Shiva-Raavi OS: Fierce - Page 3

Thank you! ❤️

I am glad you liked this Shiva. 😃

Originally posted by: mandira2

Le lo… mera dil lelo behen ❤️ It was SO GOODDDD AHHHHH 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

OMG where do I even start? From the very beginning to the end, I was so hooked to this piece! I am in love with your writing style! Everything you penned down went straight to the heart! The dialogues in this piece should have a seperate fan base ☺️ I JUST LOVED THE DIALOGUES!!!

“Iss Shiva ko sirf uski Gauri bahar la sakti hai”

This dialogue is so true. Only Raavi has this power over Shiva and nothing in this world can match her power over him. Not even Susu or Dhara.

Raavi was so on point! I love this Raavi and I want more of this Raavi!! She’s just everything I’ve always wanted Raavi to be. Fierce. Determined. Aware of her value. Ready to FIGHT for herself!! oh god how I enjoyed this version of Raavi! The way she explained her hurt had me experience the dreadful year once again… omg even reading about Disha makes me scared to this day 😭😭😭 Raavi’s POV was written supremely well!! I’m so happy that you didn’t make her melt as soon as Shiva proposed to her!

And Shiva?? Wowie! I loved this version of Shiva as well! I just loved how he became a sponge in this piece, soaking in Raavi’s complains, anger, hurt, and regret. And I’m glad that he’s willing to fight for his relationship! Aakhir ladka dheet hai 😚 loved how the proposal happened in front of the whole family!! Now they will remember that Raavi Pandya will ALWAYS be the first priority for Shiva Pandya 😳

Also, I’m so glad you chose to keep the family dynamics intact! I have always loved the bonding between the Pandya members! But now the show has completely ruined everything. Reading about Rishita offering logical advices to Raavi, Gautam and Dhara being mature and Krish adding some fun jokes here and there (that are appropriate) was so nice!


AND yes, Susu, you should definitely go on that tirth yatra 😃👍🏼 please contact me if you want any sponsors for your trip 🥰

Thanks for this wonderful OS! Also, thanks for tagging ❤️

Thank you so much!! ❤️

I am so glad you loved the dialogues. I was kind of wondering at one point if there were too many, but Raavi had to voice all of it.

We've all been rooting for Raavi's self-respect, so I just had to include it. In my opinion, Raavi has always had self-respect, but she chooses to set it aside every time because her want for a family is much more deeply-rooted in her.

I'm glad you enjoyed Shiva's reactions, and also the family's reactions. Even I loved the initial family bonding till the show ruined it.

Suman Kaki ka undecided hai. I'm not sure I want her to escape the war zone yet. 😉

Thanks for the wonderful comment! ❤️

Unressed on PAGE ONE. ❤️

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

It was beyond awesome 🥰🥰

Loved the confrontation each and every word was so true.........

Shiva and the realisation was something we all were looking for so far and it not only included tge recent deeds but also everything he did from tge startinh.....

Loved rhis😘😘

Thank you!! ❤️

I'm glad you enjoyed this. 😃

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

OMG, V🥳🥳

This was AH-MAZING!!!! Omg, I absolutely loved this OS very very very much.❤️❤️❤️😆 After a long time, I love the kaandya family.😆 You nailed everyone's character traits. Honestly, This should've been shown in the show. The audience would've definitely loved this. This OS had everything I wanted and more.

Thank you for taking the time to make this fantastic piece and Thank you for the tag😳

PS: Mujhe Sequel chahiye😆

Thank you so much, Pooh! 🤗

I'm glad you enjoyed the "masterpiece". Now that you've said it, I'm going to use it. 😎 😃

Sequel ke liye disclaimer padhiye, on the first page. 😆

But I do have a few ideas for it. So maybe soon. ❤️

P.s. Love the gifs. 😆

Originally posted by: mpks1

Vandana, thanks for tagging!❤️

First of all this is a fantastic OS! 👏 I am glad you wrote this because we will never see this in the show. Raavi’s feelings are never addressed and as a character she is taken for granted by every single person in Pandya parivar.

Finally Shiva had to hear what all Raavi went through because of him for the past year. He almost ruined her life and continues to be oblivious to his wrong doings and justifying it all saying she deserved better, Raavi rightly said, who the heck is he to decide what’s right for her.

Raavi has been truthful and sincere about this marriage ever since the kidnapping misunderstanding was cleared in Mukteshwar. Even before that she defended him against Mami’s and Anita’s taunts and later against her own friends. But for him her life has been a bargaining chip where he thought could get his way. She us also right about him not standing up for her against his family members. She has always been made a scape goat and every single family member took out their bhadas on her especially Shiva, Suman and Rishita.
Anyway I am glad Raavi got it off her chest and firmly believes Shiva doesn’t deserve her love and sincerity.
Shiva has made too many mistakes, one life time is not enough to rectify it all. This time he is determined to win her over because he finally realized he has wronged her big time. I am curious to read what he is going to do to make it upto her (No pressure to write part -2 of this OS😆)

As for the family, finally they are all going to be spectators of this war between Shiva- Raavi, especially Suman, Dhara and Rishita, all 3 interfered a bit too much.
Both are dheet- Raavi is determined to get divorced from him and Shiva is determined not to let her go this time.

Thank you so much, Akka!! 🤗

Honestly, this was my thought process when I was writing Raavi's outburst. Shiva deserved to hear it all from her, and know exactly the damage he's caused.

This Raavi is done with all his nonsense, and she's no longer going to be adjusting or forgiving. Shiva is going to have to belo-fy a lot of papad to win over this Raavi, not to mention also a lot of patience. 😆

I do have a few ideas for the sequel, so this may come soon. 😳

Suman Kaki may get caught in the line of fire, but I'll probably leave the other two out of it (not decided though). I really liked the bahu gang dynamics, after the engagement fiasco and before Dhara's pregnancy termination. So that's what I thought I'll use.

It's going to Dheet vs. Dheet, except one of them is also a kam**na. 😆

Originally posted by: Kfof

Loved it 😍❤❤❤

Thank you, Kshama! ❤️