants more and more.. ❤️😏💞

This was absolutely brilliant Tanu! Heartbreakingly beautiful! 😭 🥺 🥺 🥺 😭

Such a short piece yet you brought out her pain so effectively! The inclusion of rain added a different layer to it.

Amazing! ❤️

Keep writing more dear! 😊

That was such a great piece of writing 👏

Friendly suggestion: that he/she/they kinda gives away the plot that the protagonist is dreaming/hallucinating. Instead just stick to they or it.

Originally posted by: RishuDarling

Oye Tannu..!

Nice one my dear.. I read it twice and let it sink in..

It gave me the chills.. Goosebumps.. Angst indeed!

Without giving away too many details, you made me paint a picture of an emotion, a painful one. For me, this was a scene in black and white..

Hope you feel motivated and inspired and that you will treat us more on such jewels.. I am always the selfish one, who wants more and more.. ❤️😏💞

Thank You 🙏

I really appreciate your encouragement ✨️

Will try 📖